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Yrmellyn Cole
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: The Dim Source of Dreams Pt.1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: No. Lucid dream.
Requested Rewards:


Yrmellyn

Skills Used:
Expert Intelligence, Competent Discipline, Novice Storytelling, Expert Psychology

Skill Knowledge

Intelligence: The relationship between random wishes and results
Intelligence: The relationship between low experience and lousy results
Discipline: Being half-disciplined by only doing "a little bit"
Storytelling: Telling a brief story about a personal experience
Psychology: Creative visualization
Psychology: Derailing to cognitive dissonance, making art of failure

Non Skill Knowledge:

Dreamwalking: Governing

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: n/a

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Ulric
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Devoted Without A Cause
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language maybe?
Skills Used: Discipline (Novice), Socialization (Untrained), Materialization (Master), Syphon (Competent... I think I used it.), Persuasion (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Socialization x 4, Persuasion x 2
Loot: A place in Sintra's resurrection que.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No, but ghost experience.

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Victor Amielle
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Appraisal
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Odd job.
Skills Used: Master Research (100x/41k), Expert Transmutation (110x/31k), Competent Linguistics (26x/11k), Competent Discipline (26x/18x), Competent Detection (26x/14k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research x3
Meditation x1
Linguistics x1
Transmutation: Identity x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5 or so, for helping Rose.
Wealth Points: 1 WP. This is Odd Job #1, and Victor gets paid 1 WP for it. It's also his Ashan wealth thread.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Maybe? Victor briefly used a Transmutation technique.
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Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Rowing An Errand
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Skills Used: Novice Logistics (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Navigation (4XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Seafaring (25XP, 6 knowledges), Novice Strength (6XP, 4 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Logistics: Small packages can fit into small spaces.
Navigation: Work your way around hazards.
Seafaring: Sand bars can appear during low tide.
Seafaring: The tides can take you wherever they wish, if you let them.
Seafaring: Sand bars can cause a boat to run aground.
Strength: Using a tool as a lever can make it easier to shift heavy objects.

Loot: A Tier 10 Woodworking kit, as one of the kits claimed from this post. (Go to the Leaderboard link, then hover over Darius' name in Week 4.)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If warranted.
Wealth Points: N/A
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: Through the Veil, Pt.1
City/Area: Emea.
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream.
Requested Rewards:


Yrmellyn

Skills Used: Skills Used: Expert Investigation, Novice Deception

Skill Knowledge

Deception x 3
Investigation x 3

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: n/a
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Jailbroken Souls
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Just to dreamers being dreamers.
Alyune
Skills Used: Meditation (Competent), all other skills used (untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 x Meditation
2 x Tactics
1 x Intelligence
1 x Storytelling
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Balthazar
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Detection (Competent), Persuasion (Novice), Investigation (Novice), Etiquette (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Investigation x 4, Etiquette x 4, Persuasion x 2
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cleaning Up The Vermin
City/Area: Yaralon area
Notes/Warnings: This is another thread that I've now realized I never submit. It it a collab that was abandoned.
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Detection (Competent), Persuasion (Novice), Investigation (Novice), Stealth (Untrained), Meditation (Competent), Rupturing (Expert),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Stealth x 3, Meditation x 5, Rupture (Roar) - Scaring a dog
Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Rupturing.

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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: An Unorthodox Interrogation
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Violence, I think. Contemplating killing a bird and maiming a man. This is a very old, now determined abandoned thread.
Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Socialization (Competent), Detection (Competent), Persuasion (Novice), Investigation (Novice) Rupturing (Expert), Torture (Untrained), Tactics (Untrained), Intimidation (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Tactics x 4, Intimidation x 3, Torture x 3
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes, it was.
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance and Rupture

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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
Aylune
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wind Walker
City/Area: Central Idalos, Etzos, North of Relay
Notes/Warnings: Potentially unsettling descriptions of mild gore and death. Expert tier in Defiance for Aylune. When he is nourished by the air, it's his Expert-level mutation being unlocked.
Skills Used: Defiance (Expert), Becoming (Expert), Meditation (Competent), Unarmed Combat (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Elemental Consumption Mutation
Defiance: Air Embrace
Defiance: Air Guardian
Becoming: Kathor Form
Meditation x2

Loot: Kathor Tail Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: Healed Amputated Toe, Healed Broken Shin
Renown: If Applicable
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance, tiering up to Expert.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tracing Back Roots
City/Area: Egilrun, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Murder, References to Violence; Hacking up a Corpse, Novice Magic Use (Graft), Sappy Romance.
Laures

Skills Used: Endurance (Unranked), Resistance (Unranked), Psychology (Novice 25).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance x3
Resistance x3
Psychology x3
Carver
Skills Used: Endurance (10 Novice), Resistance (Unranked), Strength (Unranked), Storytelling (Unranked), Deception (20 Novice), Graft (10 Novice), Meditation (25 Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance x 4
Deception x 2
Discipline x 2
Graft: Enervations
Graft: Enervations: Energies Inside Living Flesh.

Injuries/Overstepping: Mild/Light Overstepping for Carver (due to his exhaustion and doing both hands without a break between) - numbness in fingers/hands and tingling.
Loot: +1 Average Hand Axe (for Carver).
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Graft for Carver.
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