Review Requests 2.2.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Subject Cognito
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: nope
Skills Used:

Novice: Socialization, Etiquette, Detection, Resistance.
Competent: Storytelling.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Detection: Noticing a voice in the windy air.
Detection: Watching for a specific person in a crowd of people.
Socialization: Don't leave without saying goodbye.
Socialization: Don't leave friends without notice of where you're going.
Storytelling: Sailors enjoy bawdy tales.
Storytelling: Story preferences vary from one walk of life to another.

Loot: passage to Rharne
Injuries/Overstepping: nah
Renown: nah
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Ghost That Never Was
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: The start of a new series about a calendar event. Talieson is a Personal NPC. Keke is Devin’s Legendary Mount and has excellent condition and training. I requested 3 knowledges on purpose; I couldn’t think of more.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/91k), GM Socialization (250x/130k), Master Detection (151x/50k), Expert Discipline (80x/49k), Competent Animal Training (26x/16k), Novice Mount (Land) (20x/9k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Acting as if you meet ghosts every trial
Mount (Land): How to halt your mount
Mount (Land): How to sit in the saddle

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: The Promise
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Settlement Guard NPCs are used (Balder and Silk) and the thread is about Balthazar asking Saoire for a conversation as she offered in this thread.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Psychology (Expert), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Socialization (Expert), Politics (Competent), Axes and Bludgeons (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Axes and Bludgeons (Two-Hand Focus) - Swings are slower than a sword
Axes and Bludgeons (Two-Hand Focus) - A riposte with a hammer
Axes and Bludgeons - Front hand swings with a hammer
Axes and Bludgeons - Backhand swings with a hammer
Endurance - Hammer impact shock pains
Politics - Supporting new leadership

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 129

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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Starting Over
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Elisabeth has been challenged to deal with a situation involving Munny Farms as the new leader of Haven. This is the first in a series of threads. Please contact Peg/Pig Boy for any questions that need clarification.

Skills Used:
Socialization (Master)
Detection (Master)
Psychology (Expert)
Leadership (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership - Making clear the next step towards a resolution
Leadership - Taking charge of a tense exchange
Leadership - Listening to the settlers you are in charge of
Leadership - Vocalizing a settler's importance to the settlement helps them feel valued
Psychology - Reminding another of bonding experiences to help establish trust
Socialization - Using a calm voice to defuse a situation


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Which Came First…
City/Area: Skydas Keep
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Smithing (Competent), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing x5
Endurance x1


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: 1 WP - What he's making is a commission from someone else. (viewtopic.php?f=362&t=18499&start=330#p176362)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ All The Lights That Lead Us There~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Vega

Skills Used:
  • Socialisation (Competent)
  • Logistics (Competent)
  • Woodworking (GM)
  • Caregiving (Novice)
  • Teaching (Competent)
Requested Rewards: ~ I'm aware there are less than maximum knowledge here, I just feel that's all she learned.
Knowledge:
Teaching: Don't be afraid to say you don't know, when asked a question.
Woodworking: Carving letters for a sign requires a lot of planning
Woodworking: Why sanding is important.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: If appropriate.
Wealth Points: Nope.



Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Choose Your Fighter
City/Area: Scalvoris Town.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Darius
Skills Used: Athletics (Expert), Caregiving (Competent), Combat: Unarmed (Novice), Endurance (Expert), Etiquette (Competent), Tactics (Expert).

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Athletics: Using your hips when you stretch.
Athletics: Recovery is as important as preparation.
Caregiving: Expressing concern without patronising.
Caregiving: Gifts can provide support to both the giver and the receiver.
Combat: Unarmed: Using padded gloves for practice.
Combat: Unarmed: Stepping back from a fierce attack.
Combat: Unarmed: Block with your first and forearm.
Combat: Unarmed: Defend with your hands in front of your face.
Endurance: Receiving a flurry of blows.
Endurance: Dealing with a punch to the mouth.
Etiquette: Pay attention to your instructor.
Tactics: A small opponent can still hurt a large opponent.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Yeva: Is tougher than she looks.
Yeva: Has been attacked for being a member of the Order of the Adunih.
Yeva: Has taken up embroidery.
Yeva
Yeva's player is currently swamped by RL and has asked to submit her knowledges at a later time.

Skills Used: N/A.

Requested Rewards:
N/A
Loot: A small button, embroidered with a bee.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Winging It
City/Area: Scalvoris Town.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Darius
Skills Used: Dancing (Untrained), Etiquette (Competent), Resistance (Novice), Seduction (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Dancing: Is not as easy as it looks.
Dancing: Watch out for shins!
Dancing: Put your hand on the woman's waist.
Dancing: Move with the music.
Etiquette: Receiving prizes can be overwhelming.
Etiquette: First drink is on me.
Etiquette: Asking for a dance.
Etiquette: Don't outstay your welcome.
Resistance: Drinking whiskey can make your head spin.
Resistance: Trying to sober up.
Seduction: Trying to decipher a woman's blushes.
Seduction: Holding hands.
Seduction: Gentle touching.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Yeva: Is as clueless in love as Darius is.
Yeva
Yeva's player is currently swamped by RL and has asked to submit her knowledges at a later time.

Skills Used: N/A.

Requested Rewards:
N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ There Are Many Things That I Would Like To Say To You~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is the final thread in a series: Doolally Frogs, Little Bird, All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding.

Vega

Skills Used:
  • Socialisation (Competent)
  • Logistics (Competent)
  • Woodworking (GM)
  • Caregiving (Novice)
  • Leadership (GM)
Requested Rewards: ~ None - I don't believe she actually learned anything new here, but it was a consolidation thread for her.

Loot: A completed entrance to Hopetoun, carved with the story of Hopetoun's founding and with a map of Hopetoun and the name of the settlement on the top of the entrance. I will put this in the HOpetoun tracker once this thread is graded.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: If appropriate, yes please!
Wealth Points: Nope.



Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ There Are Many Things That I Would Like To Say To You~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is the final thread in a series: Doolally Frogs, Little Bird, All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding.

Vega

Skills Used:
  • Socialisation (Competent)
  • Logistics (Competent)
  • Woodworking (GM)
  • Caregiving (Novice)
  • Leadership (GM)
Requested Rewards: ~ None - I don't believe she actually learned anything new here, but it was a consolidation thread for her.

Loot: A completed entrance to Hopetoun, carved with the story of Hopetoun's founding and with a map of Hopetoun and the name of the settlement on the top of the entrance. I will put this in the HOpetoun tracker once this thread is graded.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: If appropriate, yes please!
Wealth Points: Nope.



Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Vega on Thu Jul 08, 2021 2:17 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 155
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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