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Devin
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Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2

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Continued from here.

Ashan 19, Arc 721

Devin knew that he wouldn’t be able to keep the scalvwinggoat, but he decided to make good use of the time that he spent in its company. When they finally arrived in Scalvoris Town, he began to walk with his head held high, a huge smile on his face and a spring in his step. The creature did what he had hoped that it would do – it attracted attention. People looked at it, and a moment later, they also looked at him. He liked being looked at!

Well, a considerable number of people looked at him, but not all of them. A lady that carried a wicker basket full of groceries, for example, just cast a glance at it before she shrugged her shoulders and continued to walk. The somewhat irritated Mortalborn wondered if there was something wrong with her eyes or if she had something against him personally.

Fortunately, a girl with two red braids positioned herself in front of Aidan, the creature and him just then and asked in a very excited tone of voice, “Are the two of you circus performers? Can you show me something?”

Aidan was about to open his mouth and tell her that they were of course not circus performers, but Devin just smiled brightly at her, handed his roommates the reins, made him turn around, rummaged through his backpack and removed two potatoes from it. He didn’t have any balls to juggle with, but potatoes were kind of round, so they worked just as well!

“Take a look at this here!” he told the girl. A moment later, he raised his hands. He started by throwing the potato in his left hand. Just as the potato began to come down towards his right hand, he tossed the second potato and – caught it with his other hand. He grinned all over his face and began to juggle the potatoes more quickly while the red-haired girl watched him open-mouthed, and Aidan rolled his eyes and muttered something under his breath. The next couple of attempts went well as well, but eventually, one of the potatoes landed on the ground, in no small part due to a woman suddenly approaching him.

“Jane, stop bothering Doctor Thorn!” she chided the girl that was apparently her daughter before she looked at the creature that decided to greet her by bleating. Her eyes widened for a moment before she complained, “I can’t even leave you alone for a bit while I buy bread!”

“She wasn’t bothering me at all”,
Devin who was quite happy that the woman had recognized him (He just loved being famous!) assured her, bowed deeply and dramatically, much like a real circus performer and grinned. “She wanted a show, and I was quite happy to oblige!”

“Aidan”,
he wanted to know a bit later, once Jane and her mother who had stared at the creature some more had left, picked up the potato that he had dropped, wiped it and looked at his roommate. “I think that Jane assumed that we are circus performers because of our bleating friend here. Do you … do you think that it actually escaped from some sort of circus? Or do ordinary citizens have scalvwing goat mount … things as well?”

“Anyway, let’s head to the noticeboard in front of the Scholar’s Nook, write our message and see if anybody reacts. We can put our friend into the stable in the meantime”,
he decided a moment later, secretly hoping that nobody would react to his message and that he would be able to keep the creature, after all. “By the way”, he continued as something occurred to him. “I just realized that I have no idea if it’s a girl or a boy!”

“See for yourself”,
Aidan told him in a dry tone of voice. When Devin looked at him questioningly, he pointed, and the Mortalborn bent down in order to take a brief look at the creature’s nether regions before he abruptly straightened himself again. Right. It was obviously male!
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2

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Evening

Throughout the rest of the trial, Devin had regularly gone into the stable in order to admire the scalvwinggoat because he just couldn’t get enough of its most likely grafted magnificence, but he had finally let Aidan persuade him to eat dinner. They were just eating the roast chicken that the older man had bought at a nearby restaurant – Devin had been too busy admiring the creature to be interested in cooking, even though he normally loved cooking – when there was a knock on the door. Both of them abruptly stopped eating.

Devin looked at Aidan for a moment, silently wondering who it could possibly be, before something occurred to him, and his face suddenly grew absolutely pale. “We could just pretend that we aren’t home!” he whispered to Aidan and looked at him pleadingly. He had thought that he would have more than a few breaks with his new friend. This just wasn’t fair!

“They know who has the animal due to our message”, Aidan pointed out to Devin. “If you don’t answer the door today, they’ll likely come back again tomorrow. Besides, the longer you keep the animal, the harder it will be for you to let it go. Come on, Devin. You are doing a good deed. You’ll be reuniting an animal with its owner”, he told the Mortalborn in an empathetic tone of voice which just caused him to grumble.

He didn’t care about any feking good deeds!

A moment later, he rose from his chair regardless and marched over to the door in order to open it – only in order to stop dead in his tracks and stare. A woman stood there. She was wearing a very elegant, deep red velvet dress and a hat with a veil, just like Esme Dashiell, who was and would always be a style icon in his opinion. Her hands were encased in shimmering dark gloves, she carried a purse, her brown hair was curled perfectly, and she had luscious brown …

… beard.

“Good evening, Doctor Thorn”, the woman greeted him politely, ignoring his stares (She was used to being stared at, and she didn’t care. She was very proud of her appearance, including her wonderful beard.) “I saw the message that you posted on the noticeboard. You have the grafted creature that escaped from my husband’s and my circus, yes?”

“Do you … do you want him back?”
Devin asked.

“Back?” the bearded woman asked incredulously and shook her head. “No. I definitely do not want an animal that is constantly hungry, steals and refuses to produce offspring back. He still hasn’t learned to walk on two legs either. You can keep him. I would however appreciate it if you could give me the saddle, the halter and the reins. They were not cheap”, she told the Mortalborn who just looked at her incredulously for a moment before he smiled all over his face and nearly raced over to the stable in order to get those things for her.

He knew that he should be mad at the bearded woman and her circus because they had decided to get rid of animal because it ate too much, didn't walk on two legs and refused to make babies (or just couldn't), but he was just so happy that he’d get to keep his new friend, after all. And he didn’t mind all those bad traits either. He was really rich. He could afford to feed him lots and lots of delicious things!

Last edited by Devin on Sun May 02, 2021 3:15 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 596

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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2

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Even later

“Well, that was weird”, Aidan remarked when the bearded woman had departed. Devin just shrugged his shoulders though and abruptly grabbed his roommate’s arm and proceeded to drag him into the stable where his newest pet was waiting and bleating. Aidan considered resisting – their dinner was getting cold – but Devin just looked so happy and excited that he eventually gave in. He had to admit, he liked it when he was like that!

A moment later, Devin found a saddle, reins and a halter, and put them on his new friend, making sure that the saddle especially was fastened properly lest he fell off. That would be embarrassing, and what more, he might get hurt if he fell from his mount. He had absolutely no interest in getting hurt though!

Finally, he put his left foot into the left stirrup, grabbed the reins with his left hand and the saddle with his right hand and swung his right leg across the back of the animal which was more challenging than he had thought that it would be. It was a little different from mounting a horse or a Scalvwing, and he momentarily looked extremely awkward as a consequence. Eventually, he sat in the saddle though, proceeded to take the reins in both hands and smiled all over his face.

For a moment, he had the impression that there was something different about its fur. It looked kind of purple(ish) now! That was awesome!

A moment later, he squeezed it with both of his legs in order to give it the signal to move forward and hopefully out of the stable. The creature actually made a few steps in the direction of the door before it abruptly turned its head and stared at something that was next to him, on the floor – a bag full of feed that Devin had originally bought for his pet goat Heidi that lived in the house most of the time nowadays.

The Mortalborn looked at the creature, at the bag with the feed and back at the creature again and then he laughed out loud, removed his feet from the stirrups, swung his right leg over the animal’s back and ultimately dismounted which turned out to be only marginally less challenging than mounting it.

“You are hungry again, aren’t you?” he wanted to know, stroke it and filled a bowl with feed. “Here, have something to eat before we go for a ride. By the way, you need a name. I can’t keep on calling you ‘creature’ or ‘animal’, and your former owner forgot to tell me what she called you. ‘Keke’ is the Xanthea word for ‘goat’. At least I think so", he added because his Xanthea was not very good and asked, "Would that be a good name for you? What do you think?” he asked the creature.

It didn’t react as it was too busy eating.

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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2

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Review Rewards

Name: Devin

Points awarded: 10xp

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Juggling two potatoes
Detection: It’s a male animal!
Mount (Land): Saddling your mount
Mount (Land): Climbing into the saddle
Mount (Land): Squeezing your mount with your legs in order to make it move forward
Mount (Land): Dismounting

Loot:
1 Legendary Mount (PSF Checked)
- 1 wp for gear (WL Checked)

I am also nominating you for the following medal:

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Reviewer's Choice

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Renown: 10 (He attracted a lot of attention)

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level

Notes:
Tada! Devin has a new friend and seems very happy about it!

The continuation of this story was just as satisfying as the opening. I really enjoyed how you depicted Devin continually going out to check on the creature and having to be persuaded to eat. I can remember times in my life when I felt exactly the same way about something, so it was a very relatable feeling.

As always, Adian is a joy to read as Devin's right-hand man....and often the reader's view of Devin's antics. He brings Devin down to earth without overpowering the scenes. Great balance!

I can't wait to see what adventures Devin and his new mount have.

This two-part story was stellar, in my opinion, and as such, I've decided to award you a long-overdue medal for excellence in storytelling. I always look forward to Devin adventures. They make me laugh and that is something that is sorely needed in the world these days. Thank you for sharing Devin with us.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!

Avalon

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