Review Requests 2.2.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stretching Out
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Skill thread

Skills Used: Leatherworking (exp), Fieldcraft (exp), Hunting (comp), Strength (comp), Cooking (comp), Athletics (nov), Endurance (nov), Discipline (nov), Detection (comp)

Requested Rewards:
Athletics: counterbalancing an awkward load
Leatherworking: dehairing a deerskin
Leatherworking: scraping a deerskin clean
Leatherworking: braintanning a deerskin
Leatherworking: every animal has just enough brains to preserve its hide
Leatherworking: working a hide over a log to make it more supple


Loot: -1 deerskin, +1 hide of good quality leather
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: Nope.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Knights of the Verses: The Winnowing
City/Area: Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Non lucid dream
Requested Rewards:

Just points no knowledge since it's non lucid. No skills used.

Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: nope
Skillplay
Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Nothing Used.
Expert: Nothing Used.
Masster: Nothing Used.
GM: Nothing Used.
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Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Swords and Shipments
City/Area: Skydas Keep
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Polearm (Master), Shield (GM), Tactics (GM), Endurance (Expert), Logistics (Competent), Business Management (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management x3
Logistics x3

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe? Probably not
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Covering New Ground
City/Area: Skydas Keep
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Attunement (Expert), Leadership (Master), Teaching (Competent), Tactics (GM)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Attunement has a size limit
Teaching x2
Tactics x3

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: maybe?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, for attunement.
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Sleeper and the Saboteur
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post/Spit
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Clavam

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[*]Athletics: Running, jumping, and climbing over hilly terrain.
[*]Discipline:  Facing a dangerous situation with determination.
[*]Leadership:  Impressing a fellow exile with personal fearlessness.
[*]Shield: Shielding against sling missiles.
[*]Shield: Sheltering beneath a shield, when you don't know where the missiles are coming from.
[*]Shield: A shield can only cover you from limited angles of attack.
Skillplay
Novice: Athletics, Discipline, Detection, Fieldcraft, Animal husbandry, Endurance, Stealth, Shield, Leadership.
Competent: Tactics.

Loot: Met a personal NPC, Gladis Tanner/Orania Sabello, and her pet raven.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: Yes, if warranted. He's doing a service for the forbidden post, it's conceivable he gets some extra wealth/resources from it. Here is his wealth claim for that season: viewtopic.php?p=150954#p150859
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stale Beer and Travelling Merchants
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event(s)/shopping thread. I discussed Devin’s purchases with Pegasus beforehand, and we decided on a price of 2 WP for those items. Aidan is a Personal NPC.
Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/130k), GM Medicine (250x/121k), GM Deception (106x/91k), Master Detection (151x/51k), Expert Discipline (80x/49k), Expert Resistance (76x/27k), Expert Seduction (76x/58k), Competent Etiquette (26x/49k), Novice Investigation (5x/37k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing that someone speaks with a light accent
Investigation: Beer Crisis: Visiting a tavern and tasting the beer can provide clues
Medicine: Stale beer doesn’t pose a health risk
Medicine: Stormflowers can provide relief from indigestion
Resistance: Disgusting stale beer
Seduction: A bright and charming smile

Loot:

1 masterwork cloak made of Mersheep Wool
1 masterwork suit made of wool, embellished with Veshla hide
1 potted Stormflower
A couple of Stormflower seeds

Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: - 2 WP!
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Just Like Billiards
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post/Spit
Notes/Warnings: Violence, language, Clavam discovers his Poverty ability, etc.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Clavam

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[*]Athletics:  Maintaining good footwork is essential to stay mobile.
[*]Discipline:   Maintaining good military conduct.
[*]Endurance:   Bouncing back after a bad slip up that might've bruised you.
[*]Two-Handed Focus:  Polearms:  Using it like a billiard Stick.
[*]Two-Handed Focus:  Polearms:  Sliding it in and out of the leading hand, in order to change the angle of attack.
[*]Two-Handed Focus:  Polearms:  Using both ends of a weapon, in order to take advantage of an opening.
Skillplay
Novice: Athletics, Discipline, Meditation, Endurance.
Competent:Tactics, Polearms.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: -1 wp for using his Poverty Domain to remove an injury from a comrade's foot.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no



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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Tools of the Trade
City/Area: Skydas Keep
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Smithing (Competent), Strength (Expert), Woodworking (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing x3
Woodworking x3

Loot: 2 Shovels
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: None

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: When the Defender Needs Protection
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Learning basic unarmed fight
Skills Used: Unarmed combat (none), Discipline (Novice), Endurance (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Combat: Unarmed: Don't just stand still when being punched
Combat: Unarmed: How to hold your fist when punching
Combat: Unarmed: Dodging should be a controlled movement
Combat: Unarmed: Some people fight more with anger then skill
Discipline: Don't let yourself get goaded into a fight.
Meditation: Physical discomfort can prevent meditation.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: black eye (memory thread so long gone)
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hold This Thread As I Walk Away
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: This thread was originally slated for Cylus (and started) when Elisabeth was detained and put in jail at an earlier TS. We've attempted to remove all weather references to Cylus.
Darius
Skills Used:
Athletics (Expert)
Detection (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Etiquette (Competent)
Investigation (Competent)
Socialisation (Expert)
Strength (Competent)


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: Giving someone a leg-up.
Athletics: When climbing, use handholds to your advantage.
Athletics: Running in the wet without slipping over.
Athletics: Don't drop items when you're on the run.
Detection: Noticing when something is missing.
Detection: Finding a missing item in an unexpected place.
Discipline: How to receive a compliment about your physical appearance.
Discipline: Not giving up the chase, even when you're hungry.
Endurance: Don't let the rain deter you.
Etiquette: Letting someone in on a local secret.
Etiquette: Don't take what isn't yours without asking.
Etiquette: Borrowed items should always be returned.
Investigation: A little curiosity can go a long way.
Investigation: Footprints can help lead the way.
Investigation: Deciphering muddy footprints before they get washed away.
Investigation: Looking at things from a different vantage point.
Socialisation: Sometimes, getting what you want requires doing something unexpected.
Strength: Bearing the weight of another person.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Elisabeth: Is good company.
Elisabeth: Shows good judgment.
Elisabeth: Is always up for an adventure.


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - For helping the Cadouri
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Athletics (Competent)
Detection (Master)
Discipline (Expert)
Endurance (Master)
Etiquette (Competent)
Investigation (Expert)
Socialisation (Master)
Strength (Expert)
Navigation (Novice)
Stealth (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics - Jumping up to try and catch the lip of a roof
Athletics - Running on wet streets without falling
Athletics - Running and eating at the same time is challenging
Athletics - Using pushed out bricks on a wall to climb
Detection - Hearing noise inside a house proves someone's there
Detection - Noting when someone is hiding behind a door to be modest
Detection - Noticing something on a nearby roof
Detection - Judging crates can hold your weight
Etiquette - Letting the local pick the breakfast spot
Investigation - Following footprints
Investigation - Determining the clues in front of you don't make sense
Investigation - Determining motive is important to outcome
Navigation - Following direction to someone's house
Strength - Lowering one's self down through a hole
Socialization - Sometimes teasing relaxes someone in an awkward situation
Socialization - Negotiating for a desired outcome
Stealth - Quiet observation of adorable target(s)

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - For helping the Cadouri
Collaboration: Yes


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