Review Requests 2.2.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Boar's Spirit
City/Area: dreamscape (not lucid)
Notes/Warnings: I put a mature tag. slavery, implication that people are being eaten

Skills Used:
na

Requested Rewards:
none

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


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Thread Name: True North
City/Area: Viden/Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Diana starts out non-lucid, but she becomes lucid when she gets near to and nearly touches Brent, who is lucid. Brent has informed me that they're leaving the game so I'm turning this in as abandoned.
Skills Used:

Novice: Running, Endurance, Resistance, Acrobatics, Strength, Discipline.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: x 6
Discipline: x 2

Loot: nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: A scratched up hand, will take a while to heal with minimal physical activity.
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: The Fake Alchemist, Part 1
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This solo is a reaction to the consequence given to me by Pig Boy in this review. There will likely be sequels where Doran tries to find out more about the shady merchant. I really struggled when it came to naming my Socialization knowledges this time (they were very long), so I made an exception and requested numbered knowledges. The thread's slightly open-ended, so if you want to add something, feel free.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/199k), GM Detection (250x/73k), Master Meditation (155x/73k), Master Discipline (151x/74k), Expert Socialization (76x/80k), Competent Etiquette (26x/56k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Use natural reagents when alchemificating items that come in contact with food
Detection: Noticing differences between two similar pots
Discipline: Maintaining your composure when someone is irritated with you
Socialization x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Furry Friends III
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Skills Used: Socialization, Writing, Research, Leadership (Novice) Animal training, Animal Husbandry (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Animal Training x2
  • Writing x1
  • Research x1
  • Animal Husbandry x1
  • Socialization x1
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Spiderman, Spiderman, Does a couple things a spider can
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: None.


Requested Rewards:
Woe

Knowledge:

Animal Husbandry: x2
Politics: x 3
Investigation: x 3

Loot: Temporary use of riding horse (presumably until he arrives in Scalvoris), a field hunter mare named “Nosey”, and its tackle.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer’s discretion.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration:
Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
Oram

Skills Used: Detection (Expert), Etiquette (Novice), Animal Husbandry, Investigation, Intelligence, Leadership, Logistics, (all Competent)

Knowledge:

Etiquette: Leaving visitors unattended is poor hospitality.
Intelligence: Collected intelligence needs to be organized.
Investigation: Leads may have a time limit not only on availability, but also on usefulness.
Leadership: If someone looks to you for a decision, insist that they then accept that decision.
Logistics: Assigned resources can be reassigned.
Logistics: Leaving visitors unattended is poor security.
Medittion: Contemplating a pleasant vista can refesh and clear one’s mind.
Writing: Taking good notes not only makes it easier to recall things, but also to share them.

Loot: A copy of notes made by Perdita Westcott about the Watchers’ Union.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer’s discretion.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: How to Stare at Mutants 101
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Teaching thread for Devin's Licentiate in Medicine. He's not a very good teacher - yet.
Skills Used: GM Medicine (250x/82k), GM Deception (106x/91k), Master Cosmetology (154x/61k), Master Persuasion (155x/74k), Expert Endurance (76x/36k), Expert Acting (76x/43k), Expert Detection (76x/50k), Competent Teaching (26x/26k), Competent Storytelling (26x/19k), Novice Writing (20x/17k), 0 Drawing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Backcombing gives your hair more volume
Cosmetology: Coconut oil makes your hair shiny
Cosmetology: Combining current fashion trends
Drawing: A very crudely drawn monster head
Medicine: How to take an anamnesis
Medicine: Perform a physical examination after taking an anamnesis

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Any threads put up for review after this point, should be

a) using the new Skills List from the Skills Scale Down (please see the site announcement)

b) should be up to date in terms of their XP and knowledge following that change.

No threads should be put up for review until that's done. Please and thanks!

EDIT: In response to this question here - Clarity for reviews before this.

1. Players may edit their requests here to fit in with the new scaled down skills.
2. If you don't do that - Peer Reviewers will assign "Merged" skills which no longer exist to the most appropriate, following the process here (so - if you've asked for Climbing - they'll give you Athletics, etc. )
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Observations
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Brief mention of the assassin tailing her and his plans. CS has been converted to the new Skills Scale Down system.

Skills Used:
Pyschology - Novice
Detection - Novice
Discpline - Competent
Ettiquette - Novice
Appraisal - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection - Age can be difficult to determine by looks alone
Detection - Body language can indicate a disagreement between people
Detection - Tone of voice can calm or escalate a situation
Detection - Observation can help you figure out what another wants
Detection - Failing to detect you are being followed
Appraisal - Surmising fabric quality by how worn it is


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Treatment
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Defiance: expert; endurance, intimidation: comp, socialization, detection: novice, stealth: untrained

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Intimidation: Threats don't work on people who believe they are untouchable
-Intimidation: Piercing glare
-Medicine: Bad stitches can lead to dehiscence
-Endurance: Reopening a partly-healed wound
-Stealth: entering and leaving a building through the back
-Detection: Quick visual check for people in the immediate vicinity

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, defiance. Maybe.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Black and Blue
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Discipline (nov), Detection (comp), Medicine (nov), Endurance (nov), Mount (comp), Navigation (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill:
Discipline: doing the right thing rather than the preferred thing
Discipline: gathering courage
Discipline: fighting back old memories
Endurance: functioning on little sleep
Endurance: working through the pain of a hurt arm
Medicine: how to treat deep bruises

Nonskill:
Location: Dust Quarter
Location: Dust Quarter Clinic
The Clinic takes payment in kind as well as in cash

Loot: A debt to the Dust Quarter Clinic for treatment, a small pot of bruise ointment
Injuries/Overstepping: Pre-existing bruised arm
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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