Review Requests 2.2.6

For completed review request threads only.

Moderators: Staff, Peer Reviewer, Wiki Worker, 18+ Peer Reviewer

User avatar
Diana
Approved Character
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:58 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thing of Rumour
Renown: 40
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Image
word count: 16
User avatar
Diana
Approved Character
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:58 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thing of Rumour
Renown: 40
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: No Regrets
City/Area: Rharne, Dust Quarter
Notes/Warnings: getting a job.
Skills Used:

Socialization: Novice
Resistance: Novice/Untrained
Storytelling: Competent
Seduction: Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Resistance: Strong Beer: A blue brew, that tastes vaguely of berries. A weaker drink.
Socialization: Exchanging a simple greeting with a prospective employer.
Socialization: Giving your name, and getting one in return is a simple exchange.
Storytelling: Relating experiences in a way that portrays you in a positive light can change another's perspective.
Seduction: Leaning toward a person to convey personal interest.
Seduction: Not everyone is desperate enough to respond to flirtation.

Loot: A job at the painted swine.
Injuries/Overstepping: nope maybe a light buzz.
Renown: got a jeirb. Maybe 5-10 points.
Wealth Points: Job thread for Ashan
Collaboration: nope
Image
Last edited by Diana on Mon Jun 28, 2021 1:14 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 133
User avatar
Dandelion
Approved Character
Posts: 556
Joined: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:43 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 230
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Done and Dusted
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Animal husbandry (comp), Mount (comp), Navigation (nov), Leatherworking (comp), Cooking (comp), Fieldcraft (exp), Detection (comp), Socialisation (untrained), Appraisal (untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Skill:
Leatherworking: fir can be used as a tanning agent
Leatherworking: birch can be used as a tanning agent
Leatherworking: willow can be used as a tanning agent
Leatherworking: stale urine can be used to dehair hides
Leatherworking: worn and rubbed places show up darker than the original colour
Athletics: swinging up into a saddle


Non skill
Location: Dust market

Loot: Tier 3 quality saddle soap, flour, salt (all within his tier, I think)
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review
word count: 131
User avatar
Diana
Approved Character
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:58 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thing of Rumour
Renown: 40
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fun with Tenses
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Some mature references and themes.
Skills Used:

Socialization: Novice
Detection: Novice/Untrained
Endurance: Novice
Storytelling: Competent
Intimidation: Novice/Untrained.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: Not letting our upset show on the surface.
Discipline: Losing your calm only to regain it.
Endurance: Climbing stairs can take a lot of energy out of you.
Socialization: Standing stubborn when a friend tries to lead you astray.
Storytelling: Stories of the past and future can be told to impress the listener, if they happen to be correct.
Storytelling: Confidence men and soothsayers alike make obtuse references that may seem relevant to one's story, but they aren't.


Loot: Fortune told, Mortalborn status suspected.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Image
word count: 133
User avatar
Diana
Approved Character
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:58 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thing of Rumour
Renown: 40
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Bedtime Story
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Murder, violence, and some awkward slobbering over a wine-soaked drunk. Nothing explicit or graphic. References to dismembering a guy but nothing graphic.
Skills Used:

Stealth: Novice
Combat (Blades): Competent
Endurance: Novice
Larceny: Novice/Untrained
Socialization: Novice
Storytelling: Competent
Discipline: Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Combat (Blades): Knowing where your weapon is hidden on your body, to maintain swift access.
Discipline: Seeing a dead body as less than sentient/human in order to make cutting it up easier on one's conscience.
Larceny: Grabbing a man's purse when he's passed out.
Seduction: Convincing a drunkard to come home with you.
Storytelling: Message in a Bottle: About a bottle of rum that imparts its wisdom of sleep to the imbiber.
Storytelling: Let the audience tell parts of the story with you.

Loot: a bag of the dead and cloak of hiding paid for by point bank. 2 bits of energy from Diana's victim, via her Emptiness Domain ability.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion.
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: Job thread, lol.
Collaboration: no
Image
Last edited by Diana on Thu Jul 01, 2021 1:44 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 185
User avatar
Vega
Approved Character
Posts: 2763
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Hat-Wearer
Renown: 1724
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ Face-Off~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Darius

Skills Used:
  • Caregiving (Competent),
  • Detection (Expert)
  • Discipline (Expert)
  • Etiquette (Competent)
  • Investigation (Competent)
  • Leadership (Master)
  • Socialisation (Expert)
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Caregiving: Get down to the same level as an individual to avoid being threatening.
Detection: Noticing when there is a change in the feel of a place.
Etiquette: Sorry. Just sorry. Nothing else.
Investigation: Finding out who knows what - and who has been informed.
Leadership: Prioritising important information, even when tired.
Leadership: Some tasks require immediate attention.
Leadership: Making decisions based on what's best for the settlement, not yourself.
Socialisation: Negotiating with a medic to stay in your settlement.
Socialisation: Giving a brief summary of an impending situation.
Socialisation: Negotiating a difficult situation with a vulnerable individual.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Ari'sora: Has a new physical appearance.
Ari'sora: Does not remember her involvement with the Faldrass eruption.
Ari'sora: Has a victim mentality.
Vega: Tact might not be her strength.
Vega: Takes a strike first, ask later approach.
Vega: Is passionate in everything that she does.
Vega: Changed Ari'sora's appearance.

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: Yes, please, if appropriate
Wealth Points: NA

Ari'sora

Skills Used:
  • Detection; Competent (26/250, 32 knowledges),
  • Medicine; Competent (26/250, 35 knowledges),
  • Socialization; Unskilled (0/250, 15 knowledges)
Requested Rewards:
Detection: you can tell what herbs have been used in an herbal remedy by its color and scent

Detection: you can tell what type of topical herbal remedy you have by the way it looks and feels

Logistics: it is very important to know how many supplies you have because knowing what you have means that you will know when you need to request more of something so you won't run out of it

Medicine; Herbal Remedies: some herbal remedies such as teas, syrups, tinctures, decoctions, and others are taken internally, others such as salves, lotions, balms, poultices, and others are used topically

Medicine; Herbal Remedies: an herbal salve is an oil based medicine that consists of a carrier oil that is infused with herbs, resins or other medicinal compounds and wax that is used to thicken it for easier use. Beeswax is the type of wax that is most commonly used for this, but other types can be used as well. Salves can hold their shape outside of the container they are stored in, but may “melt” on contact with body heat.

Medicine; Herbal Remedies: an herbal lotion is a mixture of water, plant oils and an emulsifying agent to hold them together; lotions are easily absorbed into the skin

Medicine; Herbal Remedies: herbal balms are fragrant ointments or preparations that are used to heal or soothe the skin

Medicine; Herb: uses of basil

Medicine; Herb: peppermint oil is good for easing pain and reducing inflammation


Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: If appropriate
Wealth Points: NA

Vega

Skills Used:
  • Discipline (Master)
  • Socialisation (Competent)
  • Logistics (Competent)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Not thumping someone who irritates you
Discipline: Recognising that there might be a good reason for doing something you don't like.
Discipline: Don't shake stupid people, it's not good.
Logistics: Identify key people for working together
Logistics: Arranging for alternative travel, in case someone needs to leave.
Socialisation: Pointing out why something is unreasonable
Socialisation: Dealing with a disagreement by talking it out
Socialisation: Mutual apologies help to move forward
Socialisation: Explain why someone is stupid, to help them not be.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Please , if appropriate
Wealth Points: Nope.



Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Image
word count: 597
Image

Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
User avatar
Woe
Approved Character
Posts: 2371
Joined: Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:46 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Éminence grise
Renown: 1455
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Image


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Alone, Finally.
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Socialization: Persuading your friend to carry a letter halfway across the island for you.
Socialization: Negotiating a meeting with the leader of a major faction.
Writing: Writing a letter to a Baron.
Writing: Forming a proper address and salutation, as best you can.
Writing: Making a compelling argument that touches on several points.
Writing: Penning an argument for why magic is good.

Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Writing, Etiquette, Brewing.
Expert: Detection, Meditation, Discipline, Seduction.
Master: Socialization.
GM: Psychology
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

Image
word count: 117
Image*Image*Image
User avatar
Diana
Approved Character
Posts: 115
Joined: Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:58 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thing of Rumour
Renown: 40
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Wages of Sin
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Murder clean-up. Drunken haze. Tattoos
Skills Used:

Novice: Logistics, Endurance, Deception, Detection, Resistance.
Competent: Storytelling.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Deception: Telling someone to trust you definitely is a good way to get them to.
Endurance: Enduring the pain of a tattoo needle.
Logistics: Cleaning up a crime scene for the murderer.
Resistance: No Regrets: A drug-laced beer that lowers inhibitions severely, and is highly addictive.
Resistance: Alcohol can lower one's inhibitions.
Resistance: A drug-addled haze can lead to strange escapades.

Loot: paid for a medical kit and a cleaner's kit (Tier 10 both) Subtracted 20 wp from my ledger. Also paid for a season's worth of average drugs (-3 WP), paid for a bespoke tattoo (-2wp)
Injuries/Overstepping: She used average drugs and alcohol, so maybe some side effects related to memory/situational awareness lasting a few trials.
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Deductions made.
Collaboration: no
Image
word count: 166
User avatar
Devin
Approved Character
Posts: 1644
Joined: Tue Apr 03, 2018 4:25 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Baron Smooglethorn
Renown: 1145
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Where No Spirits Rest
City/Area: Scalvoris/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event. Kind of. Devin is unusually well-behaved, so, it may be slightly dull. Pegasus gave me permission to use Nyjj even though he is a mage as long as he doesn’t use any magic. The title is a reference to the lack of spirits, ghosts and similar entities at the Spirit's Rest Oasis. I hope I RPed the NPCs realistically!
Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/130k), Master Cosmetology (154x/82k), Master Detection (151x/50k), Expert Meditation 80x/29k), Expert Discipline (80x/49k), Competent Etiquette (26x/48k), Competent Logistics (26x/14k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: It’s important that your accessories kind of match
Detection: Faint lines in someone’s eyes
Detection: The smell of strawberries
Etiquette: Don’t flirt with the people you want to have a professional relationship with
Meditation: Deep breaths help you relax
Logistics: When planning a project, make sure that you have ample time

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Yes, please. Devin is making connections and such.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed
word count: 189

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
[/list]
User avatar
Gennadiya Lyosha Doctor
Approved Character
Posts: 837
Joined: Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:51 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Physician
Renown: 838
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Saoire Event for Gennadiya and Cyrus
City/Area: Saoire Dream
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards: Gennadiya
Skills Used: Socialization (Novice)
Knowledge: Linguistic x2
Socialization x2
Detection x2
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: None

Requested Rewards: Cyrus
Will request when get the chance.


Image
word count: 54
Locked Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Archive Review Request Threads”