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Vincent


Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Endurance: The slow grinding kind of pain can really ruin your day.
Endurance: Recognising when you need medical care.
Endurance: Keeping focused on one foot in front of the other.
Endurance: Feeling the pain is preferable to not feeling it any more.
Discipline: Forcing yourself to relax whilst in pain
Discipline: Preparing for surgery.
Discipline: Refusing pain relief to keep your senses acute
Discipline: If you really have to say it, say it where no one can hear.
Detection: The eyes are the window to the soul.
Detection: Recognising the look of hurt or disappointment in someone.
Location: Kala's house
Kala: Irritated at you
Kala: Seems to like Sabine
Sabine: You hurt her feelings
Sabine: Helped you
Sabine: Didn't abandon you
Sabine: Tells stories to keep you awake


Loot: -12gn, 1 x very painful shoulder that will take at least 20 trials.
Fame: +2 (giving a gift),
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana

Sabine

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Strength: Hoisting heavy men is good for your abs.
Strength: Pushing it to the last breath.
Detection: Checking small details
Storytelling: Cheer can keep attention, even if it's forced.
Investigation: Calculating possibilities when things don't quite add up.
Investigation: Adding in information from tertiary sources.
Endurance: Adrenaline allows you to endure for longer, but it runs out.
Endurance: Having the end in sight helps you to endure.
Discipline: Not allowing your emotions to overwhelm you.
Discipline: Not throwing up is harder than it seems.
Medicine: Diagnosing by sight
Medicine: Basic tools
Medicine: Assisting at a procedure
Medicine: Cleaning out a wound to prevent infection
Location: Kala's house
Kala: Gray's doctor
Kala: Calls Gray "Vincent"
Kala: Thought "Vincent" was dead.
Kala: A doctor
Kala: Supportive of you

Loot: NA
Fame: +1 (helping to get him there), +1(assisting Kala), +1 (general good deed: not killing Vincent out of sheer frustration)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana

Kala

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Detection: Identifying people, even when you really don't expect to see them.
Detection: Discerning emotions from facial expressions
Investigation: Working out what's not being said, as well as what it.
Medicine: Diagnosing lung problems
Medicine: Triage when faced with a number of problems.
Medicine: Treating arrow wounds
Medicine: Analgesics can dull pain, and wits.
Medicine: Using the right tools can make all the difference.
Medicine: Cleaning wounds to prevent infection
Logistics: Planning out your treatment helps.
Surgery: Removing arrows from wounds
Surgery: Expanding wounds where necessary
Surgery: Sutures
Discipline: Keeping focus
Discipline: Channelling emotions
Vincent: Not dead
Vincent: Still getting into lots of trouble
Vincent: Has a new friend, Sabine.
Sabine: Cares about Vincent
Sabine: A good assistant
Sabine: Emotional, but controls it.

Loot: +12gn
Fame: +1 (helping Vincent), +1 (going to find Sabine)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview / Comment


I loved this thread! I really enjoyed it great pace, awesome writing and fantastic story! I'm so pleased I got to review it!
Story Awesome - great - really well paced, lots packed in there.
Structure - great from all of you. No worries at all
Please do PM me if you've got any questions or if you feel I've missed anything at all ~ happy to talk it though!
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