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Despite his best assurances and cajoling of his apprentice, Renfreud was growing impatient with Rakvald. He wanted to learn magic, as Rakvald had promised, yet the master mage knew his student wasn't ready. Anymore than Rakvald was ready to be his teacher. So as he rested, he considered the ways he might shore up Renfreud's suitability as a student, and prepare him for what would be a great upheaval, regardless of his thirst for magic. Rakvald thought there were several problems with Renfreud that rendered him presently inadequate as a initiate. One he was undisciplined, and impulsive. He was over-eager, often to the point of blinding his approach to the objects of his desires. And finally, Rakvald wasn't entirely convinced that the man wasn't simply insane, driven batty by the assortment of horrors that dwelt and were unleashed in short order in Quacia.

Rakvald had a plan, to figure Renfreud out, and also to help him prepare for what it meant to be a mage. That meant not only broadening his horizons, but also testing his temperament, tempering his eagerness with awareness of consequence. Rakvald wasn't the best teacher, by far. In fact, he was downright unsuitable. So it would b a growing moment for both of them as they proceeded. Rakvald readied himself by going to sleep, gathering some of the dust from his eyes, and applying it to his nose, sniffing up the sleep powder granted to him by Unity.

Then, he slipped into the formed realm of his Dreamscape. From there, he would find a way to bridge the gap between his own rest and that of Renfreud. He would learn what the Quacian apprentice really dreamt of, and what kind of a person he was beneath the obedience and obsequiousness.



That meant, however, first finding his way through his own Dreamscape. A place he'd rarely visited in recent arcs. There were changes that the immediately sensed. Much of the abilities that he took for granted were not in existence. He could not consciously manipulate his surroundings, couldn't move the landscape or make it rain or snow. But there was another change he noticed. His body was shimmering, unstable and mutable. He thought perhaps if he tried, he could alter his mortal shell in this land of dreams. Not to the point of carrying over those changes to the waking world. No, he'd paradigmed himself and thus assured that dreaming while using magic would not be a risk.

He found himself in a sunny field, with many dips and declines, in the form of small hills. He was in his human form, the dark hair, dark completed totem of Jim Fino, which he'd acquired some time ago and not tampered with in his mad dash to uncover strange new forms. Mercifully, the mutations had subsided with the application fo the ring of Paradigm, and so Rakvald was looking an ordinary person now.

That wouldn't do. He had to be unrecognizable to Renfreud, in order for him to pose a neutral test of the man's temperament. And he had just the form in mind to test him.

He walked up to a small truffle in the grassy field. Kneeling to grasp it, he stuffed it into his mouth. Then he spotted another not far away. He continued the process, and as he did he began to feel the change taking over his dream manifestation. He was looking more and more 'pig-like' as he proceeded, until at last he was left as nothing other than an ordinary, quadroped, domestic farm pig.

As if bidden to the idyllic and perfect countenance of the pig, two birds began building a nest swiftly about his crown, between his ears. This seemed to stretch on for the space of a few minutes, but then slowed as the birds settled down between his ears. Rakvald seemed to get the impression that these were his internal voices, speaking aloud and tweeting for all the Dreamscape to hear, what Rakvald wanted, versus what he needed.

The internal logic of Rakvald's dreamscape deemed it so that the tweets and chirps from the birds between his ears were at the very least comprehensible as words in a language he was familiar with. So he could only assume that they would also be to those who overheard their song. He wandered off, trundling after truffle beyond the next truffle, sniffing them out in those hills, and looking, hoping for a way to enter Renfreud's dreams.
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The truffles were as they should be, deep underground, buried beneath the dirt. They smelled normal for the most part, and the more that Rakvald ate them down, the more comfortable he felt in this newly uncovered aspect of his old dreamscape. He hopped happily along for a while, what seemed like breaks before his nose picked up the scent of something quite unusual.

A smell of ink, salt, and sea water. Strange mixture to be sure, but it drew his attention to one part of the ground that the smell was emanating from. He pinpointed the location of that smell in his dream, following to its source at a patch of soggy ground. Furrowing his piggy brows, he looked at it, and oinked in surprise as it opened up. Inside, he saw a sight he hadn't imagined he would ever again. The swirling dark vortex of the Atramentous Trench opened up to him, showing him the myriad of dreamscapes that connected from his own.

Yet this was not a place in Emea, as he'd originally thought. No, it appeared to be a part of his own dreamscape, just a point of connection with people he had a bond with. He noticed faces in the swirling waters of the Vortex, as he dared to look closer. His wife Ildred, the many faces and guises of Magpie, even that weird nobleman from Rynmere that he'd met in Quacia. Then there was his daughter.

Excited by the sight of his child, he stepped into the vortex, and tumbled end over end as gravity decided it would have a merry time tossing him thither and hither. But this was his dreamscape, and it would not toss him thusly for long before he asserted his command over at least his form. The pig grew fins, and began swimming through the open air of the vortex.

There, he searched the place where he'd spotted his daughter's face. As he drew closer to it, however, he noticed the voice of Renfreud, filtering in through the 'air' of the Trench. It pulled him in the opposite direction. He oinked in surprise, grunting as he was drawn away from his daughter's dreamscape, and pulled back by some force of the grip of a limb that stretched to snatch him toward Renfreud's dreamscape.

Afterall, that was what he'd been looking for, wasn't it?



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Rakvald delved into that promised trove of madness that lay beyond the veil, in his servant's dreamscape. He almost delved in, when he suddenly sensed that there was nothing beyond. His servant wasn't, in fact, asleep at all. The entrance to his dreamscape was barren and shapeless.

Upon his waking body, he felt the tug against his finger, against the ring of paradigm. Rakvald awoke with a start, and backhanded the fiend that tried to remove the ring. He awoke to the darkened inn room, and slapped Renfreud, sending him sprawling across the room.

"Ahh master!" Renfreud begged, and cajoled, "Please let me polish your ring! I'll return it forthwith!"

But his attempts at deception were as pathetic as they were transparent. Rakvald stood from his bed, towering over the little apprentice. "Go back to your rooms, Renfreud. Never trouble my sleep again, or I'll return to form."

A hint of a hopeful smile played on Renfreud's lips at this promise, but then Rakvald continued, "But not to teach, but to devour your very soul. Begone!"

So, whimpering, Renfreud retreated to his rooms, in their rented accomodations. Rakvald sighed, supposing he would get no further sleep this night. He got dressed in his finest bespoke suit, a deep dark burgundy leather longcoat over white linen shirt and black hide trousers and boots.. Then he made to head off toward the Painted Swine, what was becoming his favorite tavern in the city...



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Hello Rakvald. I loved the ending of this thread. Rakvald clearly has suspicion about his servant. It is a good character showing as while he has his misgivings he also doesn’t want to believe them. His servant not being asleep and in the end trying to remove the ring certainly hints at the reasons for his worry. I also like how Rakvald is taking choosing an apprentice seriously in stead of just doing it. Thank you for the Read. Fate.
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    • Teaching: Recognizing that you aren't the best suited instructor of a field.
    • Dreamwalking: Learning to alter your dream manifestation
    • Dreamwalking: Knowing what aspects of your dream manifestation might mean.
    • Detection: Sensing a different kind of smell where it shouldn't be.

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