Book hunt for beginners

The surrounding lands of Rharne boast several towns and settlements that lie on the northern shores of the River Zynyx. This includes Mistral Village, Caervalle Town, Zynyx Market and Volta.

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Book hunt for beginners

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Last edited by Amaterasu on Tue Dec 08, 2020 5:04 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 11
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Comments: Looking for some overdue books I see. Hopefully the library appreciates Amaterasu's hardwork.

Some parts of this seemed rushed and summarized again, with details such as the old woman's tirade toward the end being more told via summary with minimal detail, instead of given dialogue. You narrated that the woman provided comic relief at the end, but then didn't show us how.

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