Can't get the staff

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Can't get the staff

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Elyna


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Discipline: Keeping an outward calm in the face of an obstinate receptionist
Discipline: Hiding your emotions by averting your gaze
Location: Rynmere Gazette
Negotiation: Offering alternatives
Negotiation: Trying to get past receptionists
NPC: Reed: Receptionist at the Rynmere Gazette
NPC: Reed: Not a helpful man.
Persuasion: Being clear about what you want
Persuasion: Persistence is a tool to persuade
Persuasion: Give a journalist a story
Politics: Avoid scandal
Psychology: Sharing secrets can leave you vulnerable
Psychology: Sharing secrets can strengthen bonds
Rhetoric: Making a clear statement
Rhetoric: Explaining a very complex situation
Rhetoric: Rhetorical questions to emphasise a point
Sabine: Pleased to see you
Sabine: You feel you can trust her
Sabine: Someone you shared secrets with
Sabine: Will help you
Tactics: Give as much information as you need to

Loot:
1 apple :)
Fame:
+3 (I figure that being seen is likely to be the cause of gossip etc - especially from Reed!)
Devotion:
None
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana
Sabine


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Discipline: Not slapping a co worker
Elyna: Marrying Malcolm Krome
Elyna: Wants you to be a witness at her wedding
Elyna: Concerned for how the world will see her marriage in the future?
Elyna: Believes someone is trying to kill Malcolm
Elyna: Pregnant
Elyna: Wants you to investigate for her
Interrogation: Questioning the reticent to get the full story
Interrogation: Key questions
Investigation: Investigating nobility
Investigation: Is easier when you are not identified as a journalist
Location: Rynmere Gazette
Negotiation: Stating your position clearly
NPC: Reed: Receptionist at the Rynmere Gazette.
NPC: Reed: Not a helpful man.
Persuasion: Clearly laying out your boundaries
Persuasion: Stating those aspects which are non negotiable
Persuasion: Emphasising the important points.
Politics: No need to arrange a marriage for someone stripped of title

Loot:
NA
Fame:
+5 (Reed's going to gossip about you and Lady Burhan, also good deed/gift)
Devotion:
+1 Ilaren (prayer)
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story Great story - fun to read and lots going on. I'm really impressed with how you two kept this thread so cohesive and clear, despite the time that's past ~ there was no sense of that at all. Lovely interaction and beautiful descriptions of places and internal thoughts.
Structure No problems at all.

Please do PM me if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions!
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