Review Requests 2.2.6

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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name:Fire on the Water
City/Area: Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Old collab that we've decided to abandon due to length of time. Yeva posted once and I was told that she could submit for xp. She is not requesting knowledge.
Prae
Skills Used
Leadership (Master)
Defiance (master)
Polearm (Master)
Shield (GM)
Tactics (GM)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership x8
Tactics x2

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Yeva
Skills Used
Detection - Expert
Discipline - Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
XP only

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used
Tactics (Expert)
Combat - Blade (Master)
Strenght (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Acrobatics (Competent)
Detection (Master)
Discipline (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Athletics - Spinning one's body to connect combat elements
Combat - Blade - The hilt of a sword can be used to destabilize an opponent
Combat - Bludgeon - Using sword hilt to knock attackers unconscious
Combat - Unarmed - Smashing an attacker's foot can make them release you
Detection - Keeping eyes open for new threats
Tactics - Letting an ally know their back is clear
Tactics - Taking advantage of the enemy's sloppy tactics
Tactics - Attacking while enemy is reorganizing is an effective strategy
Tactics - Safety in numbers
Tactics - Tactics are more than just stabbing someone with a sword

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Midnight Musings
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: A bit of melancholy. NPC Balder is an approved Haven npc.

Skills Used:
Writing - Competent
Discipline - Expert
Meditation - Expert
Leadership - Expert
Detection - Master
Politics - Novice
Psychology - Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Detection - The quiet of an empty house
Writing - Writing a letter of introduction
Leadership - Understanding that establishing ties is essential
Leadership - A wide period of transition between leadership is preferred
Psychology - Trauma leaves effects that linger
Politics - Understanding the motivations behind decisions is tricky


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: No


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ All The Roads We Have To Walk Are Winding~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Vega

Skills Used:
  • Psychology (GM)
  • Woodcrafting (GM)
  • Caregiving (Competent)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woodcrafting: The knots in wood can be used as a feature
Woodcrafting: Carving decorative images.
Woodcrafting: Making smaller pieces for a frame
Caregiving: Challenge negative beliefs
Caregiving: Using examples for a child can help them understand
Caregiving: Pointing out someone's strengths to build self-esteem.

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: Nurp
Renown: Nope, I don't think so?
Wealth Points: Nurp

Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: The Quailing Quill: Part 1
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, PB News
Notes/Warnings: Part 1 of 6 (?) - The thread goals are a summary of my plan for the thread series so far. I didn't add full skill knowledges because I couldn't think of anything else haha.
Skills Used: Negotiation (nadda xp)
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Negotiation: Trading services
Bookbinding: A filing system
Investigation: Ask for names


Non-Skill Knowledges:
History: PB Sistership Dissolved
Penny: Doesn't resent her sister


Loot: Newspaper from PB (Ymiden's Dawn Arc 721)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Whatever is appropriate
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No


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Reviewed!
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6




Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Starling's Nest
City/Area: Rharne/stormlands
Notes/Warnings: reference to bird stool.
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Untrained: Animal Training, Animal Husbandry.
Novice: Navigation. Musical Instrument: Wind
Competent: Deception, Socialization, Psychology, Endurance, Strength.
Expert: Detection, Intimidation.
GM: Singing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Training: Convincing a bird to follow you, with the promise of food and safety.
Musical Instrument (Wind): an Ocarina made of whistlewood x 2
Animal Husbandry: Starlings enjoy some seed to eat.
Navigation: Follow the road, if you can't see the way.
Tarouz: Bird Tongue: Allows one to speak with and understand birds.


Loot: A pet/companion male starling bird.
Injuries/Overstepping: None


Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No






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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Ymiden's Dawn
City/Area: Scalvoris/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: A calendar event with a hint of (or a lot of?) meditation. It’s a little on the short side. I requested fewer knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Detection (250x/80k), GM Meditation (250x/76k), Master Discipline (151x/76k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: A hint of a salty smell in the air
Detection: How the sky changes color at sunrise
Meditation: Breath counting meditation helps stabilize the mind
Meditation: Using a physical focus to negate the outside world

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Shl'Drei
Reviewed!
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Haul It Down
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Paying off a debt incurred in an earlier thread
Skills Used: Animal husbandry (comp), Mount (comp), Navigation (nov), Leatherworking (comp), Cooking (comp), Fieldcraft (exp), Strength (comp), Detection (comp), Discipline (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Skill:
Leatherworking: an animal's brain makes a good tanning agent
Leatherworking: leather stiffens if not cared for
Leatherworking: stiffened leather is a poor choice for harness
Leatherworking: saddle soap is the best choice for cleaning leather
Leatherworking: hides should be rolled for transport rather than folded
Navigation: retracing a previous route

Non skill
The Stormwastes are being resettled

Loot: -1 field dressed deer carcass, +1 deer hide
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Fight Without Sight
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Attunement (Expert), Tactics (GM), Unarmed (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Using only Omnivision to fight
Tactics x3
Unarmed x2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Attunement
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

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  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Darkest Ink
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: This started out as a lucid dream collaboration between Rakvald and Navyri. But then the dream overhaul got underway, and didn't end up going anywhere. So if I may I'm submitting this as entirely non-lucid. For that reason, it may read weird as a non-lucid dream as he's using powers that aren't available. But non-lucid so... doesn't have to make sense? I tried contacting Navyri 2 weeks ago to see if she wanted to continue this as a non-lucid dream, but she hasn't gotten back to me. So I'm submitting this as abandoned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None



Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Skillplay
None
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Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: None
 ! Message from: Shl'Drei
Reviewed!
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: One-WInged Ithecal
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: described graft/growing a pair of wings. Slightly gory but not too bad.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

Animal Husbandry: The wing structure of a Sohr Khal
Animal Husbandry: Proper care of and construction of wings.
Animal Husbandry: Feathers and membraneous wings make for more capable flight.
Animal Husbandry: Giving a wide berth to a large and potentially aggressive beast can set it at ease, while observing it.
Animal Husbandry: Don't need to touch an animal necessarily to understand it's underlying structure.
Graft: Energizing: Growing a new limb, a wing limb.

Loot: 1 flightless feathered/membraneous (left) wing.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion. But growing a new limb is well within the capability of a graft master.
Renown: reviewer's discretion.
Skillplay
Animal Husbandry: Competent
Endurance: Competent
Intimidation: Competent
Graft: Master
Socialization: Novice/Untrained.
Wealth Points: nope
Collaboration: nope
Magic Experience?: Yes graft, definitely. He learned something new (Growing a new limb)
 ! Message from: Shl'Drei
Reviewed!
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