Review Requests 2.2.6

[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Wether’s Walk
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence and some swearing. Phlegmatic chromatic goats.
Skills Used: Detection, Discipline, Endurance (Expert); Animal Husbandry, Athletics, Combat (Polearm & Staves), Tactics (all Competent)

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Athletics x 1
Combat-Polearms & Staves x 3.
Endurance x 1
Tactics x 1

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer’s discretion.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Little Practice Session
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Combat/acrobatics practice thread. Grindy. Aidan only has Competent Blades and Novice Endurance, so he struggles more than Devin. The package just contains random pieces of wood and cloth; nothing too special.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/91k), Master Athletics (151x/40k), Expert Blades (80x/29k), Expert Discipline (80x/46k), Expert Endurance (76x/36k), Expert Detection (76x/50k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: Walking on a rope
Athletics: Use your arms rather than your legs for balance
Blades: Defending the chest
Blades: Defending the legs
Blades: Defending the shoulders
Blades: Executing a feint

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

!	Message from: Pig Boy
	I will review.

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Power is a Prison
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Woe is weird in the beginning, what else is new. Abandoned slightly. I tried to contact the other player but got no response.
Requested Rewards:

Woe

Knowledge:

Deception: x 2
Discipline: x 1
Investigation: x 2
Meditation: x 1
Psychology: x 4


Loot/Losses: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!

Skillplay

Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Detection, Deception, Abrogation.
Expert: Attunement, Empathy, Socialization, Discipline, Meditation.
Master: Hone
GM: Psychology.

Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Useage of magic wasn't significant enough. No.

[Elisabeth Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Starting Small Scale
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Skill Scale Down has been completed on both CS sheets

Balthazar

Skills Used:
Leadership (GM)
Psychology (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Strength (Expert)
Detection (Expert)
Athletics (Expert)
Engineering (Novice)
Axes and Bludgeons (Novice)
Fieldcraft (Novice)
Woodworking (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Axes and Bludgeons (Two-Hand Focus) - Put the weight of your whole body into a swing
Axes and Bludgeons - Overhand chop with an axe
Axes and Bludgeons - Axes are more top-heavy than swords, but not as bad as hammers
Fieldcraft - Tree bark is good fuel for fires
Fieldcraft - Cutting a wedge into a tree helps control the direction it will fall
Fieldcraft - All parts of the tree, bark, branches, and the core, have different uses for creating a shelter
Woodworking - Trimming branches off a central log to refine the shape
Woodworking - Shaving bark off of a tree


Loot: A tree!
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Elisabeth

Skills Used:
Discipline (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Strength (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Athletics (Competent)
Axes and Bludgeons (Novice)
Fieldcraft (Novice)
Woodworking (Novice)
Logistics (Competent)
Meditation (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics - Weight balance of unfamiliar weapon makes balance tricky
Axes and Bludgeons - Ax-head makes swing much different than that of a blade
Fieldcraft - Bark can be used for starting fires
Fieldcraft - Using resources in your environment
Fieldcraft - Collecting wood to use in fires
Gardening - Bark can be used in mulch
Logistics - Considering different ways to move a tree
Logistics - Considering settlement growth
Meditation - Repetitive actions can promote mindful mediation
Strength - Repetitive motion of clearing limbs is exhausting to arms
Woodworking - Consider eye safety when felling tree
Woodworking - How to fell a tree the proper direction

Loot: A tree!
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~~~ The Point of Hope ~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalv
Notes/Warnings: Ill child. Skills update is done.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Used:
Leadership: GM
Medicine: Competent
Caregiving: Novice.
Psychology: GM

Requesting:
Medicine: The sound of laboured breathing
Medicine: Skin pallor is a sign of illness
Medicine: An individual's determination to fight is important
Caregiving: Distract distressed children with stories
Caregiving: Inject a positive note by talking about a wanted future event
Caregiving: Telling someone that they might be wrong about a negative idea can help them.

Loot: The gratitude of the small mercenary group.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes, please, if appropriate.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic Experience?: No

[Goku]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fighting over a woman
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:
Author's note: I used an antagonist in this thread named Sunpha. I submitted her here:
viewtopic.php?f=233&t=26161#p173035 Antagonist NPC
viewtopic.php?p=174316#p174316 the second half of this topic’s story refers to a wife Goku cheated with. If anyone cares for the backstory here it is. The presumption is that Goku was challenged to a fight for his accidental misdeeds.

Mature tag, note that it has mentions of cheating and sleeping with people

Skills Used:
Detection: Novice
Unarmed: Unskilled
Strength: Expert
Athletics: novice
Endurance: competent
Flying: novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed: 1
Athletics: 1
Endurance: 2
Strength: 2

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: some bruises, nothing long lasting though. Tired from swinging vigoriously
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Look to the Future
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event with a hint of (or a lot of?) philosophy. I asked Pegasus if Doran would be allowed to acquire clothes made of Shaggyoats wool. I only requested 5 knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Detection (250x/73k), Master Meditation (155x/76k), Master Discipline (151x/74k), Expert Socialization(76x/80k), Competent Etiquette (26x/56k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The sound of ice thawing
Detection: The smell of summer
Detection: A hint of caramel and vanilla in one’s coffee
Detection: A knock on the door
Etiquette: Don’t wear old and used clothes to an important event

Loot: 2 masterwork outfits
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: - 1 WP for the aforementioned 2 masterwork outfits
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

!	Message from: Pig Boy
	I will review this

[Elisabeth Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Serious Matters Require Serious....Research?
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Skills Used:
Research - Expert
Psychology - Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None Requested


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: No

Collaboration: No

[Natalia Gregorios]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Ad Astra Per Aspera
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Skills Used:
Business Management - Novice
Writing - Novice
Logistics - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Additional services for minimal effort can be profitable.
Business Management: Aim your business to a specific market
Business Management: Uncommon horses can attract clients.
Business Management: Paying off loans quickly saves money
Business Management: Considering positions and their responsibilities
Writing - Writing out a business plan

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: No

[Mab Prell]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Sea Always Calls You Home
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, The Menagerie
Notes/Warnings: Employment/Hiring Thread At The Menagerie - My first thread for review submission!
Skills Used:
Animal Husbandry (10XP, Novice)
Animal Training (10XP, Novice)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledges:
Politics: The advantages of youth
Politics: The importance of confidence
Animal Husbandry: Sexing owls
Animal Husbandry: Aging owls
Animal Husbandry: Puppies need socialization
Animal Husbandry: Feet are vulnerable to water-borne infections

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Enormowls: Lifespan
Enormowls: Dangerous and Fierce
Elise Flarsdotter: Menagerie Trainer and Caretaker
Mergala: Seahorse Horses
Irrwaddie: Resemble Dolphins
The Menagerie: Purpose
The Menagerie: Layout
Elements: Land Troops Ride Hafrein
Race: Ithecal


Loot: M/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Not sure what's appropriate.
Wealth Points: +1 - Wealth Thread (I think this is my CS? Let me know if I need anything else!)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No