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Re: [Haven] Visions & Volcanoes

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Vega:

Knowledge: None requested.
Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Kura:

Knowledge: None requested.
Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Elisa:

Knowledge:
Discipline - Don't freak out when Kura comes a callin'
Politics - The intricacies of the Scalvoris Council
Psychology - Focusing on the positive is best practice
Writing - It's challenging keeping up with note-taking when another is talking
Persuasion - Even a logical argument can be overruled by a more logical argument

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
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Comments: I already read this thread here a while ago because Vega linked one of the posts – the one where she talked about Chuckles - in one of our collabs. I found it just as interesting when I read it again now though!

Elisabeth’s excitement when she noticed the ship was obvious. Her visions sound quite interesting – and mysterious – despite the fact that I’ve been involved in this plot for a while myself. I thought it was a good idea that she decided to take notes. Vega shared a lot of information!

Vega was grumpy in this thread. I didn’t know that she considered gardens to be false illusions of controlling nature, and that Kura had been there when the docks had collapsed. I like how your posts often reveal a bit of Vega’s history and how she sees the world.

Kura was quite professional and got straight to the point. I’m impressed by the way that you write a politician. I don’t have to check your PC's CS in order to know that she’s highly skilled in Politics!

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Elisa, unfortunately I cannot award you the following knowledges:

Intelligence - Learning information from a first-hand source is insightful
Intelligence - The Albarech is a good source of information


That the Albarech is a good source of information is more or less common sense. As for the other knowledge, Elisa was listening to Vega’s story. She didn’t give me the impression of gathering intelligence.

Leadership - Sometimes one is forced into a leadership position

Elisabeth is not in a leadership role here.

Feel free to suggest replacements for the aforementioned three knowledges. If they are justified, I’ll add them to this review.

Furthermore, I’ve decided to award the knowledge you initially requested as “Politics - Keeping straight whom you've told what to” as “Deception - Keeping straight whom you've told what to”. It sounds more like a Deception knowledge to me.

Finally, I wasn’t sure which part of the thread the following knowledge is for:

Persuasion - Even a logical argument can be ignored

Which logical argument was made? Can you let me know, please? Provided that it is justified, I’ll add it to my review.

That being said, enjoy your rewards, and let me know if you have any questions, please!
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