[Haven] While You Were Sleeping...

A small island with an active volcano, Faldrass is the home to Saoire's school and to the Faldrass Induk.

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Re: [Haven] While You Were Sleeping...

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PRAETORUM

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This was a very nice reunion thread. I appreciated how since friendship was shown and felt. I also personally like how you constantly referenced what his tail was doing and just general physical response occur while talking.

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XP: 15
Renown: 0

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Attunement - Note: Elisabeth
Socialization x9
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ELISABETH

Overview

Elisabeth is wonderful in this thread, and she contemplates those she cares about and is honest with her feelings and concern for them even if one of them isn't in the thread. I love her gentle loving pressure to get Pra to open up.

Points

XP: 15
Renown: 0

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Knowledge

Detection - Noting someone's hesitation to answer a question
Detection - Severity of a situation can be evident in mannerisms/voice inflection
Caregiving - Offering to help someone sort their issues
Caregiving - Realizing you didn't fully understand someone's issues
Caregiving - Giving someone a hug to show you care
Psychology - Dealing with difficult topics
Socialization - Expressing to someone how happy you are to see them
Socialization - Apologizing for lying
Socialization - Thanking someone for sharing a traumatic experience
Discipline - Quelling rage within upon hearing of trauma to a loved one


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