• Memory • Pelagic Playground

This is the sea that wraps around the Ivorian Empire and stretches along the south eastern coast of the Eastern Continent. This sea has the following ports: Athart, Ivorian Empire, Nashaki, Volanta, Yaralon
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Pyrre Ej'qy
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Pelagic Playground

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As much as those who called the Meridian’s Beacon home worked hard and lived hard, they were also allowed the occasional trial to play hard.

Or soft.

Or slow.

Or to do with their periods of leisure as they saw fit.

The brig had dropped anchor near a sheltered bay on the southern coast of Rharne, where the Orm’del Sea and Crescent Sea met. It was a familiar place they frequented when weather and schedules allowed - and where GalePyrre’s birthname had been born thirteen arcs ago.

Although one could argue that no wild place in Idalos was safe, this was one of the calmer spots they frequented, and, on this particular trial, the spot was especially sedate. The bay was a relatively barren stretch of beach, composed of squat dunes and dotted with the odd wooly and spiny bunches of sea purslane, shy tips of beach elder, as well as straggly tufts of panicgrass. Rocks and boulders, rounded and shaped by wind and waves, further broke up the monotony of golden sand and clear blue waters, with a large collection stretching out to sea along the western side. And though many might think of it as desolate, the crew of the Meridian’s Beacon saw it as the paradise that it was.

A rope ladder hung off each side of the bow along with various other ropes, one extending all the way out to the shore where it was tethered securely to one of the larger rocks. It hung slack, laying on the water and undulated with each lazy wave. A series of short lengths of twine had been tied to this rope, and baited hooks to each bit of twine in hopes of securing some fresh fish for the evening.

Those wishing to keep to the ship stuck to carving fids and hooks from bone and wood or patching clothing and sails. Others joked or sang and some played along with hand drums or lutes and clothing and bedding strung up to dry flapped along meekly to the beat. There were always two sitting aloft, tasked with keeping watch, each with a crude wooden whistle that they could sound if any threat - marine or otherwise - might arise. Those wishing time away from the ship sought the sea.

The brig had come to anchor so that the bay was abeam to port, with the waters to the left - or port - side of the ship being shallower. The braver and more adventurous members of the crew opted to take turns jumping from the starboard side into the deeper, darker waters. Challenges rang out between crewmen who felt the need to outdo one another, and it became a test of nerves as one climbed higher than the other and the next higher still until it was a competition between who would jump from aloft.

Unlike these crewmen, Gale stuck to jumping from the rail. The exhilaration of the drop from that height to the sea below was enough for the youth and he delighted in each jump he made - the feeling of the rush of the air against his wet skin during his freefall, the sharp sting of the cold water against his sun-warmed skin as it engulfed him, and the peaceful silence that surrounded him once he was beneath the surface. Then he would frantically kick and pull until he surfaced, making the few laborious strokes needed to get back to the rope ladder where he would slowly climb his way back up to the deck to do it all again.
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Pyrre's right lower leg is missing and has been replaced with a wooden peg after a run in with Chrien.
As a Biqaj, his ears are slightly pointed and his skin glows a silvery hue under the moonlight. His eyes change accordingly:
Standard Aquamarine, gold starburst Upset Indigo, silver starburst
Curious Pale blue, gold starburst Injured Jet, silver starburst
Angry Gray and gold, silver starburst Drunk Pale amber, gold starburst
Amorous Platinum, gold starburst Scared Emerald, silver starburst

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Hated by Chrien
"The first level of Chrien's curse bestows terrible misfortune upon the Hated. A series of events will befall them daily that range from the minor and annoying to the severe and dangerous. Rarely are these forces of mishap deadly, but curiously those that are around the Hated seem to benefit from remarkably better luck than they might have otherwise had."
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He stayed submerged on his final jump, taking a moment to appreciate the feeling of the water supporting him, suspending him in these silent, cool depths. He waited, eyes closed, slowly releasing bubbles until his lungs burned. Kicking hard and pulling with both arms in unison, he eventually broke the surface and inhaled sharply and deeply, sucking in the air his lungs desperately needed. The feeling of the air returning, the roll of electricity that jolt of adrenaline had given him, was euphoric - but short lived. He treaded water weakly until he felt an arm wrap around his chest and heave him back in the direction of the brig and the ropes and rope ladder that hung from it not even a few trills before another dove into the spot he had just been in.

“Careful,” hissed Peak - his tone more teasing than concerned.

Gale latched onto the rope ladder lamely and swung his head in the direction of his older brother, shoving his wet hair out of his face. He opened his mouth to talk but Peak beat him to it.

“You should move to shallower waters, pup.”

I’m getting ther-” the last word was lost as a wave filled his mouth with water. He spat it out and hauled himself up higher in the water as he redirected his words, “Where’s Quay?

Peak, although only two arcs older, was built as if it were ten and he was of an age where he was thoroughly enjoying this fact. He pulled himself practically out of the water and then dropped down, repeating the motion simply because he could, muscles flexing beneath sun-bronzed skin as he spoke, “She’s over near the beach. Combing for pipis, probably.” The final drop saw him sink slowly into the water, visibly at ease in the ocean.

Then, cheekily, “Y’know the quickest way there is to swim under the ship.” There was a challenge in his eyes.

Gale, still clinging to the rope ladder, weighed his options as his eyes swept up the side of the brig. There was a very big part of him that wanted to, but the very real fear of being trapped underwater - under the ship - made him see reason. “No,” he said simply to the question Peak hadn’t needed to ask. Wiping water from his face, he twisted around and readied himself to climb aboard when his brother tossed him a small grin. They were rare these days.

“Suit yourself, pup.”

And then he dove down.

Gale pulled himself up onto deck and then reentered the water from the other side. He sank as far as he would allow, intending to touch the ocean floor but it remained out of reach so he had to struggle to swim back to the surface. He paused as he treaded with his chin just barely out of the water and gazed across the shallower water towards the beach, eyes squinting against flashes of sunlight that glittered and danced across the clear blue surface. As much as he wanted to drink in the whimsical sight, his body was growing weary from all the exertion of the day so, upon finally sighting his sister, he began the arduous and slow swim to shore, only stopping once he could stand.

He sloshed through the shallows slowly, feeling like he was walking through molasses, and called out to his sister as he drew close.

Quay!” Her name spilled out of his mouth in a clumsy manner, breathing more laboured than he expected. “Don’t snap up all the pipis!

Her laughter filled him with warmth and replenished whatever energy he had expended.

“You better hurry, Gale - or else there won’t be any left!” She goaded gamely as she turned towards him and made an exaggerated display of the large collection of shells that she had cupped in her hands. “It’s been low tide for a while!”

That was all the incentive the youth needed to quicken his pace.
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Last edited by Pyrre Ej'qy on Sun Oct 09, 2022 8:01 am, edited 10 times in total. word count: 671

Appearance

Pyrre's right lower leg is missing and has been replaced with a wooden peg after a run in with Chrien.
As a Biqaj, his ears are slightly pointed and his skin glows a silvery hue under the moonlight. His eyes change accordingly:
Standard Aquamarine, gold starburst Upset Indigo, silver starburst
Curious Pale blue, gold starburst Injured Jet, silver starburst
Angry Gray and gold, silver starburst Drunk Pale amber, gold starburst
Amorous Platinum, gold starburst Scared Emerald, silver starburst

Cursed

Hated by Chrien
"The first level of Chrien's curse bestows terrible misfortune upon the Hated. A series of events will befall them daily that range from the minor and annoying to the severe and dangerous. Rarely are these forces of mishap deadly, but curiously those that are around the Hated seem to benefit from remarkably better luck than they might have otherwise had."
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Pyrre Ej’qy (‘Gale’)


Awarded Points

10


Awarded Knowledge

Athletics: Climbing a rope ladder to board a ship
Detection: It's quiet and peaceful underwater during calm seas
Endurance: Staying submerged until your lungs burn
Swimming: Using your arms to pull and legs to kick to get you to the surface
Swimming: Easier to surface when you have something to push off of
Swimming: Staying afloat by treading water


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Loot/Losses: None
Injuries: None
Renown: None


Comments

You do a remarkable job of setting the scene. I could really picture it in my mind, and it seems like a place I would like to visit! I also liked the description you provide of the ship and its crew. Again, very clear imagery and it felt sedate and calm and a little bit of fun thrown in there for good measure. Gale’s experience of jumping in the water was pleasant to read. And I did feel the sense of anxiety of holding my own breath on his final jump!

I really enjoy memory threads - they have their place on sites like this because they add depth to a character. It’s nice to see ‘Gale’ and to learn a little bit about his past. It was nice to meet Peak as well. A well done characterisation of a relationship between two brothers. I was pleasantly surprised to meet Quay as well - siblings all sharing their youth on a ship together. I’m interested to learn more about Gale and his adventures on the Meridian’s Beacon now. Onwards!


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