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Alex wakes up

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Arc 716, 20th Ymiden
Alex awoke to darkness. She tried to push herself upright, but her arms refused to move. Confused, she tried again, but her heavy limbs felt as if they were bolted down. As she attempted to move, pain blossomed in her chest, and she gave up. Terror began to seep in, but she pushed it out, breathing deeply. She couldn't see anything, but she wasn't dead, and that was a good start.

Memories began to trickle in. Mr.Gardener had left her alone...A package had been dropped off...She had been stabbed! She tried to move her hands again, focusing intently on her fingers. Slowly, achingly, the creaky muscles contracted and her finger twitched.

She tried to smile. but everything felt tired and stiff, as if she hadn't moved in trials. As bits ticked by she could move more and more of her body, though her eyes still refused to open. The pain was becoming louder, a constant moan emanating from her chest.

The noises of people on the street were faintly heard, though the room she was in was silent. She tried to call out, but she couldn't manage more than a whisper. She lifted her hands up to touch her eyes, feeling a thick crust covering them. Wincing as she picked off the clumps, she managed to force her eyes open.

A dark wood ceiling was lit by a small brazier beside her. She slowly turned her head, a headache loudly protesting the movement. She recognized the room- it was the basement of the Gardeners Grace. A mattress had been dragged down, and one of his tables was set nearby, a variety of light-covered surgery equipment covering the scarred surface.

She peered down at her chest, a thick swath of white bandage covering her wound. She fumbled with it, but she couldn't seem to get it off. She slowly sat up, carefully holding herself up with an arm. A glass of water was sitting beside her, and she greedily gulped it down, not caring about the slightly brackish taste. As she last drop dripped down her throat, she set it down, staring at the rest of the room.

She swung her legs off the bed, slapping the quads as pins and needles flickered in her toes. She stood, tottering for a moment before she regained her balance. One arm clasped protectively across her bandaged body, she made for the stairs, her free hand gripping the tables and garden beds as she passed them. Half stumbling, but determined to get out, she made her way up the stairs, and pushed open the hidden door.

She crept through the office, careful not to knock over one of the many stacks of papers scattered about. She peered out the doorway, and saw Mr.Gardener's back as he busily worked away at the bench.

She cleared her throat, and called out.

"Mr.-Mr.Gardener?"



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His head turned at the voice, eyes widening with surprise.

"Oh, Alex!" His cheerful voice sounded no different than it normally did, but his worry appeared on his face. He scurried towards her, lifting her up easily and whisking her back down the stairs.

"You shouldn't be up." He admonished her as he carefully walked down the stairs. Alex was still disoriented at the quick turn of events. She hadn't expected him to be so strong. "Besides," he added, as his voice dropped to a whisper. "I've told people you're gone on a trip."

His emphasis on the word made Alex even more confused. What the hell does he mean?

As he set her back down on the bed, he caught her look and rolled his eyes. "Guards, dear."

It was her turn to look surprised, and he continued explaining. "After I got back and found you three...well lets just say that its hard to provide a reasonable explanation for my assistant being run through with a sword in my shop."

Alex cleared her dry throat, and tried to speak again. "What'd you do? And how long have I been out?" Her voice was raspy, and cracked as she spoke. She winced, her throat feeling sore.

"Well, let's just say I didn't want the law enforcement involved, so you're to stay down here for another week at least. Until you can move around without pain." He explained, dodging the second half of her question.

"A week!?" Her voice skipped an octave as she shrieked. "Why so long?"

He glanced down at her chest, and nodded knowingly. "I think a week is more than fair considering everything you've put me through. When were you planning on telling me about your...situation?"

She froze, panicked. Despite staring at her bandaged chest wound, she didn't realize what it meant- He knew what she was. The words caught in her throat, and her stomach clenched tight. Her breathing came faster and faster, and her eyes became frantic. They darted around the room, searching, praying for an escape route. But there was none. Mr.Gardener seemed to loom before her, and visions of stoning, lynchings and the gallows filled her mind. The pounding in her head drowned out all other sounds, and her limbs shook with terror.

Pain radiated across her cheek, and she heard a loud smack as her heart went quiet. She stared in shock as Mr.Gardener pulled back his hand, and spoke softly to her.

"There, now are you paying attention this time? As I was trying to say, I don't care. I just want to hear it from your mouth. I think its high time I heard your story."

Alex, eyes watering, nodded. Her fear had vanished, but the anxiety was back. Her insides coiled around each other as she began her story.

"Well, I found out I was Yludih when I was..."
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Alex stopped talking, and silence fell over the room.

Mr. Gardener stared at Alex as if she were a fish that learned to walk on land. A flicker of uncertainty darted through his eyes, and Alex felt herself pull back. She hadn't held back- he knew it all. Her parents, Alfred and Joanna, her years alone She felt oddly hollow, as if everything inside of her had spilled out. Like an infected wound, her silence and solitude had festered, but now all the pus was gone.

He continued to stare at her, his expressions flitting from one to the next. Horror, fascination, curiosity, pity. All at once, and yet none. She pulled back in truth this time, pushing herself away from him until she hit the wall. I never should've told him. This was a bad idea. What ever possessed me to think that he would not judge me?? She lowered her head, and closed her eyes, calming those thoughts, and shutting down her emotions.

A hand settled on her shoulder, and she jerked at the unexpected contact. She raised her head to see Mr.Gardener mere inches away. She recoiled, shocked, as he reached around her, and hugged her. The feeling of being hugged was something she hadn't felt in arcs, and it brought tears to her eyes. Acceptance, it said. You're not alone.
Bits or breaks could've passed, and Alex wouldn't be able to tell the difference. Eventually he drew back, and looked at her.

"Now, are you ready to get back to work? I've got the perfect thing for you."

His comment, so unexpected, broke the sombre silence, and made Alex chuckle.

"Bring it on."
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Nice thread! And obviously part of an interesting storyline, must read more. As you said, it's "a hard one for XP/K", but there was a lot of endurance in it, and mustering of strenght to move against all odds. So I gave you points for this.

And, well, reivewing is super fun. I wasn't able to abstain from using my brand new reviewing rights. So please bear with me. Drop me a PM if you think I overlooked something here. And please mark your post in the review thread as "reviewed"
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