[Kisaik] I love being a turtle!

[Pegasus]

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Saoire has asked Kisaik to bring turtles to Faldrass.

• Get some help learning about turtles. - Done!
• Prepare a place for your turtles to be - Shellknight Lodge is functioning! what else do you need?
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair Panhandlers - Done!
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair or eggs of Paddlesnatches.
• Learn about, find, and return an Old Betty and a Fat Bob
• Learn about, find, and return a collection of Gasping Skitterer eggs
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair of Turtledoves.
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair of Sous Sniffers
• Learn about, Find, and Return a breeding pair of Tiny Tucks
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair of Treetles
• Learn about, find, and return a breeding pair of Snatchers

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Saoire is so excited!

[Kisaik]

Thread with link: Review Request Never Give Up
Summary of Story: Kisaik finds a turtle expert at Saoire's school. He enlists his, as well as the help of his three flavor students, a trio of squirrel cadouri named the brothers Arcio to give him lessons and insight into the turtle types on Scalvoris.
Anything else relevant? NPC info

!	Message from: Peg
	Noted! You'll find that, after they're sure that Kisaik can be trusted, the brother Arcio will be invaluable help. They know of a legend which tells of a whistle (a tunawa-sized whistle, no less) which calls turtles. They suggest that this is more than a legend! It's a real thing! You should quest for it!

[Kisaik]

Thread with link: Turtlequest: Panhandlers
Summary of Story: Kisaik retrieves some panhandlers with the help of some npcs from Saoire's Dream.
Anything else relevant? NPC Links

!	Message from: Peg
	Excellent start! One of the panhandlers takes a shine to Kisaik and will follow him. It will do everything it can to find Kisaik, to be his friend. It's like it's imprinted on him as its mother.

[Kisaik]

Thread with link: The Turtle Whistle Review Request

Summary of Story: Kisaik searches for turtles most of the day of the 45th to no avail with the brothers Arcio and Peter the Panhandler. The Brothers share a story about a turtle summoning whistle, that hangs from the Emerald Tree. And how nobody can handle it unless they're related to the tunawa that it was carved from. Kisaik is inspired by this story, and makes a beeline for the Emerald Tree, guided by the brothers and followed by Peter. Eventually they make it to the tree. There, they find it has fallen from its branch. Dispondent, Chip sulks for a while after sending the brothers back to Hopetoun Hole. Then, unexpectedly, Peter the Panhandler finds the Whistle in the ground, after digging around! Kisaik takes the whistle after treating Peter, and climbs the Emerald Tree. From its lowest branch, he whistles the whistle, calling on his Echo Domain to be able to wield the whistle belonging to the long-departed tunawa it was carved from. To his incredulous eyes, Ol' Tuck himself sidles by the forest, and winks at Kisaik. An Old Tuck sighting! Kisaik surmises that this means the whistle works, and that Old Tuck's appearance is a sign of blessing on his quest. He slides down the tree, and goes back to Hopetoun Hole with Peter the Panhandler, to inform the brothers Arcio of his success.

Anything else relevant? He found the turtle whistle. Not sure if I need your permission or a special grade for that.

!	Message from: Pegasus
	Turtle whistle is approved. I'll add a note to Jackalope's review. Additional note: should Kisaik ever decide to become a Song Forged, Ol'Tuck will recognise him. Additionally, fairies in Sweetwine are more likely to be positive / helpful to him. Thanks! ✔

[Kisaik]

Thread with link: The Founding of Shellknight Lodge
Summary of Story: This is showing the start of his building of Shellknight Lodge, which will be a place for his Green Knights to live and work, and watch over the Turtles they ferry over to Hopetoun Hole.
Anything else relevant? The roof is resistant to fire!

!	Message from: Peg
	Approved! Nice nice - and a fire resistant roof!

[Kisaik]

Thread with link: A Shellter against Outrageous Fortune
Summary of Story: I dipped midway through the thread, but it shows SHellknight Lodge finished, and sanctioned by one of the Barons of Smooglenuff.
Anything else relevant? Not sure. Darius fought off a Drawer Dragon singlehandedly.

!	Message from: Peg
	Thanks - this shows Shellknight Lodge as functional so is useful!

[Pegasus]

First post amended, also