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[Max]

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: No. Kasoria already received rewards for this thread he said via Wealth Request submission.

Thread: Squatters (Maxine) [Wealth Thread]
City/Area: Rharne

Skills Used:
GM: Detection
Master: Blades, Tactics

Requested:
Blades (Dagger): Knife Flipping
Detection: Hunting for Hidden Rooms
Tactics: Getting a Lay of Your Stronghold
Tactics: Identifying Weak Points in Defenses
Tactics: Identifying Distance Between Location and Known Threats



Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Local Language Thread? No

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[Pig Boy]

Kasoria

Feedback

So the note says that Kasoria got his rewards, that's not entirely true. Kasoria got his wealth points for the wealth submission, but otherwise he's getting his xp now for thsi review. Anyway just wanted to point that out.

Kasoria seems to have taken to command pretty well for someone who likes to work alone. Although maybe more using his intimidation factor to inspire obedience from the men he's wrangled into service.

His impressions and thoughts on the nature of the city he's visiting as always are an interesting backdrop to start off on. The comparison of the wealthiest home in the Glass Quarter (or one of them) and parts of Etzos were well done.

Hopefully he's able to keep this band in line, while doing all he needs to do.

Good writing.

Rewards

• Renown: 10
• XP: 15

Max

Feedback

I enjoyed Maxine's entry into this thread, how she hates these sorts of places and people. The conflict between being in this place with so many troublesome memories, and the fact that it's home to so many vices is well portrayed.

We'll see what kind of trouble she gets into while here, for now. Kasoria certainly has his hands full with a wild card like her.

P.S. If you want to submit this as a wealth thread, Maxine, there's a button on the bottom of the thread. That'll bring you to a form you can fill out for applying for wealth points. We don't award wealth points in regular reviews, unless the pc has already done their wealth threads (both of them) for the cycle.

Anyway, great writing, enjoy the rewards.

Rewards

• Renown: 5
• XP: 15

Knowledges

• Combat: Blades: Knife Flipping
• Detection: Hunting for Hidden Rooms
• Tactics: Getting a Lay of Your Stronghold
• Tactics: Identifying Weak Points in Defenses
• Tactics: Identifying Distance Between Location and Known Threats