Review Request 2.2.3

If you've finished a thread that needs reviewing, are interested in applying to be a peer reviewer, or have questions relating to the reviewing system, please post here! All reviews and review inquiries are handled here!

Moderators: Staff, 18+ Peer Reviewer, Peer Reviewer

User avatar
Llyr Llywelyn
Approved Character
Posts: 1489
Joined: Sat Feb 02, 2019 12:24 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Random Emea Encounter #3857
Renown: +635
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Sat Jan 11, 2020 9:13 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: You Can't
City/Area: Etzos.
Notes/Warnings: Mature, nudity, references to sexual themes. Magic-related, Spark Removal, some Mortalborn ability play. High Impact Character Dramatics/development.
Emelia Enners
Skills Used: Endurance (Comp), Discipline (0), Empathy (0).

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance x6
Acting x2
Discipline x2

Non-Skill:
Spark Removal
Llyr: Removed your Spark

Loot: -1 Empathy Spark (Parent Spark: Woe)
Injuries/Overstepping: Severe Overstepping and Delayed Failed Initiation resulting in Complete Fraying.
Magic Experience?: Up to Reviewer.
Llyr Llywelyn
Skills Used: A lot... If you have questions, please PM me!
Transmutation (250/250), Attunement (35 Comp + Domain Magic/Sparks Frequency), Discipline (155 Master), Meditation (155 Master), Endurance (155 Master), Caregiving (155 Master), Detection (155 Master), Psychology (120 Expert), Logistics (80 expert), Tactics (80 expert), Research (45 Comp). MB Ability – Refinement (Cultivation Domain).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement – Frequency: Emelia Enners.
Attunement: Note: Domain Magic - Empathy.
Attunement: Note: Domain Magic - Overstepping.
Attunement: Note: Rapacity.
Attunement: Note: Devastation.
Attunement: Note: Overpowered.
Attunement: Note: Panic.
Empathy: An Out-of-Control Spark.
Transmutation: Absorption.
Discipline: Surgical Precision with Ether.
Meditation: Stopping while in the midst of Flaying.

Non-Skill:
Magic: Flaying
Magic: Flaying: The Thirst
Magic: Spark Removal
Woe: Initiated Emelia into Empathy.
Emelia: Couldn’t handle her Empathy Spark.
Emelia: Severely Overstepped.
Personal: I flayed Emelia Enners, but I didn't kill her.
Personal: Souls taste delicious.
Effect: The Thirst (29 Vhalar 719)
Mortalborn Domain (Cultivation) Ability:
Refinement: -25 breaks. (29 Vhalar 719)

Loot: +1 Empathy Spark (Parent Spark: Woe)
Injuries/Overstepping: The Thirst from flaying (until Rebirth Cycle?). Mortalborn Fracturing on his fingertips for a powerful use of his domain ability to support the facilitation of the spark removal. Maybe some attunement overstepping also, but the flaying might've prevented it?
Magic Experience?: Yes, requesting Empathy for the "Initiation" of transferring the spark.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
 ! Message from: Peg
Claimed
word count: 319
User avatar
Brent Forrester
Approved Character
Posts: 190
Joined: Sat Aug 24, 2019 12:59 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Cartographer
Renown: +120
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Sun Jan 12, 2020 1:48 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Dark Mother's Forest
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned Thread - Soren hasn't been around for a while and Kisaik is alright with submitting it for review.
Skills Used: Brent: Navigation (15), Mount (10), Detection (0), Business Management (30).

Requested Rewards:
Kisaik
Knowledge:
1 for mount
1 for etiquette
1 for stealth
Brent
Knowledge:
Navigation: Traversing forest trails
Navigation: Keeping to a direction despite hilly terrain
Navigation: Correcting for a previous error in direction
Navigation: Using a map to identify current location and planned destination
Mount (horse): Basic riding through hilly terrain
Mount (horse): Riding at a slow trot
Detection: Spotting approaching travellers in a wagon
Business Management: Following up on a business deal
Loot: n/a (see wealth points)
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably not
Renown: Reviewer to decide (probably not much)
Wealth Points:
Brent
So this could go either way since the thread is abandoned, but I'm hoping the Reviewer will consider this thread, and a previous one Brent did with Soren, in which they agreed on a transaction for Brent to sell his maps to Soren. In Ymiden 719, Brent did not yet have his mapping business, but he completed the thread "Another Day, Another Stool" with Soren to sell his maps to Soren (see business deal "loot" from the review). This current thread (The Dark Mother's Forest) was intended to be a follow-up thread in which the transaction could actually take place for WPs, now that Brent actually has a business. However, since I haven't seen Soren for over a month, I'm hoping there's a chance that the WPs can be awarded, even though this has been abandoned. If WPs are applicable, then it would be 6 WPs (Tier 4 business + 2) for having a PC Patron.
Business: Compass and Design Mapping
Ultimately, I figured that if I didn't ask, then the WPs would definitely not be awarded. So thank you for your consideration.

- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: Interview (Vhalar 719)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Strange
Reviewed
word count: 364
User avatar
Victor Amielle
Approved Character
Posts: 314
Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 3:29 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: +195
Character Sheet
Secrets
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 7
Medal count: 7

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Sun Jan 12, 2020 3:22 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Lord and the Falconer
City/Area: Lysoria
Notes/Warnings: Slice of life thread. Might be boring.
Skills Used: Competent Etiquette (26x/22k), Competent Persuasion (26x/11k), Novice Falconry (2x/1k), Novice Deception (25x/2k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Falconry x3
Deception x2
Linguistics x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Strange
Reviewed
Last edited by Victor Amielle on Sat Jan 18, 2020 8:36 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 65
User avatar
Doran
Approved Character
Posts: 959
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
Renown: +346
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Player Review
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Medal count: 22

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Events

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Mon Jan 13, 2020 5:26 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Blood of a Lotharro, Part 1
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: This is related to Doran's Alchemy capstone "Racial Blood Magic".
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/96k), Expert Medicine (76x/44k), Expert Research (76x/41k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy x3
Medicine x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
word count: 68

Items

Ring of Reversal: Doran owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Sesser

Ever Alluring I: The bearer has an enhanced constitution, staying strong and healthy in conditions where others would wilt and fall ill. Scars never remain, disease rarely seems to visibly touch the bearer, and he/she recovers from injuries much faster than the average member of their race. The bearer seems to age more slowly, though the effect is superficial rather than biological. In addition, everyone encountered is subconsciously attracted to the bearer, even those of incompatible sexual orientation. Those of alternate tastes may not feel compelled to flirt or pursue the marked, but the spark of incomprehensible arousal, however slight, is there all the same.
User avatar
Woe
Approved Character
Posts: 575
Joined: Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:46 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Grief Counselor
Renown: +260
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Secrets
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Tue Jan 14, 2020 3:34 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Who Stares Back?
City/Area: Treth
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes, self-harm, g...g...ghosts.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Discipline: Who Stares Back?
[*]Empathy: Tapestry: Exploring a ghost's emotional tapestry.
[*]Psychology: Who Stares Back? (1/4)
[*]Psychology: Who Stares Back? (2/4)
[*]Psychology: Who Stares Back? (3/4)
[*]Psychology: Who Stares Back? (4/4)
Skillplay
Psychology: Master
Meditation: Competent
Empathy: Competent
Persuasion: Competent
Discipline: Competent
Torture: Competent
Whip: Expert
Loot/Losses: nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion.
Renown: none
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
word count: 98
User avatar
Faith Augustin
Approved Character
Posts: 4104
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
Renown: +1000 +
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Partner
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Wed Jan 15, 2020 11:02 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~ Teaching ..... ~~~~~
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Teaching (250/250)
Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
None.

Loot:
None.

Injuries/Overstepping:
None

Renown:
None

Wealth Points:
None

Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
word count: 51
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

~ Rharne HQ
Dust Quarter Satellite Clinic ~ Order of the Adunih~Soup Kitchen & Community Center
User avatar
Oram Mednix
Approved Character
Posts: 27
Joined: Thu Jan 09, 2020 2:59 am
Race: Human
Renown: +20
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Thu Jan 16, 2020 12:29 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Was ist das für ein Untier doch!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Some violence, if you count rabbits. Also, some nudity, if you count rabbits.

Skills used:

Trap Making [25/100]
Hunting [23/250]
Field Craft [3/250]
Animal Husbandry [0/250]
Scalveen [Broken]

Requested Rewards:
All rewards for Oram Mednix as this is a solo thread.



Knowledge:

1) Trap Making: How to make a rabbit snare.
2) Trap Making: Funneling helps ensure that your quarry actually has to go into your trap to get the bait.
3) Field Craft: Keeping everything high and dry makes for happy campers.
4) Field Craft: Building a campfire.
5) Animal Husbandry: Basic care of a pack goat, even one with a dumb name.
6) Hunting: Harvests bring pests, and pests bring pest removal opportunities.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Oram probably now has a couple references for trapping pests from the local farmers. 5 points, maybe?
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) ETA: None, as this is a wealth thread and I already requested the Wealth Point there.
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: Was ist das für ein Untier doch! This is a wealth thread for Cold Season 719.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
Last edited by Oram Mednix on Fri Jan 17, 2020 4:07 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 239
Villains are powerless against story beats.
User avatar
Ashling
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jun 01, 2019 9:15 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: +70
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Thu Jan 16, 2020 1:18 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Silver Stalker, Chapter Five

City/Area: Melrath (Raelia)

Skills Used: Novice Animal Husbandry (0/250, 2K) Novice Leadership (0/250 XP, 0 K)

Notes/Warnings: Part 5/5 in a series.

Requested Rewards:

Ashling


Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Bathing a dog
Animal Husbandry: Catching a happy dog which is slowed down by a limp
Animal Husbandry: Tending to a dog’s injured leg
Leadership: Using your “doctor’s voice” to ask people to assist you
Leadership: Suggesting the solution you think gives you the most power
Leadership: Matching people with a job they have proven able to do

Loot:
One dog named Silver
Silver
Image


Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Renown: N/A

Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:

Collaboration: No

Magic Experience?: N/A

 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
word count: 169
User avatar
Wald Lowca
Approved Character
Posts: 1151
Joined: Sat Feb 09, 2019 12:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: +255
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5
Medal count: 2

Contribution

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Thu Jan 16, 2020 8:20 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Chalkspit IV
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Crying
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sybil
Caregiving (x2)
Caregiving: Animals can provide comfort
Caregiving: Pre-operative preparation and addressing issues
Negotiation (x4)
Negotiation: Reaching a fair compromise
Negotiation: Surgery cannot be negotiated on
Negotiation: Offering alternatives
Negotiation: It's best to know the legalities of something before offering
Persuasion (x4)
Persuasion: Allowing another to come up with their own answer
Persuasion: Prodding another person to come up with a response
Persuasion: Sometimes, provoking a response is better than getting another to do something
Persuasion: Keeping someone just happy enough with a situation
Psychology (x4)
Psychology: People can form emotional bonds to animals
Psychology: People do not like being deprived of emotional bonds
Psychology: Isolation can be unhealthy
Psychology: Isolation can be necessary for healing
Skill Use
Psychology GM
Negotiation Competent 55/250
Discipline GM
Caregiving Competent 60/250
Wald
Strength: Workout with Karlsson
Strength: Workout with Shanks
Strength: Workout with both Shanks and Karlsson
Strength: Working out with Karlsson mad
Endurance: Working out every day
Endurance: Forced to eat properly
Discipline: keeping with a set schedule
Discipline: Listening to people who know better
Discipline: Trust others to help you
Discipline: Control your emotions properly
Meditation: Focus on your problems
Meditation: Work on your problems
Meditation: Do not keep everything in
Socialization: work with people
Skill Use
Discipline Competent 45/250
Strength Expert 80/250
Endurance Expert 80/250
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
Last edited by Wald Lowca on Mon Jan 20, 2020 4:10 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 254
User avatar
Woe
Approved Character
Posts: 575
Joined: Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:46 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Grief Counselor
Renown: +260
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Secrets
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Thu Jan 16, 2020 9:03 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Getting Salty
City/Area: Lysoria
Notes/Warnings: Implied nudity, mature themes, pranks, salty water, and silly slapstick humor. 15 posts of minimum length.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Swimming: Getting Salty (1/5)
[*]Swimming: Getting Salty (2/5)
[*]Swimming: Getting Salty (3/5)
[*]Swimming: Getting Salty (4/5)
[*]Swimming: Getting Salty (5/5)
[*]Swimming: Long Dive
[*]Swimming: Freestyle
[*]Swimming: Breaststroke
[*]Swimming: Dog Paddle
[*]Swimming: Backstroke.
[*]Endurance: Holding breath underwater for a half a bit.
Skillplay
Swimming (Untrained)
Endurance (Competent)
Running (Untrained)
Strength (Novice)
Seduction (Competent)
Socialization (Novice)
Empathy (Competent)
Attunement (Novice)
Discipline (Expert)
Meditation (Competent)
Loot/Losses: a set of basic clothing
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: for walking back to the village naked 5-10
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Strange
claimed for review 1/23
word count: 133
Post Reply

Return to “Reviewers' Section”