Review Requests 2.2.7

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Review Requests 2.2.7

Peer Review Requests
PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.



Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: There is no minimum word count, however, we feel that 1500 is a worthwhile number to strive for, for each participant. That said, we will not be hard enforcing word count. Individuals found abusing this system in order to powerplay will be dealt with accordingly, as individuals.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may usually choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. In most cases, this is the minimum. However, if the evidence of collaboration is strong enough, then a Peer Reviewer may award Collaboration Knowledge for less posts. If you feel this applies to you, identify the "additional" knowledge in your review and put forward a brief (one or two sentence) justification. For every post made after three, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Abandoned Collaboration Threads: Sometimes a collaboration doesn't work out. If one of your partners is absent for a length of time or loses inspiration, or the thread itself becomes non-canon you can submit a thread as abandoned. When an abandoned thread is graded, all participants are entitled to full knowledge and XP awards. If your thread does not meet the criteria for a collaboration's full rewards (outlined above) while you will still be given xp credit of a collaboration, you may only claim knowledge awards as if it were solo thread.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.


Roleplay Standards and Rules:
  • As reviewers, it's our job to ensure that roleplay standards are upheld, such as playing to skill level. Those posting threads for review must identify skills used, skill levels, for the feats they are accomplishing. Reviewers should compare skill levels versus the poster's feats. If they do not match, reviewers may deny the review request until the player(s) fix the issues within the thread. Until then, the reviewer should mark the player's request as not approved. They are instead to identify the issue with the thread, message the player on the site, and review the players within the thread who have adhered to standards. Then they can move on to the next review if they wish.'
  • Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.
  • Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.


Wealth Points and Rewards: Once the seasonal Wealth Thread has been completed, players may request WP from other threads so long as they take place in that season and the PC is gaining additional wealth via IC means. The maximum per additional thread is 1 WP

Peer Reviewers may deny this request, and can only approve up to 1 WP.

Prophets reviewing modded threads may approve more than that, specific to the event and/or city-based approval.

Please note, this does not apply to business threads and the like, which have their own system for the acquisition of wealth points. If claiming Wealth points for a business thread, please note in the request and provide appropriate links to relevant information.

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[b]Thread Name:[/b] (Name with link included)
[b]City/Area:[/b] (Where is this taken place in?)
[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Skills Used:[/b] ex. Combat: Blades. Currently Competent (26 XP, 50 knowledge). 

[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) 
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7


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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Up Came the Suns and Dried up all the Rain
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Implied undressing. I believe he used the Ezere Chilling Finger correctly, in that it protects them from death by cold while making them extremely uncomfortable, until it wears off and returns them to warmth.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Caregiving: x 2
Medicine: x 2
Fieldcraft: x 2


Loot/Losses: nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Caregiving
Competent: Medicine, Fieldcraft.
Expert: Athletics, Endurance.
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Nothing Used.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Gaining Strength
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Detection: Expert (76/250, 29 knowledges), Endurance: Competent (26/250, 15 knowledges), Medicine: Master (151/250, 102 knowledges), Strength: Competent (26/250, 22 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge

Endurance: x 3
Strength: x 3
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore muscles in her arms and hands from exercising, and pushing her limits somewhat with the exercises; nothing rest won't cure
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Natalia
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope - just meditation!

Skills Used:
Meditation - Novice
Discipline - Expert
Detection - Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline - x2
Meditation - x4

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: No, Solo
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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Living Nightmare
City/Area: Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: This is a non-lucid dream thread.
Skills Used: N/A

Requested Rewards:
Darius
15 XP
Yeva
15 XP
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Busker Fest] Encore
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Detection: Competent (26/250, 14 knowledges), Musical Instrument; Percussion: Competent (26/250, 17 knowledges), Singing: Expert (51/100 - FT skill, 31 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Small (10) for giving a public performance
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When and Where
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post/Spit
Notes/Warnings: Dock is a personal npc and Brock is a NPC from Etzos' Forbidden Post.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Clavam
Smithing: The working of a bloomery furnace
Smithing: Iron can turn into steel if it is smelted with certain compounds.
Smithing: The tap for the slag empties into a waste compartment for the less useful material.
Smithing: The bloom contains the more refined and useable iron metal.
Smithing: Emptying the molten metal into moulds.
Strength: Repetitive motions can improve muscle capacity for those movements.
Skillplay
Novice: Strength, Smithing, Discipline, Endurance, Resistance, Detection.

Loot: 3 iron ingots
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no



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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Withdrawn Will re-submit.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fishing with quarrels, quarrels with fishes
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: A bit choppily written. Sorry!
Skills Used: Hunting (GM); Detection, Fieldcraft (both Master); Strength (Expert); Combat: Ranged, Socialization (both Competent); Smithing (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

[Combat: Ranged] Correcting one's aim when shooting into water.
[Hunting] Bowfishing is a thing!
[Hunting] Bowfishing calls for specialized arrows.
[Smithing] Modifying a crossbow bolt for fishing.
[Stealth] Minimizing the amount of sound one makes while moving in water.
[Strength] Using an uncomfortable workaround for reloading a crossbow with a reel attached near the stirrup.


Loot: One homemade fishing reel.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: None.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Of Dorans and Eckmans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I've written about something mentioned in the calendar. This thread might be slightly weird. I don't want any knowledges this time.
Skills Used: GM Discipline (250x/90k), GM Detection (250x/121k), Expert Socialization (76x/100k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: -
Loot: A set of 'The Forged' action figures.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe a little?
Wealth Points: Probably not. Doran's Tier 10, so I don't think he needs to spend WP in order to acquire action figures.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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