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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: For A Coin
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Some dirty thoughts

Soren
Skills Used:
Business Management - Expert
Acting - Unskilled
Negotiation - Expert
Socialization - Novice
Resistance - Novice
Detection - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation x1
Acting x3
Business Management x3
Socialization x1
Resistance x1
Detection x1


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +5 for a performance
Wealth Points: +7 WP for Tier 5 Business Owner. Wealth Thread for Vhalar 719
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

Azrael
Skills Used:
Resistance - Unskilled
Socialization - Novice
Acting - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Resistance x 5
Socialization x 2
Acting x 3

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +5 for participating in a performance and being beautiful
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Strange Professor
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: In order to get his Letter in Magical Theory Devin needs two study threads. As I need a certain number of magic-related knowledges, I specified my knowledges. I put them under “Research” as that seemed most appropriate to me, and attending a lecture is a way of research something, after all.
Skills Used: Competent Discipline (26x/17k), Competent Detection (26x/11k), Novice Investigation (5x/23k), 0 Research

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Becoming: Also called Transmogrification
Research: Becoming: Is an actual transformation
Research: Becoming: The Three Sovereign Substances
Research: Becoming: Allows you to blend aspects of different people
Research: Becoming: Transformations are painful and take time
Detection x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Seeker
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Language, Violence... Kinda?
Skills Used:
Acting (Novice), Blades - Gladius, Dagger (Master), Stealth (Master), Tactics (Master), Dreamwalking (Competent - 40pts)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acting: Playing a Humble Soldier
Blade (Gladius): Disabling Slash Across the Thighs
Dual Wield - Dagger x Gladius: Sword Wounds and Defends, Dagger Provides the Killing Blow
Stealth: Hiding in a Crowd
Tactics: Using a Crowd to Approach a Target (and escape them)
Tacitcs: Use Crossing to Escape a Scene Quickly


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking: Advancing in Power Also Provides Ability to Track/Find Other Dreamers
NPC Martyn: Vivid Imagination, if Lamentably Innocent When it Comes to Real Battle
NPC Martyn: Dreams Often of Glorious Combat as an Etzori Knight


Loot: Dreamwalking Brand placed on NPC Martyn, Kasoria's son
 ! Message from: Pygmalion
Claimed 3/7/2020
word count: 138

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Tio Silver
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The House Filled with Darkness
City/Area: Deepwatern Cavern, Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Quite a lot of heavily implied dark themes, most notably child abuse. Again all implied, but still quite heavy.
Skills Used:
Combat: Unarmed (Da'riya.) Currently Master (160 XP.)
Dreamwalking. Currently Grandmaster (120 XP.)

Requested Rewards:
Combat: Unarmed (Da'riya) x2
Persuasion x4
Loot:
+1 NPC Morgana Silver, approved here.
+1 New set of eyes. All the better to see you with my dear.
-1 Delroth's Charm
Injuries/Overstepping:
None
Renown:
Medium - For infiltrating Deepwater Cavern, terrifying a tough-as-nails mercenary and inflicting him with a never-seen-before curse.
Wealth Points:
No
Collaboration:
No
Magic Experience:
No
 ! Message from: Pygmalion
Claimed 3/7/2020
word count: 122
Fast Facts
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Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wald's Scalvoris Camp
City/Area: Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: Flustered Wald
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Abigail
Etiquette x2
Socialization x2
Animal Training x2
Field Craft x2
Skill Use
Unskilled in all used Skills
Socialization
Animal Training
Field Craft
Etiquette
Wald
Seduction X4
Animal Training x2
Field Craft x2
Skill Use
Animal Training Expert 90
Fieldcraft Expert 90
Socialization Comp 30
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In "Honor" of Hart
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Crude Language
Skills Used:
Business Management - Expert
Socialization - Novice
Intelligence - Competent
Detection - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management x2
Socialization x2
Intelligence x1
Detection x1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes)
 ! Message from: Pygmalion
Claimed March 8
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Morning After with a Venora
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Just some awkward discussions


Soren
Skills Used:
Business Management - Expert
Negotiation - Expert
Intelligence - Competent
Etiquette - Novice
Socialization - Novice
Detection - Unskilled
Leadership - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation x10
Leadership x3

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Tristan
Skills Used:
Master Etiquette (151x/68k), Master Persuasion (151x/37k), Master Politics (151x/73k), Competent Detection (26x/16k), Untrained Interogation, Untrained Intimidation


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges:
Intimidation x4
Interrogation x3
Persuasion x10

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Eihr: Not Hart
Eihr: Told me what happened to Hart
Eihr: Blind
Eihr: A Mortalborn of Edasha
Eihr: Has fractures
Eihr: Has not been blessed by any Immortals
Eihr: Told me that Hart was blessed by several Immortals
Eihr: Told me that Hart can fulfill wishes

Soren Kvistson: Wronged Hart greatly
Soren Kvistson: Had no idea what his associate would do
Soren Kvistson: Might be sorry for what he did to Hart
Soren Kvistson: My new business partner

Loot: Hart's crystal heart
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Eihr
Skills Used:
Meditation - Unskilled
Politics - 25/250
Detection - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation x4
Politics x4
Detection x2

Tristan Venora (religion): Vaelus [Vhalar]
Melrath: A general understanding of Melrathi law

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
 ! Message from: Pygmalion
Claimed March 8
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Rakvald Tentacle
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Communion
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Blood drinking, blood letting, torture, maiming, implied nudity and intimacy, fade to black, cultish vibes, profane magic, etc...
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skills used: Graft: Expert; Surgery: Competent; Endurance: Competent; Discipline: Expert; Meditation: untrained.

Graft: Leech: Leeching the bloodlight's thirst for blood.
Graft: Leech: Blood may act as an extension of one's body if it is fresh enough.
Graft: Corruption (Mutation): Primordial blood-drinker, the batboy.
Graft: Energizing: Sealing the wounds to a slight trickle of blood.
Surgery: Arteries of the neck and wrists.
Endurance: Blood-letting as a way of getting tough.

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Graft Overstepping Corruption: Bat Boy: Rakvald's face (and that of many of his totems) have taken on the nose the fangs, and the furrowed forehead and brows of a bat-like creature. He also has sunken, darkened skin around his eyes.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: YES Graft
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The First Heavy Snow
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Mild nudity. Also this thread was sort of abandoned/petered out so just turning in as is, just to close it out.



Soren

Skills Used:
Leadership - Novice
Business Management - Competent
Endurance - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership x3
Business Management x3
Endurance x2

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +5 for hosting an event
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Jasper

Skills Used: No response when I contacted regarding review request

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Samuel

Skills Used: No response when I contacted regarding review request

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Navyri

Skills Used:
Flying (Comp), Endurance (Expert), Swimming (novice), Socialization (novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Flying x3
Endurance x2
Swimming x1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Victor Amielle

Skills Used:
Novice Deception (25x/8k), Competent Endurance (26x/25k), Novice Swimming (5x/0k), Novice Acting (25x/1k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception x3
Swimming x2
Endurance x3

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Eihr

Skills Used: Requested no rewards when I contacted his writer.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Requested no rewards when I contacted his writer.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Why, Hello There, Greta
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Skills Used:
Unarmed Combat (Brawling) - Novice
Negotiation - Expert
Business Management - Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Brawling) x1
Business Management x3
Negotiation x2

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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