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23rd of Saun 722

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23rd of Saun 722
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For a moment, out in the Stormwastes, Rakvald had come face to face with the possibility of crossing that threshold. The point of no return, total merging of the entity that granted his power and his own flesh. There'd be no return, no retracing his steps should he go that far. He knew the power was something he'd wanted. For as long as he'd lived, some form of arcane influence had been surrounding him. He had grown up a reborn Lotharro in Quacia, his former iteration having been destroyed by a failed initiation that later took hold on the child that resulted. And his adopted father was a powerful mage. He'd been surrounded and ensconced in magic from birth. The memories of his prior lives and fathers were the most separation he got from the alien being that took residence in his soul.

He came to the conclusion, with the emotioal upheaval of Ildred's ultimatum, and his own maelstrom of conflict that he couldn't take that step. Not yet, perhaps not ever. Rakvald liked himself the way he was. Could he surrender that to some unknown factor, in the hopes of gaining some measure of power? Who was he really anymore? The Hunchback cephalopod that had emerged from the various mutations to his flesh, or the mortal soul of Rakvald Devukrantz. As he held the small trinket in the palm of his clawed hand, he considered this.

And for a moment, the Inheritor nearly spoke to him, its will so strong an influence now that it could just about command him to action. There were other sparks, but the Inheritor as he'd come to know it, was strongest by far. He closed his glassy eyes for a moment, and then without attmepting to think on it more than another moment, he slipped the ring onto his right ring finger. Then, a most excruciating reversal began. He felt the tentacled arm begin to shift and warp, knitting itself back together, the bone regrowing.

His face began heating up, bubbling with the heat of the changes underlying his very soul's fabric, as the sparks went dormant, and all of the witchmarks began to subside, all of the mutations, all of the power dissolved in that instant. It was horrid, and he did groan as Renfreud drove their carriage onwards to Rharne.

When he recovered his faculties, he took a look in a reflective surface nearby. There, he saw the reflected human face of Jim Fino, the man whose totem he wore at the moment, the one he'd chosen to put his feet forward with. He'd still go by his name, and not hide who he was. But for now, this was the closest thing to an ordinary human form that he possessed, his Lotharro form having been sacrificed on the altar of arcane evolution arcs ago.

Renfreud's wagon rolled on, and he saw the ramshackle hovels of the outer Dust Quarter now passing him by in the porthole window of the carriage. When at last they passed a watering hole, Rakvald hailed Renfreud in Vahanic. "Stop Renfreud. I will get out here."

Having said it, the carriage groaned to a slow brake. Then, Ravald stepped out, clothed in a voluminous robe of simple but thick cloth. It was raining outside, torrentially, and overcast overhead. Rakvald threw the cowl of the robe over his head, and passed a bit of coin to Renfreud, along with a list. "This is what I"ll need. I've included measurements for the tailors and outfitters. Do not let it go astray."

"Yes Master." Renfreud said, his eyes strange as he regarded the dormant mage's new features. He wasn't sure what the Quacian thought of his sudden transformation. But he did trust that REnfreud would continue to be patient. Rakvald would eventually teach him what he knew, but he had issues to iron out first.

Then, the carriage roared back to full trot into the Earth Quarter, and Rakvald entered a tavern, with a Pig on its sign. The Painted Swine. Interesting, that he, once a pig rancher, should come full circle at this of all places.

Regardless, he entered, and looked around at the sparse crowd of patrons before approachig the bar.

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Saun 23rd, Arc 722
For the love of shadows, the voice of reason (or lack there of) had seen brawls that could've been avoided! With the seasons on the cusp of renewal, some found themselves stagnant. Minimal progress. Minimal changes. Minimal steps towards a lofty goal. Put in perspective - comparing to seasons gone, what little had been done. What was the goal however? Was it named? Was it even sustainable? Did it exist? Perhaps in useless thoughts like these one could truly understand ones measure of 'progress'. Some weren't afforded that, and currently one in particular was dealing with a retrospective of time and self.

Rozkia had left her living arrangement (calling it home felt... wrong, in recent trials) and stepped under the overcast skies of Rharne. It had been short of an arc since her memories had come rushing back and more people broke into her life and derailed her course. Rozkia found herself just staring up at the sky for a few bits, waiting, watching, hoping for some sort of sign. Alas, it wasn't meant to be easy and the path she was on now saw no chance for her to back out and change yet again. By rarity of miracles, perhaps. If something big happened and maybe took down all her associates, perhaps. Until that day her course was locked, and all because of the hand she had accepted. She had dug in too deep the moment she agreed - it wasn't like she couldn't have said no.

If she had, she would have been killed. She clicked her tongue as the first droplet of water hit her check and slid down. So began her trek through the quarters of Rharne.

She made a choice, not yet ready to forfeit her existence, and that lead her to the current moment. Did she still want this burden? Is that what the deal for power had become? Was it worth it? Too many questions without answers. Her unfocused eyes scanned the dirt path of the dust quarter, boots crunching against the gravel, grit, and dirt. If she had remained on her path - the one she had when first arriving in Rharne - would she be better off? Would being labeled a black sheep of her race be a good thing? he ground her teeth in frustration, clawed hands twitching, longing to dig into the soft flesh of her palms. She had looked so happy and cheerful when talking to people of Rharne then. Bah, they meant little. Their significance long since faded even from the recesses of her mind. If she couldn't even picture one kind face, what good would being on the same path as then do her?

Stupid, wretched, damned fools who thought she would lay down and take whatever abuse they threw at her forever. Look at us now, she wanted to shout. We are more powerful, she would have raved. No, it wouldn't change anything. Even more than that, it would be untrue. There were still those more powerful than she, those more talented and gifted than she. Those better off, than she. And she would consider to resent them bitterly, if only from the depths of her envy of them. Frustration bubbled over, and Rozkia's face seemed to take the shape of her rage as she stepped into the first tavern available.

She planted herself at the bar, glaring any lesser that got to close away. If only for the sole purpose of maintaining her seat, she eased up a bit as Tom Barber walked towards her with a raised brown. Challenging, as if to ask is this the hill? Rozkia ground her teeth that mouth harder, brows pinched. She ordered a drink, anything, nothing, something... she didn't care as long as his judgmental and accusatory stare went with him. He rolled his shoulders and returned with a simple ale before he left again. If only to insult him behind his back (because he turned away too fast, Rozkia might have argued) she sniffed the drink audibly before taking a sip. If it garnered a few looks, she gave them back tenfold the intensity whether or not it worked.

Rozkia turned in her chair so that she could face the door and sip from her tankard in the meanwhile. Perhaps in some way, her angry air was enough. She gave everyone heated stares, wiling hem to keep their eyes and persons to themselves. Surely no one would approach the bar seats with her aggressive display, right? Absolutely wrong; a tall lesser (tall by her standards anyway) with.. blue eyes and short hair. Covered in fine robes, thick of fabric. He seemed to either not notice or disregard her aggression, and that made her lips turn downwards as she displayed her teeth. She drummed her claws on her tankard in her hands as he to closer, each tap a bit more harsh than the last until she matched his footsteps as he approached. Two sips of the drink and now she was abandoning it in favor of keeping the tankard in one piece.

"We hope you do not intend to sit near us." She warned when he was in earshot over the chatter. "We are not having a good trial and would hate for you to take the brunt of it."
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Rakvald’s natural inclination when entering a tavern was to sit as close to the bar as possible. Afterall, that’s where the drinks were dealt, and most of the best conversations and games were had. So he gravitated toward there, dressed in his glorified tarp of a robe that he’d thrown on in haste in the wagon. It felt strange, having a left arm that had bone, and all the mutations off, removed. Renfreud wouldn’t like it, any and all forestalling of his learning magic would rankle on his apprentices’ nerves. But Rakvald needed this, he needed it in order to decide how he would proceed with his life. Would he leave magic by the wayside, and try to rebuild his mortal life with his family, or would he seek apotheosis, and the pinnacle of a craft he’d revered for most of his life?

It wasn’t an easy decision. It was the split between the heart and mind that challenged him presently. But for now he was willing to give ordinary mortal life a chance.

The lady that was sitting alone at the bar, seemed to scare off most of the customers. Probably because of her foreboding look, in part, but also maybe because she was rather attractive, even for a naer.

She spoke to Rakvald in royal we’s as if she belonged to some greater organization. He looked around, and as he settled into the stool directly beside her, he asked, “Where’s the we, lady? Looks like you’re all on your lonesome.”

Tom Barber looked to Rakvald, impassively and asked, “What’ll it be mate?”

“Uh, get me your strongest brew. Something to really skewer my brain.”

Tom nodded, and smiled, “That’ll be ‘No Regrets’. Tattoos are complimentary with the drink, by the way, if you’re still standing by the time you get to the bottom of your glass.”

Rakvald smiled broadly, and stretched. “This’ll be a cinch then. Yeah I wouldn’t mind getting marked up…” He looked down at his arm, where his witchmark would’ve been. There just smooth and slightly hairy skin. Not so much as a mark on it.

He waited for the drink to get brought, without spending time in conversation with the naer next to him. It took some shaking of a cocktail, and a greenish spirit added to the drink that gave it an eerie appearance.

“Looks good.” Rakvald commented. Then he looked to the naer, “You want one? I’m Rakvald by the way. What did you say your name was?…”

The drink was set in front of Rakvald before long, and Tom Barber left his patrons to their own devices.

Rakvald took a swig of the drink, and nearly coughed it up, but managed to swallow it down with some effort. He looked at the naer next to him, “Hey, you wanna try this? It’ll make you feel gnarly as a pig’s innards! But at least it’s tasty!”
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Notes/Warnings: Kinda abandoned thread that never got off the ground. I'm not claiming knowledge because Rakvald didn't learn too much and my word count is a bit low.


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Oh man, I really love how you detail Rakvald's history in the first post. It's beautifully done and your understanding of the character and the link he has with (his) magic(s) is really on display and something you should be exceptionally proud of because it's amazing and incredibly articulate and clear. The reader can really see how difficult it is for him as he dances on the edge of revealdom. And then his foray into the life of an ordinary human! It left me wanting to know what else he would do, what he would end up choosing - the mundane life wth his family of the life of power and arcance knowledge! I'll just have to find more from him to see! I always enjoy your writing and, even though this thread did not progress much, it was still a very good read and certainly worth the points.

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I love your description and the tangible emotion throughout your post. I didn't know much about Rozkia before reading but I could feel what she felt afterwards. Your writing is so good and left me with a good sense of where she came from and what motivated her to be where she was in this moment, of what led to her being and feeling what she was in this thread. I adore her attitude and how well you portray it here and only wish there was a bit more to read. She's a fun, chip-on-her-shoulder sort and I was left wanting more.

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Overview: It's a shame this thread didn't progress beyond these few posts yet I felt the writing was good enough to award you both points. I'm looking forward to reading more from both your characters in the future <3


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