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Kalortah
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[Aeva's Peak] Sticks and Stones

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The Empire waited for no one, and neither did morning drills.

The past five or so trials of Kalif's leave were spent wrapped in the constant company of Lotema. The lion's share of that time spent in his quarters, or else flying around the parapets and vaulted towers of the Aerie, chasing each other like children. He couldn't deny that this was something he'd been missing for much of his life. Not only the physical satisfaction of a female that accepted his embrace, but that he had no need to fight off bigger, stronger, fitter avriel for her affection. There was no need to exemplify all the terror and ferocity that was needed to make up for the size difference between his diminutive form and all of the males he had to compete with in Athart.

Here, there was just them, and Weep to care for every other mundane need. He'd enjoyed his leave from the army more than he cared to admit.

He felt the glossy blue feathers of her wings graze his face, awakening him with the scented oils that covered them. His eyes opened, and he turned to find her asleep, merely tossing in her slumber. It was yet dark out, the suns having fallen for the first time in a season since Saun began, last night. He rose to a sitting position on the bed, and looked at her a few moments. Carefully, lest he disturb her, he slipped next to her, into the embrace of her blue wing, and traced her lips with his fingers. He enjoyed this, as her lips reacted to the touch, smacking and then shutting, her face turning to the side. Every motion she made he drank in.

Yet even as he admired his companion, he knew this couldn't work. Not the way she wanted, probably, or the way he even wanted. His life belonged to Delroth, just as Navyri had warned him. His waking thoughts were consumed with plans and thoughts of vaulting Delroth ever higher in importance in the world. Collecting things for his glory, and making him proud above all. There was hardly room for more than one in any relationship that involved Delroth. Even Kalif someday would disappear in the wake of Delroths' glory. And then there would be only the Winged Calamity.

These somber thoughts prompted him to move out of her orbit. She reached for the empty space where he'd been, but he was already out of reach when her eyes opened. He was part of the way toward the door, slipping on a sleeping robe, when she spoke to him. "Did I give you leave to depart, Kal?" She asked playfully. She did this game, where she played at being in control. He indulged it at turns, at other times turned the tables, just enough to keep her entertained and guessing. But now he was not in the mood for games. He had a serious mind for what the day would bring.

"Leave is over. I'm going to Morq's Aerie, to the south. They'll be going through basic drills for the new recruits." He said, halting for a moment, but then deciding to make no excuses. He stepped toward the door, slowly.

She called again, "Come back, Stalwart 'Elmdor'" He could almost sense her eyes on him, and hear the motions as she stretched on the bed. "We'll rehearse some drills of our own, here." She said, artlessly. Truly she needed to work on her lines. Kal harumphed, and kept on toward the exit to his quarters.

"When you find it in your lazy bones to get out of bed, have Weep attend you. She will bathe and feed you, and find you something suitable to wear."

So saying, he left without giving her a moment to speak, shutting the door behind him. He spent the next few breaks eating, getting ready for the day, and finally having Weep equip him with his armor.


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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Kalortah descended onto the foot path leading up to Morq's Aerie, deciding to walk the rest of the way, and give himself time to think. He thought about Delroth, about those followers of his he'd met before. There was the whimsical and insufferable Devin, the haughty and impossible Zana. But most of all, the one that drifted to Kal's mind now, was Navyri Nightengale.

"I'm not just any bird. I am the Nightingale..."

"I have gone to the edge of the world for him. I have torn out my own eyes for him. I have raised the Unknown for him..."

"He'll want more."

"He always does." The avriel intoned in response to those memories, feeling quite drained of the verve that had filled him for the past few days.

Kalif felt it more than ever, as he recalled those words how damned he truly was. Was it his destiny to be swallowed, root to leaf by the Immortal he served? Was he really such a duplicitous demon as that?

He remembered her final words, before she rebuked the fable song of Arithzma to her, through which she'd decided he wasn't known to Delroth afterall. Simply because the song had been incorrect.

He remembered her warning, "You will do what he wants, or all the training in Idalos won't matter. Death would be your sweetest relief."

Kalif lifted his gaze to the skies, and wondered. About his own wishes, about Delroth's, about Lotema's. Did any of it matter? Or would Delroth be satisfied with literally anything and everything? Was all of Kalif's wandering and toil and devotion in vain? For a moment, he thought about turning on his heel, and trudging back on the path to his All-Colors Aerie. To spend the rest of Lotema's life entwined, his life in hers. Instead, he continued on his way toward the first recruitment drills of the season. There were more important things than his mortal wishes, desires that would die, cast upon an uncertain wind that blew them to the far corners of nothing.

He continued on his way, hearing the sounds of steel and rock fall ahead. They'd be doing their flying and close-quarters drills. Not exactly his favorite, but then...

He was let into the fortress, and through, into the courtyard of the Aerie. That was where they’d be staging their training session out of, for the new recruits and assigning the stalwarts to their more or less permanent squads. Kalif looked around, wondering who he’d get stuck with idly, but not considering that any one of them would be particularly suitable or otherwise. He just wanted his assignment, to undergo the training of the next few days, and get back to some semblance of normalcy.

Where he had intended All-Colours Aerie to be his refuge from the worries of the world, it’d become the nexus of his concern. Now only Morq’s Aerie brought him back to center, and reminded him of what mattered. The persistent struggle to outdo oneself, to improve, and to drive on in pursuit of the performance of one’s duty.

Kal was brought along to a small squad, of six. The corporal, a dark-haired, tall woman bearing many decorations on her face, body, and uniform, hailed him as he arrived at the corner of the courtyard. “Corporal Jiann Djamila. You are Stalwart Kalif Elmdor?” She saluted him, and he returned the gesture albeit somewhat lazily.

He nodded, not deigning to speak.

She returned the nod with one of her own, and then walked up and down the line of other recruits, taking in their measure in their turns. “Now here, you will learn to fight as a group, against a enemy that wishes to run you to the ground and destroy you. You will learn accuracy on the wing, and ferocity in close quarters combat while on the wing. I will be teaching you all of these things…”

“Some of you are possessed of… unconventional weapon styles, and for that you’ve brought your own equipment I trust. That is acceptable. However, do not expect the army to entertain your preferences, predelictions and idiosyncracies. I am one of the few Corporals, as you might have noticed, that doesn’t mind an individualist, or a unique approach to the matters at hand.”

She looked at each of them, and seemed to smile. “That doesn’t mean every man for themselves. I will train you to fight together, wing to wing, in a way that brings all of those unique strengths to the forefront of our advance.”

“Any questions?”

“No Corporal.” They all said, out of sync, not in unison, and then not even all one after the other. Kalhad to suppress slapping his forehead. Although granted, he was one of those who were speaking out of turn.

“We’ll have to work on that.” Corporal said, and then lifted her arms in a shrug. “Now we begin.”
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

Aliases:
Eldyn Morose
,
Larza Impre
,
Flavius Erythrian
,
Milian Le Moigne
.
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Balthazar Black
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Name: Kalortah

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Knowledge: Discipline x 4
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Notes: This was an interesting and entertaining introspective thread. It was interesting to read about how Kal believes his devotion towards Delroth will ultimately force him away from the momentary joy he has found. I'd never really thought of him as a military/soldier type but he certainly seemed to be performing the duty well, even if he didn't seem to enjoy it entirely. It was also fun for me to read a bit about The Eternal Empire because I haven't seen much from that location before. I also enjoyed the references to the other followers of Delroth such as Devin, Zana, and Nayvri throughout the thread because it helps make the world we are all writing in feel more connected.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!
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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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