Review Requests 2.2.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: String It Up
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Butchering thread, may be a bit gory
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (exp), Hunting (comp), Butchering (comp), Animal Husbandry (comp), Strength (comp), Detection (comp), Discipline (nov), Trapmaking (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: starting an unpleasant but necessary task
Butchering: work one layer at a time
Butchering: tie off the bladder and stomach before removing
Butchering: removing deer intestines cleanly
Butchering: cutting around a deer's diaphragm
Butchering: removing a deer's heart and lungs cleanly


Loot: One field-dressed deer carcass
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: A Night Without Stars
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: The backdrop of the thread is a calendar event for Scalvoris. Deals with Balthazar's death and resurrection. Neither pc requested full knowledge on purpose.
Balthazar
Skills Used:
Discipline (Expert)
Meditation (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Detection (Expert)
Socialization (Competent)
Deception (Competent)
Etiquette (Untrained)
Caregiving (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bellinos (Memento) - Putting an echo of a memory into an object
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Loot: -1 Saoire candy
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Caregiving: Competent
Animal Husbandry: Novice
Psychology: Expert
Discipline: Expert
Detection: Master
Meditation: Expert
Persuasion: Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Husbandry: Considering the needs of an animal.
Caregiving: Empathy doesn’t mean accepting excuses
Detection: Hearing the sand collapse under another’s feet.
Detection: Noting when the stars have vanished
Discipline: Sometimes discipline isn’t enough in the face of witnessing a traumatic event.
Discipline: Finding an anchor to help you reestablish control
Persuasion: Getting a loved one to be more open may involve more than just asking them to.
Mediation: Mediation before sleep improves quality of sleep, calming spark and mind.
Psychology: Knowing its best for a situation to discuss why another treated you poorly
Psychology: The trauma of seeing the one you love die
Psychology: Understanding the power of denial

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion


Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Fear of Heaven: The Seedling
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: not really, some gross goblin-like creatures.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kisaik

Athletics: x 2
Discipline: x 1
Rupturing: x 2
Stealth: x 1
Skillplay
Novice: Discipline, Fieldcraft, Endurance, Running.
Competent: Meditation, Stealth.
Expert: Acrobatics, Rupturing.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Rupturing please. He uses an expert level snapshot technique.


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Patience
City/Area: Etzos, North Woods
Notes/Warnings: Finally getting out of the damn woods. Warning for gore.
Skills Used: Defiance: expert; endurance, intimidation: competent; detection: novice; sculpting: nothing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: Declaration of killing intent
Intimidation: Underscore your words with an appropriate action
Endurance: Using a cane to keep weight off your wounded leg
Sculpting: Medium - clay
Sculpting: Adding water to clay
Sculpting: The feel of clay on your hands

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Lingering injury from the last couple threads
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Picturesque
City/Area: Emea (lucid)
Notes/Warnings:

Skills Used:
Blades: novice
Endurance: competent
Strength: expert
Discipline: novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat (swords): 3
Endurance: 3

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: tired from walking a lot
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Captain Graygull and the Fish-strewn Gully
City/Area: Hopetoun, Faldrass, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Some bird gore, and killing of skull gulls en masse.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kisaik
Combat (Blades): x 2
Rupturing: Snapshotting oneself through a portal, to improve the momentum of blade strikes.
Rupturing: Pulling: Pulling oneself through portals, one after another.
Discipline: x 2
Skillplay
Novice: Discipline, Endurance, Strength.
Competent: Meditation, blades, unarmed combat.
Expert: Acrobatics, Rupturing.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Yes, he dispersed a flock of pesky skull gulls from the vicinity of Hopetoun in an epic battle.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Used heavy rupturing abilities here, a few expert techniques.


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Treetalk or Talking to Trees?
City/Area: Hopetoun, Faldrass, Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kisaik
Discipline: Try to keep focused while asking questions of a very unusual conversationalist.
Discipline: Don't be spooked by the telepathic tree.
Discipline: x 3
Etiquette: How to address a tree and ask it nicely for some seeds.
Skillplay
Discipline: Novice, Etiquette: Expert.

Loot: enough seeds for the growth of a single Yellow Dragon Tree.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no


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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: An Order to Everything
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: Slightly overemotional at times. Maybe nothing.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Etiquette: Tell people where you're going, don't leave them guessing by disappearing.
Politics: Patronage: Sometimes touching base with people can assure them that you still mean to support them.
Politics: Patronage: Promise your moral support. Sometimes it's as good as gold.
Politics: x 3

Loot/Losses: Gave his tier 8 house in Egilrun to his former slave Soraia.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Caregiving
Competent: Detection, Etiquette.
Expert: Politics, Persuasion.
Master: Nothing used.
GM: Psychology
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: This is the Fight that Never Ends
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: False advertisement. The fight ends :P
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Balthazar

Knowledge: None requested

Skills Used:


Skills Used: Unarmed Combat (GM), Tactics (Expert), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Acrobatics (Expert), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Persuasion (Expert), Intimidation (Untrained)
Zunylanih

Deception: Provide a distraction to avoid drawing attention to your accomplice.
Endurance: x 4
Pickpocket: Sneak bottles of liquor while there's a distraction.
Stealth: Hide the loot in your girl's skirt.
Combat (Unarmed Combat): Using a mug to give your punches more power.

Skills Used:

Novice: Deception, Pickpocketing, Stealth, Resistance, Combat Unarmed.
Competent: Endurance, Acting, Disguise.
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Maps and Records?
City/Area: Scalvtown, Library
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Research(novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: look up the history of Scalvoris
Research: make notes to help remember
Research: pace oneself with a lot of information
Research: going back over the information
Scalvoris: 20 pirate lords
Scalvoris: 100 years of peace
Gwiona: Aukari, pirate lord
Dianarv: Human, Pirate King
Naerikk: pirate lord, pitted the crew against each other
Frederick: human, pirate lord
Andre: Biqaj, pirate lord
Biqaj: known for being sailors

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: nope
Magic Experience?: No thank you

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