Locust classicust

Continuation of the "Glowzilla versus Locuston" saga. From the makers of: "Destroy All Crops"

Once an isolated and dying township, an influx of academics, adventurers and thrill seekers have made Scalvoris Town their home. From scholars' tea shops to a new satellite campus for Viden Academy, this is an exciting place to visit or make your home!

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Locust classicust

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The trial was well into the afternoon when Oram saw Professor Seams riding out of the Scalvoris gate. Seams rode a small horse, not much bigger than a pony. Wigs would have known what the breed was called. The professor, Oram guessed, was probably used to keeping an accurate schedule by the clock. Oram was not, and tended by contrast to mark the breaks by feel more than measurement. Nonetheless, the two arrived had arrived at their meeting place not long apart; Oram had arrived earlier, but he reckoned that the Sev’ryn had not kept him waiting more than ten bits.

The professor had brought a book with him, which he pulled out of his saddlebag immediately after dismounting, before even greeting Oram; when the traveler saw it he felt a trill of worry that Seams was going to shove pages of text inside it under his nose and expect him to read it, for he had not brought the reading glasses Saoire had given him. Instead, Seams opened the book to a section containing several illustrations, which he pointed out to the hunter, explained, and read the captions to. What the professor most wanted to show was a diagram that showed what looked to be a lamppost standing in the middle of a circular pool.

”It’s that water trap I had mentioned earlier in the meeting,” Seams explained, his nimble finger moving over the various details in the illustration as he spoke. You light a lantern around dusk and just wait for the bugs to come. They get attracted, fly in circles around it, then eventually tire and land in the water.”[/b]

Oram peered at the drawing. ”Why is the lamp so low on the post?” he asked. It looked to be mounted only about a third-way up the pole. In response, Seams’ finger shifted over to a bit of text. ”So the bugs are more likely to end up in the water, apparently. There’s a tradeoff, I suppose, between mounting it high enough to be seen a ways away, and low enough that he bugs get drowned.” He shut the book and looked up at Oram. ”You said you had suggested your chicken idea to a farmer last night. Shall we talk to him and see if he got any results?”

Oram shook his head. ”I talked to Daltrik this morning,” he corrected. ”So I don’t think he’ll know anything yet.” He thought a bit longer. ”Though he might be interested in this trap idea you just showed me. He could try that, too. And who knows, maybe glowing chickens are bright enough to attract the locust in the daytime.”

It was the professor’s turn to shake his head in answer. ”When the sun’s out, bugs aren’t easily distracted by other light sources, so I wouldn’t count on,” he said. ”But I do agree that we should talk to this…Daltrik did you say?, and then go see as much as we can in the countryside while there’s still light out."

It was a little under a break’s ride to Daltrik’s farm from the city gate, although Seams and Oram went more slowly than usual because the swarming locusts forced them to keep their heads down. Both men word straw hats and drew neckerchiefs over mouth and nose. The locusts were not aggressive, but the shear numbers of them in the air made regular collisions inevitable. Oram’s hat brim *plipped* once or twice a bit as they rode. Mule’s ears and tail flicked constantly, and he frequently snorted and pitched his head as he went. Seams, being preoccupied with controling his horse in the swarm, did not immediately notice when Oram turned off the road onto the path leading to Daltriks’ farmhouse, nor did Oram notice right away that Seams' horse had kept going. The hunter had to shout to the professor loudly to get him to turn around, once he realized what had happened.

Daltrik did not keep them long waiting on his porch. As the door shut behind them, the farmer said: ”Hold on! You got a couple on you.” There was a locust on Seams’ hat, as well as on his back. The farmer brushed them onto the floor and then crushed them before they could take flight again.

”You’re going to clean those up yourself, you know,” called a woman’s voice from a nearby corner. Daltrik’s wife was sitting there, mending some sort of net. The farmer grimaced but nodded. ”Of course, dear. You remember Oram, don’t you? And this is…?” The professor, still examining his hat curiously as if to see if he’d overlooked any more locusts there, responded: ”Jasper Seams, Professor at the Viden Acaedmy. Zoology. Oram and I are working together to find answers to this locust crisis.”

Daltrik’s wife -Thera, Oram recalled- worked her face into a suitably-impressed expression while continuing to work on her net. Daltrik himself grinned. ”Why don’t you gentlemen sit down? Do you need to cool off? I have some tea. It’s cold. You can either have it that way, or I can heat it up, if you prefer.”

”Cold is fine,” answered the professor, and Oram nodded his own agreement. Seams sat down, and to his relief, Oram saw that he sat down with his butt in the actual seat this time, as a normal person would.
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Daltrik's iced tea, 99% locust free

The cold tea was not quite chilly, but it was still refreshing enough. After both Oram and Seams had had a couple quiet sips, they got quickly to the point. The professor broke the silence first.

”We’re still looking for answers to this locust situation,” he said. ”So we’re going to ride about a bit while it’s still light out to survey the situation.” Daltrik nodded quietly at this, waiting for his visitors to continue.

”I’d mentioned to the professor,” added Oram now, ”that you’d come to me with questions as to whether I could devise a trap for these bugs. I wasn’t able to give you much of an answer this morning, but we may have found a usable design.” He shrugs. ”I’ve never built one before, so I have no better idea than you do at the moment if it works, but I thought we should show you.” The hunter looked over at the Sev’ryn expectantly. Seams was already ready with the book, opening it to the appropriate page and showing Daltrik the illustration and caption he had shown Oram earlier at the gate. Daltrik looked with wrinkled brow.

”This some kind of light post?” he asked, half to himself. A trill or so later he answer his own question. ”Oh, yes. Ha! So all I have to do is dig a pit twenty paces across? Is that all? I’ll get right on it!” He gave a chuckle suggesting he was more amused than offended by the idea.

”Why not just use the irrigation ditch?” came Thera’s voice from the corner where she sat mending the net. Daltrik wrinkled his nose.

”That gunk? It’s still more mud than water in there,” he called back.

”I doubt the locusts will care,” his wife rejoined.

Daltrik thought for a moment, then looked questioningly at Oram. ”Would that work?”

Oram smirked. ”I don’t see why not,” he said. ”I’m sure your wife’s right about the bugs not being too picky. If you’ve got an irrigation ditch already, I guess you could just put up a post in the middle of it.”

Daltrik sighed, then nodded. ”Won’t be much fun wading through that gunk, but it’d be easy enough. When should I light the lamp?”

Seams scratched his beard, then answered: ”as soon as the sun goes down. Most insects aren’t drawn by other light sources if the sun is out. I don’t think the locusts are that active through the night, maybe a break before sunrise and a break after sunset.”

Daltrik nodded some more. ”I noticed that. You know, Oram, I tried the chicken thing you suggested right away. The birds’ll eat the locusts, alright, but they led ‘em on a merry chase. But if you’re right about them coming to the birds after dark, they’ll have an easier time of it then.”

Seams gathered his book. ”We appreciate your willingness to try these things. As I said, we are still learning in real time ourselves, so the more information you can provide, the better.”

A thought seemed to amuse the farmer. ”Heh, so I’ll be doing the professor’s homework for him, then? What do you think of that, Oram?” Oram grinned back. He hoped Seams didn’t mind a little good-natured humor at his expense. If it bothered the Sev’ryn, he gave no sign. Instead, he gathered his things.

”Thank you for the tea,” he said, starting to get up. ”We’ve taken enough of your time for now, and we’ve things to do ourselves, right, Oram?”

It took the traveler a trill to catch the clue, but he stammered: ”oh-oh Yes! Yes, we’ve things to do. Best…best get going.” He pushed his own chair back and made to follow the professor. Daltrik rose to follow.

”You’ll let me know what *you* find out, too, right?” he asked as he walked them to the door. Thera looked up briefly from her work at them and gave a parting nod.

Oram promised that he would be first to know whatever they found out. Which might or might not be literally true, but close enough.

Outside, the pair put their straw hats back on and pulled up their neckerchiefs. ”Next, I guess we ride around for a bit,” suggested Seams, as he put the book back into his saddlebag. ”Survey the damage.”

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Trap light, trap bright, will you catch me bugs tonight?

Oram and Seams stopped on a small hill that overlooked several farms. Seams surveyed the surrounding fields with a spyglass while Oram looked out for approaching people or dogs, as they were probably trespassing on somebody’s land. Nobody came, however. Whoever’s land this was was probably preoccupied with other things, the traveler guessed.

Nor was it hard to guess what such worries might be. The winter crops were blasted. There would be no Rebirth wheat harvest here. Even a non-farmer like Oram could see that. Trees in orchards had had their foliage ravaged. Seams let out a low whistle as he surveyed the horizon through the spyglass. ”The trees will likely live,” the professor announced, ”at least the mature ones. But there won’t be much by way of a fruit or nut harvest from them.” He lowered the glass, clearly shaken. Looking at the immediately surrounding fields, Oram could guess at the devastation Seams had seen.

”Is it the same everywhere as here?” he asked, already knowing the answer. Seams nodded and replied anyway.

”As far as you can see in any it’s the same. Here, Beacon, all bad.” The Sev’ryn shook his head. ”I’m not sure I’m ready to face any more of these farmers this evening. Especially when we don’t really have any answers yet.”

He got no argument from Oram, who was eager to get off whoever-it-was’ land and get home before dark. Also, with their heads lifted from the road, locusts were free to fly straight into their faces, which was unpleasant. They headed back towards town, agreeing to have Seams come by Oram’s tent sometime after breakfast. It was nearly dusk by the time Oram tended to his animals, ate some dinner, and returned to his tent.

Seeing the sun half-below the horizon gave the hunter an idea. He took out his lamp and a spare water bowl for his animals. He set the lamp up on a pole, then placed the water on the ground under it and filled it up. He waited. It wasn’t too long after the sunlight faded from the sky that he had his first customers: a handful of locusts arrived and began circling the light from his lamp. He waited for about a quarter of a break with no results; none of the locusts landed in the water.

Oram experimented with moving the lamp up and down the post, with little change. After a while, he tried something different. Noticing how many of the locusts were flying over the top of the lamp, he tried putting a shade on it; he used his straw hat. He started to notice that the bugs began to fly lower, as if to keep the light from the latnern in sight. That meant more bugs flying low over the water. After a couple more adjustments to the height, he settled on just leaving the lamp about midway up the post, perhaps waste-high over the water. It was already a break into the evening, though, and the locust swarm was already dying down noticeably. Only three locusts were floating in the water dish, drowned or drowning. Disappointed, Oram folded up the lamp and went in to bed. He lay in the darkness a while listening to the occasional *plip* on the canvas of his tent walls before falling asleep.

When he rose around dawn, he could hear the faint of whir of locusts outside. He could not be certain whether it was louder or fainter than the trial before. Not quite awake, nor properly-dressed, he trudged drowsily out to look at the water in the bowl under his lamp. A couple more locusts had dropped in. The numbers were small enough that he simply fished them out by hand, then he opened the hood to let out the lightstone’s light once more before going inside to make some coffee and breakfast. He got some measure of satisfaction, at least, from the fact that he was able to catch another half-dozen locusts in his light-water-trap before the sun rose.
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Chicken light, chicken bright…you get the idea

Professor Seams was apparently a fairly early riser, for Oram saw him riding up to the traveler’s camp on his little hobby horse about a break after sunrise. The hunter was already ready to head out by the time Seams rolled up. The professor appeared eager, keyed up, although he gave no particular reason why. He decilned when Oram offered him coffee, expressing his wish to head out right away. Once again, the pair donned their straw hats and kerchiefs, and rode out with lowered heads into the locust-laden morning to visit Daltrik once more.

As they went, Oram told Seams about what he had learned about using some sort of cover or shade so that the bugs approached the light from beneath. With his eyes resolutely on the ground around Mule’s hooves, he couldn’t see Seam’s reaction to that. There might be fewer locusts aloft this morning, it was hard to tell for sure. Oram certainly wasn’t going to turn his face up to get pelted by them to get a count. Neither he nor Seams spoke on the rest of the ride; Oram wondered if the professor had even heard what he had said about using a shade.

Daltrik seemed to be in a good mood when the farmer greeted them. In fact, he gave an air of being pleased with himself. Oram noticed that there was a net covering the garden next to the house. Thera’s doing, he guessed. ”The chicken trick worked fairly well,” the farmer told them. ”And if you’ll follow me out, I’ll show you something I discovered.”

Thera showed up a the front door to greet the pair, as well. ”He’s been practically bursting to show you guys,” she told them. ”I’m glad you’re here so he has somebody other than me to brag about it to.”

The something Daltrik wanted to show them was a cart that he had pulled out into the open, atop of which were perched a row of small cages that were open at the top. ”Chicken tractors,” he explained. ”Normally you put ‘em on the ground so that the chickens can forage while being protected from hawks. And you shuttle’ em around over the course of the trial. Some people have ones with the little wheels that the chickens themselves can move. But I found putting the chickens up in the tractors like this and then putting ‘em up on the cart is a great way for the glowing ones to attract the locusts, and my flock all ate well last night, and this morning.” He pointed. ”The mesh is really big on these, so the locusts have no trouble getting in.”

Oram peered at their tops. ”And their tops are covered, too, so the light doesn’t shine up,” he observed. He told Daltrik what he had discovered about using a shade on the water trap, to get the locusts to circle low. The farmer seemed delighted to hear that.

”I can use that on my own trap. Let me show you that, as well.” They walked next to the edge of the irrigation ditch. The surface of the water was peppered with dead or dying locusts. ”Not exactly going to decimate a swarm of this size at this rate,” Daltrik observed, ”but it’s something. So you reckon if I put a shade on it, it’ll catch more?” he asked Oram. The hunter nodded.

Daltrik turned to Seams next. ”What about you, professor? You found anything new?” The Sev’ryn nodded. ”Apart from what you’re already doing, the best thing you can do is till your fields thoroughly. Any field you can afford to, even if you already tilled it. Locusts plant their eggs in open fields, and tilling cuts down on how many little locusts emerge.”

Daltrik nodded. ”So what are you fellows going to do next?”

”Talk to the other farmers. Tell them what we’ve told you about what we’ve learned. See if we can get them to take the same steps. We also plan to assess the damage more fully, after the swarm subsides.”

Daltrik looked at Oram again. ”You remember Jurgen? He’s the white-haired fella pointed up my way last arc, remember him?”

Oram nodded. ”He wasn’t interested in my help catching rabbits, but he was nice,” he recalled.

”Go talk to him first,” Daltrik suggested. ”He’s got even more pull with the neighbors than I do, and he’ll listen to you. You get him on your side, most of the other farmers will listen to you, too. You still remember how to get there?”

Oram thought a bit, then nodded. He was nodding a lot this morning. ”That sounds like good advice,” he said. ”We’ll start with Jurgen. Maybe he’ll come with us to talk to the others.”

With that, Seams and Oram took their leave and pulled up their scarves once more, to brave the lingering swarm as they rode down to talk to white-bearded Jurgen, hopefully to enlist his, and the other Scalvoris farmers’ help, in biting into the locust hordes.
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Knowledge:
[Etiquette] People appreciate follow-ups; they demonstrate concern.
[Intelligence] Pick a good vantage point from which to survey the surrounding terrain.
[Intelligence] Look out for possible interference or interruption during a reconnaissance.
[Leadership] Know when to listen. Anybody can have a good idea.
[Mount:Equine] Insect swarms can harass equines, making them trickier to control.
[Trap Making] How to make a Light/Water Trap for flying insects.

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My first Oram review!!!! Be still my heart!

The was a very nice read. Oram is a straightforward kind of fellow that is knowledgeable in a lot of different things - a good guy to have around! I was curious how one would go about solving a problem with locusts but never fear - glowing chicken tractors!

You write Oram how you want him to come across - direct. That's not a complaint at all - it's a compliment. Some people write direct characters with flowery descriptions and vice versa which can be confusing. I appreciate the way you write him and the care you take in describing everything around him and his thought processes.

I also appreciated that Oram was only a piece of the story. You had several npcs involved (written beautifully, btw) that helped add depth and their own influence into the story.

I'm looking forward to reading more adventures with Oram! Well done!

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!

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