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Approved 07/04/2021

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Link Title Word Count Point Bank Total
viewtopic.php?f=446&t=25212 Snow All Around Us 4500+ 20
viewtopic.php?f=249&t=27192 A Close Call 1500+ 30
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=26989 A Deer's Dula. 3000+ 45
viewtopic.php?f=353&t=26752 Haul it down 1500+ 55
viewtopic.php?f=249&t=27206 Fight without Sight 1500+ 65
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27280 A Very Furry Patient. 1500+ 75
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26671 Planning for the New Arrival(s) 4500+ 95
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=27006 Scientia et Sapientia 1500+ 105
viewtopic.php?f=353&t=24955 Fist to Claw 1500+ 115
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=26660 Furry Friends IV 1500+ 125
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=27315 In Perspective 1500+ 135
viewtopic.php?f=353&t=26999 Done and Dusted 1500+ 145
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved 07/04/2021
Doran, June 2021

ItemEarnedTotal
Review (A Night Without Stars) 30 (7.500+ words) 30
Review (A Fear of Heaven: The Seedling) 10 40
Review (Picturesque) 10 50
Review (Treetalk, or Talking to Trees?) 10 60
Review (Maps and Records?) 10 70
Review (Boar's Spirit) 10 80
Review (True North) 10 90
Review (Furry Friends III) 10 100
Review (Spiderman, Spiderman) 15 (3.000+ words) 115
Review (Wether's Walk) 10 125
Review (Power is a Prison) 20 (4.500+ words) 145
Review (Starting Small Scale) 25 (6.000+ words) 170
Review (Knight Moves) 10 180
Review (Fighting over a... woman?) 10 190
Review (Ad Astra Per Aspera) 10 210
Review (Devin Schmevin) 10 220
Review (It's Not About the Destination) 35 (9.000+ words) 265
Review (Fire on the Water) 20 (4.500+ words) 250
Review (Midnight Musings) 10 260
Review (All the roads) 10 270
Review (The Starling's Nest) 10 280
Review (More Questions Than Answers) 20 (4.500+ words) 300


Skills:

Doran

Reach Grandmaster in a Skill (Detection): 15
Have an approved additional Capstone after the 1st (Combat Physics): 5
Have an approved additional Capstone after the 1st (Mortalborn Blood Magic): 5
Have an approved additional Capstone after the 1st (Good Alchemy Doesn’t Go Bad): 5
Reach Tier 2 in a Skill (Research): 20
Reach Master in a Skill (Detection): 10
Reach Expert in a Skill (Investigation): 5

Devin

Reach Grandmaster in a Skill (Socialization): 15
Have an approved additional Capstone after the 1st (Improvisation): 5
Reach Master in a Skill (Detection): 10
Reach Expert in a Skill (Blades): 5



TOTAL: 400 points
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There were several errors in the calculations.

For “Ad Astra Per Aspera”, you correctly noted the thread being worth +10, but your calculation was +20. The adjusted total at that point should be 200.

For “It’s Not About the Destination”, you correctly note the thread being worth +35, but your calculation was +45. The adjusted total at that point should be 245.

For “Fire on the Water”, you correctly note the thread being worth +20, but your calculation was -15. The adjusted total at that point should be +265.

The adjusted total (if I did my math right) for the threads is +315, which would bring the adjusted grand total to +415.

Please double-check my figures but for now, I'm approving you for +415 pbps!
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Approved 08/02/2021

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Link Title Word Count Point Bank Total
viewtopic.php?f=353&t=25837 I just wanted to say hi 4,927 20
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27350 The Ghost that Never Was 1500+ 30
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27332 Where No Spirits Rest 1500+ 40
viewtopic.php?f=510&t=24974&p=178398#p178398 Scholar of Blades 3000+ 55
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26946 Cos Maybe, you're gonna be the one that saves me 1500+ 65
viewtopic.php?f=488&t=27432 Haven and Hope 1500+ 75
viewtopic.php?f=236&t=27480&p=178464#p178464 Boil it Down 1500+ 85
viewtopic.php?f=236&t=27491&p=178550#p178550 Let me Axe you a Question 1500+ 95
viewtopic.php?f=216&t=27493&p=178771#p178771 Healing Song? 4500+ 115
viewtopic.php?f=262&t=27489 Whats Yours is Mine 1500+ 125
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27477&p=178846#p178846 The Road 1500+ 135
viewtopic.php?f=262&t=27273&p=178847#p178847 An Inquiry 1500+ 145
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27504&p=178848#p178848 Step One: Stating the Issue 1500+ 155
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27518 Step Two: Consider the Facts 1500+ 165
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27524 Step Three: Gathering Information and Making a Decision 1500+ 175
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Doran, July 2021

ItemEarnedTotal
Review (Garaian Lunacy: Carnifex) 10 10
Review (No Regrets) 10 20
Review (Fun with Tenses) 10 30
Review (A Bedtime Story) 10 40
Review (Alone, Finally.) 10 50
Review (Gennadiya and Cyrus) 10 60
Review (Subject Cognito) 10 70
Review (Starting Over) 10 80
Review (Which Came First) 10 90
Review (All the lights...) 10 100
Review (Winging It) 35 (9.000+ words) 135
Review (There are many things...) 10 145
Review (Just Like Billiards) 10 155
Review (Tools of the Trade) 10 165
Review (When the Defender...) 10 175
Review (Hold This Thread...) 40 (10.500+ words) 215
Review (Dawn of a New Order) 30 (7.500+ words) 245
Review (The Art of Surviving) 30 (7.500+ words) 275
Review (Back to Basics) 20 (4.500+ words) 295
Review (What a Difference...) 20 (4.500+ words) 315
Review (The Jaws that Bite) 10 325
Review (Misery at Sea) 10 335
Review (Mervani's Apprentice) 10 345
Review (Lacing a Pain Button) 10 355
Approve A Character Sheet (Kori'än) 10 365
Undertake Small Wiki Work for ST (Kori'än Character Wiki) 5 370


Devin, July 2021
ItemEarnedTotal
Adored Blessing Awarded IRP (Adored Tarouz) 10 10
Reach Expert in a Skill (Cooking) 5 15
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Total: 385 points
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Approved for 385 pbp!
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved on 8/15/2021
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Fairies in a Blender - 1,580 words - 10 points
Can Kindness be Taught? - 1,500 words - 10 points
Another Meeting with the Builders - 2,875 words - 10 points
Word Burglar - 1,794 words - 10 points
Grading Exams - 1,565 words - 10 points
Little Bird - 1,660 words - 10 points
Fun with Funds and Finances - 1,426 words - 10 points
Letters on the Beach - 1,859 words - 10 points
Face-Off - 10,394 words - 35 points
Creaky Hinges - 5,484 words - 20 points
Surprising Discoveries - 4,215 words - 15 points
Of Men and Morties - 10,041 words - 35 points


Reach Expert in a Skill:
Logistics + 5
Athletics +5

Reach Master in a Skill:
Leadership +10

Earn a Favored Blessing in RP
Celarion + 5
Nalos + 5

Participate in, and Complete, a City Event (Seasonal Events run by mods)
The Forging +10

Approve A Character Sheet
Arthur Of Wytchwood + 10

Total pbp = 235
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved 08/18/2021

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Link Title Word Count Point Bank Total
viewtopic.php?f=169&t=25863&start=10 The Nice Corner 9500+ 35
viewtopic.php?f=217&t=27562 Stranger in a Strange Land 1500+ 45
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26883&start=30 A Beacon of Hope 24000+ 130
viewtopic.php?f=236&t=27576 A Vested Interest 1500+ 140
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27567 Tourists! 1500+ 150
viewtopic.php?f=488&t=27272 A Little Polish 1500+ 160
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27586 Storm VS the Farm 1500+ 170
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27600 To Honor and Remember 1500+ 180
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27597 More Tourists! 1500+ 190
viewtopic.php?f=262&t=27543 An Idea 1500+ 200
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=27627 Memento Mori 1500+ 210
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=27522 Revelations at Bathtime 4,141 225
viewtopic.php?f=412&t=27245&p=179752#p179752 Teach Your Kids about Ranger Dnager 1500+ 235
Link Claim Skill Level Point Bank Total
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Master in Meditation Skill 160 245
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Master in Intelligence Skill 155 255
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Master in Politics Skill 160 265
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Grandmaster in Socialization Skill 250 280
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Expert in Detection Skill 80 285
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Expert in Logistics Skill 80 290
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Expert in Unarmed Combat Skill 80 295
viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5402#p102813 Reached Expert in Endurance Skill 80 300
viewtopic.php?f=249&t=27365 Seasonal Event in Scalvoris -- 310
wiki/index.php?title=Category:Investigation Skill Write-Up: Investigation 20 points 330
Link Character Approved Point Bank Acquired Point Bank Total
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=25755 Zoro Astrian 10 340
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=27175 Thomas Carver 10 350
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26874 Sarbi 10 360
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26462 Cad Revel 10 370
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26561 Mab Prell 10 380
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26540 Natalia Gregorios 10 390
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26480 Sa'Na Nji'Ryn 10 400
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26335 Revan Blackhand 10 410
viewtopic.php?f=489&t=26368 Roya Anderton 10 420
Created Wikis for all of the above characters 9 x 5 45 465
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Approved for 465 point bank points! Please link back to this claim in your ledger.
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