Review Requests 2.2.6

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Rakvald
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Swine King: Underworld Meat Market
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Non-lucid dream. Abandoned. Very weird, sorry in advance. My part is fairly lackluster, but Darragh's portions were interesting.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

Just xp, Non Lucid dream.

Loot: nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: nothing
Renown: nothing
Skillplay
None used.
Wealth Points: nothing
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Lunch for the Builders
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Part 1 in a series of threads about planning the new manor on Faldrass. I hope the Logistics knowledges work. I've never really written a Logistics thread before!
Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/129k), Expert Discipline (80x/46k), Expert Detection (76x/50k), Competent Cooking (31x/42k), Novice Writing (20x/17k), 0 Logistics, 0 Drawing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Cooking rice (is challenging)
Cooking: Brussel sprouts with walnuts
Cooking: Breaded chicken with glowing eggs
Logistics: Planning a lunch
Logistics: Lists can be helpful when it comes to planning something
Logistics: Planning which protection your manor needs

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 123

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: You Know The Saying
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Balthazar sends a donation to Ria at Haven Farm in response to the crop crisis (this is a thread from last season) and follows up on the Elements information from this review consequence. I'm not claiming full knowledge for it.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Intelligence (GM), Socialization (Expert), Logistics (Expert), Psychology (Expert), Politics (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Politics (Diplomacy) - Offering a potential ally aid in a hard time
Politics (Diplomacy) - Being charitable can build positive partnerships
Logistics - Organizing and preparing a resource donation

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 117

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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6




Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Devin Schmevin
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Devin is slandered! My cringy song-writing, and some other stuff. A little rushed writing at the end.
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Singing: Grandmaster
Intimidation: Expert
Detection: Expert
Athletics: Novice.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Athletics: Ducking some rotten fruit.
Singing: Songs as a method of defaming your rival.
Singing: Song: Devin Schmevin: A song about how plain and dull and insignificant Devin is.
Intimidation: x 3

Loot: Kalortah acquired his portal shoes and domain bag.
Injuries/Overstepping: nah

Renown: Should be a good amount for slandering a famous bard at Delroth's Shrine and performing a song.
Wealth Points: Will be using this as his Zi'da wealth thread.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No







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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Barking Alchemy
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Balthazar uses resources from around Haven and his alchemy kits to experiment. Balthazar writes to the council about an ore from an event last season. Not claiming full knowledge for this one.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Intelligence (GM), Socialization (Expert), Logistics (Expert), Psychology (Expert), Alchemy (Expert), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Science (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Alchemy - Phoenix wood bark properties persist in powder form
Alchemy - Binders are useful for mixing liquids with powders
Alchemy - Combining ingredients to make a fire resistant empowering agent
Science - Hot, purified water reacts differently than tepid water

Loot: If applicable. He is attempting to create a fire resistant paste
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: Unlikely.
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Doran
Submitted for Mod attention. June 11th, 2021.
word count: 140

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6




Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Singing Tournament: Final
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: nope Tilda is an established NPC
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Singing: GM
Discipline: Competent
Detection: Expert
Meditation: Competent
Flying: Expert
Endurance: Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: Maintaining your composure as your mood begins to fray.
Singing: x 3
Tarouz: Covetous Covenant: A covenant fulfilled grants the Tarouz invigoration for a time.
Tarouz: Clothed in Finery: Makes your masterwork outfit all the more resplendant.

Loot: A Masterwork+ Adamantite Sword (Prize approved by Pegasus. I paid from Kalortah's wealth ledger for the tournament, in the price of the sword 14 wp. This is the fifth part of a series where he's organizing and competing in a tournament.)
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion.


Renown: Perhaps substantial for winning a tournament in front of a big crowd.
Wealth Points: No

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No






 ! Message from: Balthazar
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Larza Impre
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Vega
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Even Educated Fleas Do It! ~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Vega

Knowledge:
Skills Used (Skill Level)
DIscipline (Master)
Psychology (GM)
Fiddle (Tier 2)
Socialization (Competent)
Meditation (Expert)

Knowledge Requested
Discipline: Pregnancy makes it more difficult to hold yourself in check.
Discipline: Sometimes, you can focus too much.
Daianara: The Gift of Life: Requires relaxation and focus, not intense concentration
Daianara: The Gift of Life: Is two harmonies making a new song
Meditation: Listen to the sound of someone's life energy
Meditation: Do, don't try to do.

Loot: Not for me. Mavis get a baby!
Injuries/Overstepping: Tiredness for the rest of the trial.

Renown: Yes, please. :)

Wealth Points: Nope

Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Meeting the Builders
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Part 2 in a series of threads about planning the new manor on Faldrass. I only requested 5 knowledges on purpose. I hope the Logistics knowledges work!

Herman is a NPC for Saoire's Dream. Miranda and Marvin are Flavor NPCs. I asked Pegasus if I'd be allowed to use Herman (and add a bit of Gemmi Wood to the roof).

Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/129k), Master Detection (151x/50k), Expert Discipline (80x/47k), Competent Etiquette (26x/48k), 0 Logistics

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Resisting the temptation to coo at Cadouri
Logistics: When planning a house, consider the arrangement of the rooms
Logistics: When planning a house, floorplans are helpful
Logistics: When planning a house, consider the exterior before the interior
Socialization: Persuading a visitor that your pet goat is harmless

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5, for meeting with Saoire's builders.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Hook, Line, And Anchor
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Skills Used: Appraisal (Novice), Caregiving (Competent), Etiquette (Competent), Leadership (Master), Socialisation (Expert).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Appraisal: Ensure the item is fit for purpose.
Appraisal: Finding value in a second opinion.
Caregiving: Meeting a need, even symbolically, can make a difference.
Etiquette: The host should settle the bill.
Leadership: Treating people well can inspire them to follow you.
Negotiation: Providing an incentive for better service.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Item: Ship (Ketch)

Loot: Two ketches of Masterwork quality.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable for purchasing two ships and donating them to Hopetoun.
Wealth Points: Darius is purchasing two ketches. They are considered a Tier 5 vessel. But purchasing from Sea Spray Ships drops the tier price to Tier 4. The ketches are Masterwork Quality, which will cost him 7 WP.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Doran
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Look into the Past
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: A slice of life thread that also involves the acquisition of Doran’s newest signature item. (PSF approval.) I only requested 5 knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Detection (250x/74k), GM Strength (250x/62k), GM Research (250x/121k), GM Science (100x/120k), Master Meditation (155x/76k), Master Discipline (151x/75k), Master Endurance (151x/43k), Expert Unarmed (76x/38k), Expert Socialization (76x/83k), Competent Athletics (26x/12k), Competent Etiquette (26x/56k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: Keeping your center of gravity low improves your balance
Athletics: Warming up helps prevent injuries and improves flexibility
Combat (Unarmed): Spinning kicks
Detection: Changes in one’s environment over the course of time
Discipline: Resisting the temptation to try an enchanted item out immediately

Loot: Ralaith's Spectacles
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Mutations

N/A

Blessings

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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