[Aeva's Peak] Tears of the Firstborn

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[Aeva's Peak] Tears of the Firstborn

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Training concluded earlier than it would have, had Kalif kept his interceding mouth quiet about helping Harrow. As it was, the Marshal had seen fit to detach Kal's squad from the Brigade at Morq's Aerie, and send them to the Border Zone, to see how Kal could help with the problems they were having with cultural identity, with inclusion in the Empire and belonging. This amused the avriel, as he saw this much as the blind leading the blind. As an avriel seeker of Delroth, he hardly fit neatly into any category. Whether that of a Athart ex-patriot, a wandering avriel, or an Imperial soldier, and now worst of all knowing he was not pure. A half-breed of some other uncaring Immortal.

He was hosting his squad in the interim at All-Colors Aerie. Soon, in around twelve trials he'd be accompanying them to their mission's destination. But for now they enjoyed his hospitality, such as it could be, with his somewhat skeletal staff of hired servants. They weren't the best at what they did, but they got on well enough and were able to clean a mess, sweep floors, and answer a door.

For now though, he left them behind, easy in the knowledge that they would behave themselves in his house.

In his time beneath the shores of Arithzma's Tears, the lake sitting beneath Aeva's Peak, he remembered his encounter with Navyri, who spoke of Arithzma. She'd disavowed Kal's own childhood stories of the Avriel as incorrect, and bid him to talk to the Immortal that granted his blessing, if he wanted to know the truth of things. In after arcs, he'd learned more by small catches of information. He was able to piece together precious few actual solid facts or leads on Arithzma, however. Not until he came to Aeva's Peak, did he even hear the Silvered One's name uttered once more, this time in reference to the lake north of where he made his own Nest.

There were villages of people about, small, but they had stories of who Arithzma was. An avriel that had defied the creators of his race, and persisted in a tragic existence, perpetually spurned by humankindi as well as avriel. Chasing Delroth as one would a fieldmouse, who hid in cowardice and fear. But Kal knew it wasn't cowardice or fear that motivated his patron. More likely, he wished to avoid a hard question the answer to which could only make him appear unattractive.

Kalortah sat by the lake, contemplating this question, of why Delroth had evaded his firstborn, when it was clear by all accounts that he had escaped corruption. And having escaped corruption, was there a way to make one pure again? When Kal had lived in Athart, he for a time lamented the decadent brutality of his people. How they treated their possessions, their servants, a reflection of savagery cast outward in blood and grisle left in the angry wake of their hunting parties.

He thought once that improving the culture one person at a time could tame their savagery. Then, when the plague of Aloplumia came in the wake of the Fall of Emea, he thought this would surely humble them, and realize that they must at least cling togeher. Instead, they sank the ship that sailed from Athart with the Windshear Brotherhood, destroying the unfeathered to the last child. That was the last time Kal saw his birthplace as anything but a pit of filth and ignominy. There was nothing to redeem there. Yet he'd come from that place, that same kind. The savagery that flowed through the hollow bones of every avriel did in him, mortalborn though he was.

He wished he'd never met that wretched brat of his patron. If only to preserve the illusion that he was anything near to Pure. Yet it must have explained how he among his kindi had managed to elude the lesser impulses. All the arrogance, with less of the brutality.

So, he flew out to those camps and villages, seeking the true story of the firstborn, to see what he might learn, what clues he might gather, and learn of his ultimate fate.

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His head full to the brim of such stories, ideas, and presumptions about the subject of the lake upon whose shores he flew over, Kal took to the skies and flew well into the north. He used the Windmaster's Boon to speed his flight, thus outrunning many other birds on the wing on their way to Aeva's Peak. Soon enough, he found his way to that northern shore, which rested just beneath the rise of several cliffs, the like of which any could've served to host the fall of Arithzma. Kal had with him the
Minstrel's Songbook
. It was a source of inspiration, visions, and also fanciful tellings and recountings of events that might transpire or have. In other cases, it was all fiction. With as long as Arithzma had been gone, it hardly mattered what was true of him or not. He would ensure his lasting spoken legacy was one of glory and tragedy. As close to the original tellings as possible, but with dramatic flare.

So he opened the minstrel's songbook as he took a seat at the foot of those cliffs, and the scene seemed to change around him. He took on the role of Arithzma, recently deprived of his wings, and lamenting it as he wandered the top of those cliffs.

A song played, which was sung to Kalortah's voice, in Lorien. It told of Arithzma's horrible bargain with the Red Man, to lose what it was that made him avriel, in order to walk among the rest of the world for a trial.

Arithzma walked through the cliffs, his still hollow bones allowing a degree of agility and lightness of step, but now having lost his silver wings to the scheming god Beleara and their servant. In that moment, deprived of the one saving grace that he valued from his creator, Delroth, he felt the weight of what had occurred to his kind fall on his shoulders. Could he have intervened on their behalf, ensure that they didn't run afoul of the Empire as it conquered the ruin now known as Delroth's folly?

Arithzma looked on the ruins, seeing the devastated and cursed land that had once been a haven for so many birds and his own kind. Now a devastated reminder of Raskalarn's wrath and the unforgivable natures of the Avriel, driven so far to the south.

Arithzma left the ruins of that village, leaving behind the spectres that guarded it, and the memories that haunted him of Lisirra's and Syroa's torments that they'd tried to levy against him, to turn him into one of the monsters they'd eventually succeed in producting.

Kalortah's voice continued above the din of the scene that was playing out before Arithzma. What once had been a rousing ballad to rejoice in his newly discovered humanity, became a lament for the people who might've been, if Delroth had not turned his back, or the twisted Immortals of Plague and Fury had not deigned to corrupt them. Arithzma ran through the forested portions above the cliffs, imagining he was flying through them as he ran all the way to the cliff's edge.

There, he paused, his feet touching nearly the edge of the rock. Arithzma's tears fell down the cliff, Kalortah's song narrating more or less the feelings that played out in his heart. And then, with a final descending refrain of the avriel's voice, Arithzma jumped from the top of the cliff, to fee the whipping winds against his face as he fell to the rocky crags and waters below.

Kalortah's voice ululated in Lorien as this went on, Arithzma's final flight took him down those cliffs, uninterrupted by any snags, branches, or rocks on the way, but making a sheer fall off the side of the cliff. Until at last he reached the bottom. Kal then closed the songbook, banishing the vision for fear that it would take him with Arithzma to his doom. The avriel pondered the story that had played out, and felt the sorrow of Arithzma in that moment. He wondered now why Delroth had so spurned his creation so easily? Was this to be a test? To see which of his own kind were worthy of joining him in glory? Or did he truly despise his creations?

The story he'd witnessed in his mind's eye gave him more questions than answers, but perhaps it gave him a glimpse or an impression of Arithzma's last moments, if the site of those moments was indeed Aeva's Peak, on the shores of the lake known as Arithzma's Tears.

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Hello Kalortah. I enjoyed how well this was written, and it covered both Kalortah learned this story but also shared it. This was a well written story with in a story, and also presented some very deep character developing questions. Will these question affect Kalortah connection with Delroth? Anyway excellent thread. Thank you for the Read. Fate.

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