[NPC] Patricia Willus [Approved]

[Alyssia]

Name: Patricia Willus
Created by: Alyssia
Race: human
Birthday/Age: 29
Title: Personal body guard
Forum Location: Patricia is based in Faldrass
Skills: Archery (expert), Mount: Air (expert), Hunting (competent), Endurance (competent), Meditation (competent)
RPG Details: - Patricia is a younger archer who loves to explore the world around her. She has a huge love for adventure that often gets her in trouble before she realizes what's she doing. When it comes to being in groups, Patricia finds herself trying to calm everyone down before tempers get flared up.

Patricia was a normal girl that had grown up around the city of Scalvtown exploring the forest and hunting most of her life. She had been trying to get into the archers that helped protect Scalvtown, but she had been rejected because of her often child like urges to just go off on her own. When she heard about the call for personal body guards, the young woman jumped at the opportunity to run to apply for the job. The woman was absolutely ecstatic when she was hired and even more excited when she was assigned to help guard the young baroness Alyssia. Much to her co-guards dismay, Patricia has been known to agree with Alyssia's hair brained ideas when it comes to her venturing off places.

[Pig Boy]

Hi Alyssia, gonna take this in list format as well, as there are a few issues:

• In her background it says she's spent much of her life in the forest hunting. But she has no fieldcraft or hunting skill. That doesn't really track.
• Patricia is said to be a calming force in any group she's in, yet she lacks any skills that would help her with that, like Socialization or Meditation.
• She has two master skills. I must stress that master combatants and masters in general are hard to come by, and not at all common. It's even less common for them to ake on subordinate roles such as that of bodyguard. If this was a personal NPC it might be different, but she's a city npc.
• It's Combat: Ranged, not archery. It's also Mount: Air not Mount: Scalvwing.

That's all I can think of for now. Thanks!

[Alyssia]

Thank you again! I am think I have everything for Patricia ready.

[Pig Boy]

Good job!
Approved!