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Shea helps Niv build a fort.

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Niv
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Joined: Sat May 21, 2016 5:16 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Tiny Sage
Renown: 101
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Niv became almost completely absorbed in the art of decorating with peculiar embellishments. shrivelled mushrooms, insect corpses and sundered worms weaved into decorative braids covered the house. Once Niv finished one tiny project she would stop to gather interesting materials for the next one. It didn’t really occur to her that she might be going overboard because she was having too much fun.

Niv only stopped once Shea did, and joined her friend to look over the chaotic mess they had created. After helping Shea to make the finishing touches, Shea said her good byes and Niv didn’t really want to work on her project without her. Instead Niv crawled into the opening and laid down inside. It probably needed some soft feather down on the inside or even a few pillows to make the place more comfy. It still didn’t take long for Niv to fall asleep after working so diligently on such and ambitions project.
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Nymph
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Collaboration: 5
Storyline: 3
Structure: 5

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  • Shea: Beautiful, Grassy Hair
  • Construction: Using Nature
  • Shea: Easily Distracted
  • Dancing: A Form of Expression
Note: Niv, you might want to darken up the font in your boxcode. My eyes found it a little hard to focus on with it being so close to the background color.
Shea
Collaboration: 5
Story: 3
Structure: 5

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  • Construction: Using Nature
  • Construction: Making Art
  • Climbing: Need to Build Endurance
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I thought the entire thread was cute. I especially liked how they chirp and mimic animals throughout the thread. I didn't give you complete story points as I thought it was a little disjointed and there was a significant amount of potential with more description. Otherwise, nice job ladies.
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