Point Bank Collection 3

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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved - 05/17/2021
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=25533 Troubles - 3000+ words - 15 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=26663 Next Level of Hone - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26654 Resource Management 101Gardening - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26456&start=10 An Unexpected Visitor - 10500+ - 40 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26655 Yellow Glass - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26707 First Steps... - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26644 Framing Things - 6000+ - 25 pbp

120 pbp total
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

6/3/2021 Claim Approved.

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Fit the First The crew was complete: it included a Boots - 11,546 words = 40 points
The Chemistry of Metals - 1,643 words = 10 points
The Golden Rule - 5,339 words = 20 points
Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 1 - 1,831 words = 10 points
Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2 - 1,800 words = 10 points
Careless Whispers - 1,611 words = 10 points
Garden Survival - 2,302 words = 10 points
Tea Time- 1,930 words = 10 points
Dunes have two faces. Like some people - 1,530 words = 10 points
Surviving - 1,635 words = 10 points
The Storm - 1,688 words = 10 points
Kiss in the moment - 1,902 words = 10 points
Sword Fighting for Beginners, Part 1 - 1,838 words = 10 points
The Freeze - 1,539 words = 10 points
Devin Buys New Swords - 2,082 words = 10 points
Putting Down Roots - 4,646 words = 20 points
Looking below the Surface - 1,866 words = 10 points
The Sophist Guile - 1,597 words = 10 points
License to Purchase - 1,428 words = 10 points
Wuthering Winds (1) - 1,480 words = 10 points
The Puppet - 1,845 words = 10 points
Otorhinolaryngo … whatever! - 2,144 words = 10 points
The Consequences of Over-steeping - 1,508 words = 10 points
Do the Hokey Pokey (Intermediate Fencing) - 1,502 words = 10 points
Supplicants - 1,759 words = 10 points



Reach Expert in a Skill: (I did not include any that I gained due to the Skill Scale Down)
Mediation + 5
Combat-Unarmed +5

Reach Master in a Skill: (I did not include any that I gained due to the Skill Scale Down)
Endurance +10



Total = 320 pbp
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Last edited by Elisabeth Black on Wed Jun 02, 2021 9:04 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 285
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved 06/02/2021
Doran, May 2021

ItemEarnedTotal
Review (No Imagination) 10 10
Review (Priorities) 10 20
Review (Feathers and flights) 10 30
Review (Knock nock!) 10 40
Review (The job that didn't pan out) 10 50
Review (Family Ties) 10 60
Review (Small Furry Dweebs) 10 70
Review (Sliding Through) 10 80
Review (Bare Necessities and Hobbies) 10 90
Review (Bare Necessities and Hobbies) 10 90
Review (Stress for Silver Linings) 10 100
Review (A Trial to Remember) 10 110
Review (Ignorance & Confidence) 10 120
Review (Thinking Outside the (Sand)box) 10 130
Review (Serenity & Serendipity) 40 (10.500+ words) 170
Review (Furry Friends II) 10 180
Review ([Haven] Rain On Me...) 10 190
Review (Getting to the Point) 10 200
Review (A barchan dune...) 10 210
Review (An Icy Arrangement) 10 220
Review ([Haven] Low Flying Clouds) 10 230
Review ([North Woods] Flame) 10 240
Review (Worlds Away II) 10 250
Review (A Warm Reception) 25 (6.000+ words) 275
Review ([Haven] Breaking The Surface) 10 285
Review (Sacrifices) 10 295
Review (A Formal Hell...) 10 305
Review (A Trial to Remember - Volume Two) 30 (7.500+ words) 335
Review ([Saoire Event] Elisabeth and Azrael) 20 (4.500+ words) 355
Review (Vecchi Peccati) 10 365
Review ([Haven] Visions & Volcanoes) 30 (7.500+ words) 395
Review ([North Woods] Guest) 10 405
Review ([North Woods] Guest II) 10 415
Review (Nels of Glass) 25 (6.000+ words) 440
Review (The Visitors) 10 450
Review (Winter Wonderland) 10 460
Review (Seri's Song) 10 470
Review (The Dawn of a New Trial) 10 480
Review (I See Dead People) 15 (3.000+ words) 495
Review (Memories Honored) 10 505
Review (Servire et Tueri) 25 (6.000+ words) 530
Review (Rag Time) 10 540
Review (Singing Tournament: Round 2) 10 550
Review (String It Up) 10 560
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Approved for 560 pbp! (You counted twice but "Bare Necessities and Hobbies" was listed twice, throwing my count off until I figured it out! :D )
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Approved 06/02/2021
Trouble with a seductress 1500+ - 10 pbp
The Issue of Choice 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Alchemy 101: Letter Certifcation pt 2 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Orange Sands and Rainbow Shells 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Hurts 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Rule 1 Don't Die 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Volcano Forest 1500+ words - 10 pbp
Simple Things 3000+ words - 15 pbp
Searching for Hope 17000+ words - 60 pbp

145 pbp total
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved 06/11/2021
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26901 A Flower in the Sand - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26886 The Expedition - 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26859 The Point of Hope 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26870 Size Doesn't Matter 1500+ - 10 pbp
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26875 Forging Ahead 1500+ - 10 pbp

50 pbp in total.
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

Approved 6/20/2021

I'd like to claim the following pb points, please. They would be going to the point bank pool on my Ari'sora account.

Create Approved Medium Dev piece for ST (City Location); Little Treasures: +15

Create Approved Small Dev piece for ST (NPC); Tir'nas: +10

Create Approved Small Dev piece for ST (NPC); Tris'are: +10

Total: 35
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Approved for 35 extra points added to your pool. Please link back to this claim in your ledger.
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Approved 06/20/2021

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viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26887 Going Clippety Clop on the Stair 1500+ 10
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26905 A Sharp Pane 1500+ 20
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26907 First, Aid. 1500+ 30
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26915 Second, Shelter. 1500+ 40
viewtopic.php?f=251&t=26937 A Little Practice Session 1500+ 50
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26920 Hope, Courage, Tunawa, Cadouri 1500+ 60
viewtopic.php?f=510&t=27092&p=176085#p176085 Look to the Future 1500+ 70
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26925 Golden Chain I: First Links 1500+ 80
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26926 Golden Chain II: Making New Links 1500+ 90
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26969 You Know the Saing 1500+ 100
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26928 Golden Chain III: The Kindness of Strangers 1500+ 110
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26944 But I don't know how 1500+ 120
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26725 You could never know what it's like 3000+ 135
viewtopic.php?f=545&t=26927 Even educated fleas do it 1500+ 145
viewtopic.php?f=412&t=26914 Hook, Line, and Anchor 1500+ 155
viewtopic.php?f=510&t=27177 Look Into The Past 1500+ 165
viewtopic.php?f=169&t=26906 Shadow 1500+ 175
viewtopic.php?f=446&t=25257 Breaking the Ice 3000+ 190
viewtopic.php?f=446&t=25336 Learning Curve 3000+ 205
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Re: Point Bank Collection 3

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Approved for this claim, the purchase of 3 npcs for 400, and final total of 25 pbp
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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