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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 12:46 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Fleshbound Tome
City/Area: Broken Mindscape of Rakvald
Notes/Warnings: gross imagery and descriptions.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Bookbinding: Basic tools: glue, thread, and needle.
Medicine: Adhesive glue will seal minor scratches and cuts.
Needlework: Sewing together a bit of flesh and hide to close wounds.
Surgery: Fleshy book operation.
Surgery: The book bone connects to the... page bones?
Surgery: The page bone connects to the... cover bones?

Loot: Dreamscape Repair! Hopefully Rakvald gets his voice back, but that is pending Peg's approval.
Injuries/Overstepping: Exhaustion, but this is a long time ago.
Renown: no
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 2:20 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: III. The Scent
City/Area: Commercial Circle, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language alone... honest!

Three of Three, all done!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Searching for Hidden Compartments in Furniture
Detection: Knowing the Sound of a Hollow Space
Detection: Searching is Often a Matter of Grinding Patience
Intelligence: Truly Important Documents are Always Hidden
Intelligence: Maps are Valuable Sources of Information
Politics: Placating Rivals by Fighting a Mutual Enemy


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos - The Citadel: Massively Fortified, Above and Below Ground
NPC Moira Vorund: Knows About the Sintra-Worshipers in Etzos, But Not that Marshal Webb is Among Them
NPCs Stavos and Devane: Bodyguards to Moira Vorund
Philosophy: Etzos Needs No Immortals


Loot: A detailed map of several secret passages from the Commercial Circle into the Citadel, and a list of informants kept by the late Bangun Vorund, including individuals of magical, criminal, and political influence
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 3:43 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Pursuit of Hexcellence
City/Area: Rharne, The Stormlands, Shores of Lake Lovalus
Notes/Warnings: Hex ghost skill write-up. Memory of the buggy hollow for the hex is a part of F’hank ‘he wolh spirhts. Part 2 of Distant Horror
Requested Rewards:
Skill
Hex: Memories play on a loop
Hex: Hexmark - Isolating a memory segment
Hex: Hexmark - Understanding the five senses to be manipulated
Hex: Hexmark - Desire or disgust are the point of manipulating senses
Hex: Hexmark - Creation of a Hexmark
Syphon: Hungrily syphoning some of own hexmark on impulse

Loot: 1x Bug-Infested Tree Hollow Hexmark
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 1:12 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mycology, Miasma, Murder?!
City/Area: Emea/dreams
Notes/Warnings: Arachnophobia
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Deception: Sometimes it's safer not to tell the truth.
[*]Intelligence: Emea, a vast source of intelligence
[*]Intelligence: Don't overshare the truth.
[*]Meditation: Being present in the moment.
[*]Meditation: Realizing that the dream cannot be real because it conflicts with reality.
[*]Resistance: Taking a venomous bite from an emean being.
Loot/Losses: Lucid dreaming, Initiated into Dreamwalking.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: no
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 6:56 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What's New Pussy Cat?
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Implied nudity, and plague heaps all around. Woe gets sappy.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Cryptography: Sometimes it's just scribbles.
[*]Discipline: Alcohol loosens your inhibitions.
[*]Discipline: Tongue is loosened by one with a caring disposition.
[*]Empathy: Knot: Tying your emotional strands to stall feelings for another time.
[*]Empathy: The spark may, when overwhelmed by emotion, shut down and knot all emotions as a defensive mechanism.
[*]Empathy: Strumming those non-feelings, so that others may feel numb.
[*]Empathy: The look of a flayer's hunger in another's eyes.
[*]Empathy: The Emotional hues of despair and sorrow.
[*]Intelligence: Contact: Mister Magpie: A Quacian youth who is more thoughtful and experienced than his years would let on.
[*]Intelligence: Mister Magpie keeps his cards close to his chest.
[*]Linguistics: Vahanic: A southern language spoken in Quacia.
[*]Linguistics: Vahanic: A colorful language with many curses.
[*]Meditation: Processing difficult emotions with the aid of another.
[*]Meditation: Human contact can be helpful to sort through difficult emotions.
[*]Meditation: Clearing your mind by going to sleep.
[*]Meditation: Laying still can calm your thoughts.
[*]Meditation: It's hard to think straight with a ghost's voice in your ear.
[*]Psychology: Woe isn't as intelligent as he feels when he's drunk.
[*]Psychology: Inebriation doesn't make for the best of insights.
[*]Psychology: Inebriation can lead to emotional instability.
[*]Resistance: Syrupy alcohol is among the strongest kind.
[*]Resistance: One who hasn't drunk much before may have weaker resistance to start.
[*]Resistance: Enduring the sickness of the med tents.
[*]Resistance: Walking in close proximity to the plague heaps.



Mister Magpie: Lowborn man from Quacia
Mister Magpie: Possibly not all that he appears.
Mister Magpie: Works the med tents in Etzos.
Mister Magpie: Mistook me for someone named Green.
Mister Magpie: Looked at me with a murderer's gleam.
Mister Magpie: Is haunted by ghosts of his own.

Llyr
[*]Caregiving: Tending to an extremely drunk person.
[*]Caregiving: A sponge bath.
[*]Linguistics: Translating books from Ith’ession to Common.
[*]Linguistics: Translating texts is a good way to quickly expand vocabulary.
[*]Linguistics: Different terms for the same concept.
[*]Medicine: How to keep someone from choking on their vomit.
[*]Medicine: The process of a physical examination.
[*]Medicine: The use of leeches to take blood samples.
[*]Medicine: A rod implement to identify skin lesions without direct touch.
[*]Medicine: Procedures during war and plague times.
[*]Politics: Making yourself useful to the city you reside within.
[*]Politics: The legacy of cities.
[*]Politics: Slave ownership.
[*]Politics: The purpose of choosing a position of advisement instead of direct rulership.
[*]Research: Some information can only be found in books with specific languages.
[*]Research: Analyzing folk lore and mythology to figure out possible truths.
[*]Resistance: Tolerance of alcohol strengthens, the more you drink it.
[*]Resistance: Exposure to medical intake tents.
[*]Resistance: Exposure to plague pyres.
[*]Seduction: Knowing a potential new partner is already healthy.
[*]Seduction: Don’t get them drunk, it messes things up!
[*]Strength: The heavy gravity of guiding a drunken man’s walk.
[*]Torture: Ghosts could be used to torment the living.
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Woe: Freed slave from Rynmere.
Woe: Chatty and sad drunk.
Woe: Murderer (of a woman named Emma Heen).
Woe: Adopted daughter died from choking on a biscuit.
Woe: Spent some time in Yaralon.
Woe: Jailer, as his profession.
Woe: Joining the Etzori military to help (and possibly suicidal?)
Woe: Doesn’t like Immortals (or their kin).
Woe: A mage of unknown domains.
Woe: Knows I am lowborn and from Quacia.
Woe: Knows me as Mister Magpie.
Loot/Losses: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: Not sure maybe 5 for making a scene at a tavern.
Wealth Points: 1 wp for Llyr he already had a wealth thread for the season - viewtopic.php?p=127221#p127221
Collaboration: YES
Magic Experience?: Yes Empathy for Woe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Mon Nov 11, 2019 9:26 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Polka-dot Periwinkle And Gold
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Since North is away, it's completed and was meant to lead into a follow-up thread, so submitting for review.

Requested Rewards:
Llyr
Knowledge:
Swimming: Suddenly submerged.
Swimming: Breaking free of a stream's current.
Swimming: The danger of waves.
Linguistics: Encountering unfamiliar words.
Linguistics: Making sense of unknown words through context.
Intelligence: Alias: West.
Etiquette: Politely inquiring as to why a person is a dog.
Etiquette: A wolf is not a dog.
Politics: Melrath has noble houses.
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Spirits: Ose-bori
Spirits: Induk
Spirits: Diri
Spirits: Anak, Spirits of Concept
Spirits: Myrkvior, the Induk of a forest in Melrath.
Location: Melrath
Melrath: Worships Induks instead of Immortals
Melrath: House Magnus.
North Magnus: A Melrathi Becomer and dreamwalker.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Tue Nov 12, 2019 3:24 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 1.3 The First Offer
City/Area: Northside Orphanage, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Third part of an ongoing series, in set-up phase. No action whatsoever. Oh, and Llyr is wearing a Ring of Paradigm so none of his mutations are in effect (described in previous threads).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: A planned, but casual employment offer.
Business Management: Considering what potential employees might be interested in.
Business Management: Can be used in tandem with Intelligence.
Intelligence: Sharing a mutual contact's name to build trust.
Logistics: Serving water to a great number of people with limited cups.
Logistics: Mealtime preparation for over a hundred people.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Up to Reviewer.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Tue Nov 12, 2019 4:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Of Gem Stones and Rivers (Tristan Venora) viewtopic.php?f=326&t=20073
City/Area: Desnind, Tosibeere River
Notes/Warnings: Too cute!
Requested Rewards:
Tristan:
Knowledge: Alchemy: Alchemy isn't alchemy without explosions
Alchemy: How to turn yourself blue
Alchemy: Reagent: Dog's hair
Alchemy: You never know if something is a reagent until you test it
Alchemy: Harvesting crystals for alchemy
Alchemy: A potion that enables you to speak Common fluently?
Alchemy: Potions are always temporary
Endurance: Walking through cold water
Ranged Weapon (Crossbow): Good for shooting things from a distance
Storytelling: How I met a cannibal
Storytelling: What cats talk about
Storytelling: What the Misty Miasma is like

Dula: Alchemist
Dula: Mage
Dula: Doesn't speak Common fluently

Loot: Smooth river rocks
6 small clear quartz crystals
Half of a Grossularite Garnet geode

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None

Dula:
Knowledge: Linguistics: Common; Swears
Linguistics: Common; “Cannibal”
Linguistics: Listening closely before speaking
Linguistics: Paying attention to your inflection
Linguistics: Common; Spoken in a "proper" fashion
Linguistics: Finding common ground
Mining: Finding a geodes center to crack it open
Mining: Finding rocks left behind by previous miners
Mining: Using tools to pull out a geode from dirt
Mining: An eye for the shine
Mining: Plenty around rivers
Alchemy: Using crystals and stones
Endurance: Walking through cold water

General: Mining area for crystals off of the Tosibeere River, Desnind
General: Tosibeere River, Makubwa Lori
General: Tosibeere River legend
General: Tristan is an alchemist, kind, and a weirdo

Loot: Smooth river rocks
6 small clear quartz crystals
Half of a Grossularite Garnet geode
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None

Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Wed Nov 13, 2019 4:08 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Lute, Part 3
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Part 3 in a series of threads. I'm not sure how realistic it is, to be honest.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Pickpocketing: It’s good to have an accomplice that is keeping watch
Pickpocketing: Easier in a team
Pickpocketing: Easier when you have a distraction
Pickpocketing: Speed is important
Pickpocketing: Don’t linger after stealing something
Stealth: Hiding around a corner

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5-10 for committing a crime?
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Wed Nov 13, 2019 11:43 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mob Mentality
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Off scene violence, boring solo is boring
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be calm
Acting: Pretending to be a native
Acting: Trying to look "natural"
Meditation: Focusing on one thing
Meditation: Keeping calm during a mob
Meditation: Clearing ones mind

Loot: Secondary human form
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: +5 for being a part of mob...kinda(?)
Wealth Points: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Nope
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