Review Requests 2.2.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Shadow
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Took me a while to get it to a place that I'm halfway pleased with how it turned out. Still isn't quite there yet, so it might be a little lackluster.
Skills Used: Defiance: expert; detection, socialization: novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Stealth: Being big draws attention
-Stealth: Hiding an unusual appearance under cloak and mask
-Detection: looking for your pursuers
-Detection: spotting things in your peripherals
-Tactics: Wondering how to deal with pursuers
-Intelligence: Guessing at enemy numbers

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Evangeline Quinn
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Breaking the Ice
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Finished Collab - Kain has not logged in since Feb 2021 so requesting for myself. A bit of depression chronicled here.

Skills Used:
Discipline - Novice
Socialization - Novice
Pyschology - Novice
Detection - Novice
Mediation - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology - The source of depression sometimes isn't readily evident
Psychology - Sometimes depression is a one step forward - two steps back proposition
Discipline - Regaining control after being upset
Discipline - Understanding the reasons why one needs learn discipline and how it develops.
Discipline - Sometimes focusing on getting through the trial is the best you can do.
Mediation - Timing breath to waves helps focus
Detection - Recognizing faces of patrons of your place of employment
Socialization - Hiding pain with a smile

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Learning Curve
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned Collab - Kain has not logged in since Feb 2021 so requesting for myself.

Skills Used:
Discipline - Novice
Socialization - Novice
Psychology - Novice
Detection - Novice
Caregiving - Novice
Linguistics - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology - Sometimes releasing emotions helps one move forward
Caregiving - Isn't always about others - Self-care is important.
Socialization - Offering a greeting is polite
Socialization - Offering for someone to join you in conversation
Socialization - Gifts deserve thank-you's.
Socialization - Realizing when you've been rude to another
Linguistics - Regional variations in dialect (Rakahi)
Detection - Noting something that wasn't there before.
Detection - Noting the direction a voice comes from.

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Snow All Around Us
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Finished Collab - Kain has not logged in since Feb 2021 so requesting for myself.

Skills Used:
Discipline - Novice
Socialization - Novice
Psychology - Novice
Detection - Novice
Caregiving - Novice
Fishing - Novice
Teaching - Novice
Fieldcraft - Novice


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection - Movement in the corner of your eye
Detection - Situational awareness
Detection - Recognizing a type of fish (Perch)
Detection - Noting a change in someone's behavior
Socialization - Realizing when a negotiation is going to fail
Socialization - Social cues are important to mind
Socialization - Assisting a stranger with a problem is polite
Socialization - Overhearing talk at work can lead to helpful information
Socialization - Buying food for a stranger is polite
Teaching - Visual aids are helpful
Fieldcraft - Tools can be made out of everytrial items in a pinch

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: A Close Call
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Intimidation (Untrained), Socialization (Novice), Detection (Competent), Leadership (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation x2
Leadership x2
Medicine x1
Socialization x1

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
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  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

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  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

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  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fairies in a Blender
City/Area: Emea/Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Fairy carnage. Bird carnage. Non-lucid dream, so lots of wacky powers invoked that Kal doesn't currently have.
Kalortah
Skills Used:
None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

No knowledge

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Kalortah
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Can Kindness Be Taught
City/Area: Saoire's Dream Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: None. Job prerequisite. used the following npc
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Novice: Teaching, Caregiving.
Competent: Discipline, Meditation, Linguistics, Deception, Acting.
Expert: Detection.
Master: none
GM: Singing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: x 3
Singing: Singers use scales, groups of pitches within an octave in order to warm up their voice.
Teaching: x 2
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
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Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: [Saoire Event] Darius and Zunylanih
City/Area: In dreamland...?
Notes/Warnings: None.
Darius
Skills Used: Combat: Unarmed (Novice), Detection (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Etiquette (Competent), Gambling (Novice), Seafaring (Competent), Socialisation (Expert).

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Combat: Unarmed: Holding your opponent at bay.
Detection: Study the state of cards to check for identifying marks.
Detection: Spotting obvious sleight of hand.
Endurance: Bracing yourself against a howling wind.
Etiquette: How to perform a courtly bow.
Etiquette: Thanking someone is important, even if they aren't the focus.
Gambling: Card decks can be marked.
Seafaring: Sudden changes at sea require a captain to be on guard at all time.
Socialisation: Trying to smooth over a difficult situation.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Zunylanih: Is a bad jongleur.
Zunylanih: Is a sore loser.
Zunylanih: Enjoys masks.
Zunylanih
Zunylanih has been retired and his player is choosing to claim no knowledges unless and until he is brought out of retirement.

Skills Used: N/A.

Requested Rewards:
N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: While You Were Sleeping...
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Some traumatic experiences discussed
Praetorum
Skills Used:
Attunement (Expert)
Socialization (Novice)
Detection (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement - Note: Elisabeth
Socialization x9

Injuries/Overstepping Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Psychology (Expert)
Socialization (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Caregiving (Competent)
Discpline ( Expert)


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Detection - Noting someone's hesitation to answer a question
Detection - Severity of a situation can be evident in mannerisms/voice inflection
Caregiving - Offering to help someone sort their issues
Caregiving - Realizing you didn't fully understand someone's issues
Caregiving - Giving someone a hug to show you care
Psychology - Dealing with difficult topics
Socialization - Expressing to someone how happy you are to see them
Socialization - Apologizing for lying
Socialization - Thanking someone for sharing a traumatic experience
Discipline - Quelling rage within upon hearing of trauma to a loved one


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6




Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Value of Kind Words
City/Area: Saoire's Dream, Faldrass Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: saccharine a bit. Includes two npcs that are written up here
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Novice: Appraisal, Teaching, Caregiving
Competent: Deception, Discipline, Meditation.
Expert: Intimidation, Detection.
GM: Singing.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Appraisal: Figuring out the quality of students' graded work.
Appraisal: Judging the talent of particular students.
Appraisal: x 2
Singing: Brilliant lyrics can make a song or tune more memorable.
Teaching: Giving grades in coded letters.


Loot: Nothing.
Injuries/Overstepping: None


Renown: Teaching a class? Maybe some.
Wealth Points: Wealth thread, will submit for wp.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No






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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

Aliases:
Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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