Review Request 2.2.4

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Saza Moshe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Fri Jul 31, 2020 1:38 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Find
City/Area: Nashaki
Notes/Warnings: Memory thread (718). Alcoholism. Drunk old man & frizzy-haired soldier say bye-bye for now.
SAZA
Skills Used: Discipline (Competent), Resistance (Competent), Intelligence (Novice), Etiquette (Competent), Investigation (Novice), Detection (Competent), Strength (Unranked), Climbing (Unranked)

Requested Rewards:
Investigation x4
Strength x3
Intelligence x1
Climbing x1
HYDE
Skills Used: Detection (Comp), Resistance (Comp), Discipline (Novice), Etiquette (None), Negotiation (None), Socialization (None), Investigation (None).

Requested Rewards:
Discipline x1
Climbing x1
Strength x1
Endurance x1
Resistance x2
Detection x2
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory, but some bruises for Saza
Renown: If applicable
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Darius Baer
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Fri Jul 31, 2020 3:50 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Unto The Breach I: The Lie Of The Land
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Skills Used: Endurance (Novice), Leadership (Novice), Logistics (Novice), Negotiaion (Novice), Strength (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Even small weights can feel heavy if you carry them far enough.
Leadership: Show initiative.
Leadership: Lead by example.
Logistics: Small rooms have limited capacity.
Logistics: Doing everything by hand is slow and laborious.
Negotiation: Sometimes it's not what you know but who you know.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable for performing tasks on Faith's behalf.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Fri Jul 31, 2020 3:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Adhere
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for Devin's Diploma in Arcana.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/85k), Expert Endurance (76x/30k), Expert Cosmetology (76x/24k), Competent Acrobatics (26x/17k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), Competent Research (26x/30k), Competent Resistance (26x/21k), Unskilled Writing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics x2
Cosmetology x1
Resistance x1
Research: Graft: Adhere
Writing x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

On Ashan 1st, 720, Devin drank Perfection In A Bottle. He has a perfect physical build for the rest of the season.
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Ashling
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Fri Jul 31, 2020 5:42 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Return of a Strange Ranger, Chapter Three

City/Area: Fensalir, Melrath

Notes/Warnings: Surgery

Requested Rewards:

Ashling


Request
Skills Used: Expert Detection, Novice Discipline, Competent Endurance, Expert Medicine, Competent Psychology, Novice Surgery

Knowledge:

Medicine: Bandaging a whole upper body!
Endurance: Enduring doing surgery while imagining the patients pain
Surgery: Working at a slow and carefyl pace to avoid major mistakes
Surgery: Desinfecting wounds before sewing them
Surgery: Getting the patient drunk to make them less sensitive to pain
Surgery: Using a painkiller tincture before beginnig at the surgery

Loot: n/a

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a

Renown: n/a

Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: n/a

Magic Experience?: n/a


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Oram Mednix
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:49 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I am the one who nocks
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounding landmarks
Notes/Warnings: Memory thread of Oram getting a bow for his twelfth birthtrial.
Skills Used: Combat:Bow, Endurance, Strength, Discipline, all Novice.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[Combat:Bow] Basic draw and release techniques.
[Combat:Bow] Setting up and using an impromptu practice range.
[Discipline] Controlling over-eagerness. (Don’t skip breakfast!)
[Endurance] Using a bow is physically demanding.
[Hunting] There are different shafts and arrowheads for different archery tasks.
[Strength] Using your back when drawing a bow(lat pulls ftw!)

Loot: None. Oram got a bow in this thread, but he no longer has it.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: None, but he has a family and friends who love him, so he truly is rich.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Vito Rossau
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Sat Aug 01, 2020 6:08 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It Hurts Until It Doesn't
City/Area: Shanty, Quacia.
Notes/Warnings: Mature - blood, implied torture. Bad language. Memory thread (714).
Vito
Skills Used: Resistance (Unranked), Discipline (Novice), Combat: Unarmed (Unranked), Torture (Novice), Detection (Novice), Intimidation (Novice), Endurance (Unranked)

Requested Rewards:
Resistance x1
Intimidation x2
Torture x3
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory, but a broken thumb.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Sintih
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Sat Aug 01, 2020 1:44 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Reconnecting, under the light of Yldria
City/Area: Yleuda
Notes/Warnings: part 4 of some Yludih goodness

Yanahalqah
Skills Used: Caregiving: Unskilled
Psychology: Novice
Discipline: Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Caregiving: Squeezing a hand to encourage
Caregiving: Hug to comfort
Caregiving: Letting someone cry on your shoulder
Caregiving: Sometimes being there is enough
Psychology: (Reconnecting under the light of Yldria)x4
Discipline: Putting others first
Discipline: Bottling up emotions

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Small, caring for Sintih in a moment of need
Wealth Points: None

Sintih
Skills Used: Caregiving (0, 0), Discipline (5, 16), Etiquette (15, 36), Intelligence (0, 5), Navigation (0, 1), Psychology (0, 19)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Holding hands helps comfort someone or yourself
Discipline: Letting your emotions out is often the quickest way to get rid of them
Etiquette: Apologize for past mistakes helps maintain a relationship
Intelligence: Use trusted sources in high places to find people
Navigation: Uleuda has three city tiers and a large wall
Psychology: Pushing hands or fingers together is an indicator of strong emotion
Psychology: The presence of a person someone trusts nearby helps with calming someone
Psychology: A gentle touch can convey caring and love for someone
Psychology: It takes a lot of strength to talk about your weaknesses to someone who is important to you
Psychology: Nobody walks away from trauma unscathed

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Sat Aug 01, 2020 6:28 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sandspecks
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for a Diploma in Chemistry.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/151k), GM Chemistry (100x/69k), Master Discipline (151x/45k), Master Strength (151x/61k), Expert Detection (76x/41k), Competent Persuasion (26x/24k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Chemistry: Resource: Sandspecks
Chemistry: How to make silver sand
Chemistry x3
Detection x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
word count: 73

Mutations

Crimson lines on the back of both hands.

Sesser

Ever Alluring I: The bearer has an enhanced constitution, staying strong and healthy in conditions where others would wilt and fall ill. Scars never remain, disease rarely seems to visibly touch the bearer, and he/she recovers from injuries much faster than the average member of their race. The bearer seems to age more slowly, though the effect is superficial rather than biological. In addition, everyone encountered is subconsciously attracted to the bearer, even those of incompatible sexual orientation. Those of alternate tastes may not feel compelled to flirt or pursue the marked, but the spark of incomprehensible arousal, however slight, is there all the same.

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Sun Aug 02, 2020 6:28 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It Was The Yludih!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: A little violence.
Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Rupturing (Expert), Unarmed combat (Master), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Intelligence (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Tactics (Competent), Leadership (Competent), Stealth (Untrained), Intimidation (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Stealth x 2, Persuasion x 2, Intimidation x 2
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes Rupturing and Attunement

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  • Friend of the Flame
  • Kissed By Fire
  • The Refined
  • The Unburnt
  • The Drowned Man
  • Equal Force

Rupture Mutations

  • The Dyslexic
  • Flame-lined
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Sun Aug 02, 2020 6:29 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: A little violence, language.
Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Attunement (Master), Rupturing (Expert), Unarmed combat (Master), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Persuasion (Competent), Tactics (Competent), Leadership (Competent), Thrown (Untrained), Flying (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Rupturing (Snapshot) - Throwing Nimue's anchor
Attunement - The Frequency of Silas Para Bellum
Tactics - Firing from cover with portals
Tactics - Using your ally's strengths
Endurance - Cut by an arrow
Flying - A gentle landing
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: Yes, Rupturing and Defiance

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Defiance Mutations

  • Friend of the Flame
  • Kissed By Fire
  • The Refined
  • The Unburnt
  • The Drowned Man
  • Equal Force

Rupture Mutations

  • The Dyslexic
  • Flame-lined
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