Winsome, Lose Some [Eternity]

Once an isolated and dying township, an influx of academics, adventurers and thrill seekers have made Scalvoris Town their home. From scholars' tea shops to a new satellite campus for Viden Academy, this is an exciting place to visit or make your home!

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Pyrre Ej'qy
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Joined: Tue Dec 21, 2021 11:36 am
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Chrien-Cursed Mariner
Renown: 25
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Pyrre’s curiosity grew as she confirmed that she had never left Scalvoris the city rather than the Island. It was a very foreign concept to the mariner, whose entire existence prior to his arrival in this far eastern land was based on travelling far distances between ports. It was strange enough for him to have remained in Almund for as long as he had - a full cycle and half a season now - and even he was beginning to feel the restlessness that came with being stuck in one place for an extended period of time. He wondered at her reasoning; she had mentioned - what? - fear was it? Fear of the dangers and of how foreigner’s would receive her. Again, this was all very strange and novel ways of thinking for the Biqaj. Fear and danger went hand and hand with life at sea; you could not have one without the other. Fear was so often the foundation of respect for sailors, after all.

However, her being so city-bound did give her an advantage: it meant she would be very familiar with the place she called home. Or, should, as far as he was concerned. Unfortunately, as she spoke of Scalvoris Town, commented on its size and how she still hadn’t even seen all of it, the advantage became less so. His look grew increasingly perplexed.

What had she been doing all this time?

It was in Pyrre’s nature to roam. Zarena had even commented earlier that he was like the sea - ever changing, coming and going. It was not in him to remain stagnant.

His ale arrived, a low-quality draught that Pyrre had noted the server had openly judged him for ordering, and he drew it to himself, musing over all that had been said. He cantered his head as he eyed her with wonder. “Scalvoris big - and you no go?” he said, finally voicing his thoughts - albeit the translation was not the best. He lifted the tankard, glanced momentarily at the contents, and then tested it with a long pull. He made a face at the taste - bland and thin but undoubtedly still packing the same punch as the nicer, fuller-flavoured types that cost far more - but this could have easily been misinterpreted as him making a face at what he said.

Orm’del Sea big. See much. Sail, see many port and city.” He shrugged, then, slowly realising that, perhaps, land-life was slower. Earth was, afterall, meant to be solid, resolute and unchanging.

She mentioned Zarena and he once again tilted his head as he studied her. There was another shrug, equally done with his face as it was his body, and he realised that Eternity might be ready to move on. It had been a while since she had last taken a bite - with Pyrre continuing until the plate was empty - and she had passed on the drink. Being the sort to pay attention to body language, her yawn and expression made him think she wanted to get out of here.

It made him wonder, again, why she had chosen this place to go to.

No matter, he was just as happy to push off now that he had a meal in him and knew a bit more about her - even if her motives were still very much a mystery to him.

He brought the ale back to his lips and tipped it back and necked it down, feeling more bloat than burn once it was in his belly. He set the tankard down and dragged the back of his hand across his mouth unselfconsciously before his hands found the table top.

He had no idea where Zarena would be now - if she’d have disappeared to some inn with the roguish gentleman, or even someone else, or if she was even still where he had last seen her. Either way, he figured he could rely on Eternity to steer him towards a tavern or inn if he couldn’t find the Mixed-Blood.

He motioned with his head towards the door and asked as his brows raised, “You come? Her name Zarena.” He rose, then, manually pushing the chair back with a free hand before he found his crutch and settled it ungainly into place under his right arm. He shot her another quick look, “You know inn to go to? For me - if no find Zarena.
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Pyrre's right lower leg is missing and has been replaced with a wooden peg after a run in with Chrien.
As a Biqaj, his ears are slightly pointed and his skin glows a silvery hue under the moonlight. His eyes change accordingly:
Standard Aquamarine, gold starburst Upset Indigo, silver starburst
Curious Pale blue, gold starburst Injured Jet, silver starburst
Angry Gray and gold, silver starburst Drunk Pale amber, gold starburst
Amorous Platinum, gold starburst Scared Emerald, silver starburst

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Hated by Chrien
"The first level of Chrien's curse bestows terrible misfortune upon the Hated. A series of events will befall them daily that range from the minor and annoying to the severe and dangerous. Rarely are these forces of mishap deadly, but curiously those that are around the Hated seem to benefit from remarkably better luck than they might have otherwise had."
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Re: Winsome, Lose Some [Eternity]

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Pyrre

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Hello Pyrre. The cursed sailor is a very interesting character and you play him well. His own internal struggled is fascinating to read, and his real struggle to communicate is excellent. I enjoyed how while irritated at her talking down to him he worked through it and had a eventful meal with Eternity. You balance well his handicap in your writing so that it is there and people can become part of that struggle but you also don’t make it what Pyrre is and that there is depth and much more to him. Thank you for the Read. Fate

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XP: 15
Renown: 0

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Played to Skill level

Athletics: Lengthening and moving an amputated limb to work out a cramp
Athletics: Knowing your physical and spatial limitations as an amputee
Athletics: Using your crutch and peg as leverage while your muscles keep you upright
Detection: Feeling the music even if you don't understand the words
Detection: Noticing the confidence of a thief
Detection: Detecting a familiar flavour in an unfamiliar dish
Linguistics: Knowing words and understanding how they’re used in context are two different things
Linguistics: Common: The word Outsider
Resistance: Cheap ale bloats more than buzzes
Socialization: Feeling confident in determining the meaning of something based on how it’s used in conversation
Strength: Pushing yourself up to your feet after a near fall


Eternity

Overview

Hello Eternity. Ahh Eternity is off on another score. Though this one didn’t go quiet the way she thought. You wrote Eternity well in her struggle to find the right way to communicate with someone who knowns little of someone else language. Eternity is interesting as she always seems to live in a her own world that weaves through the rest of the world. I love how she is beginning to pay attention to the people around her and find marks that are going to actually have something other then a couple small coins. Thank you for the Read. Fate

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XP: 15
Renown: 0

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Knowledge

Played to Skill Level

Socialization: working through language barriers
Socialization: being too nice makes things awkward
Socialization: it's best not to call attention to a disability
Socialization: when people avoid a subject they probably have something to hide
Socialization x1
Detection x1
Appraisal: not all jewelry is valuable
Appraisal x1
Tactics: helping someone so that they might help you later
Athletics: trying to keep ones balance after being pushed


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