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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Fri Nov 08, 2019 8:31 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Fading LIght
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: A lot of references to various political events involving Etzos and such. This is also Doran's dreamwalking initiation.

Requested Rewards:
Doran
Skill Knowledges:
Deception: Wording things carefully so that you don’t give away too much
Discipline: Remaining patient
Discipline: Keeping your calm in the face of extraordinary events
Discipline: Refraining from asking too many questions
Discipline: Not showing how surprised you are
Discipline: Standing still while someone is pacing
Discipline: A neutral tone
Discipline: An expressionless face
Discipline: Refraining from touching something
Intelligence: The current political situation in Etzos
Intelligence: News travel slowly sometimes
Intelligence: Someone’s research can reveal a lot about them
Intelligence: Putting clues together
Intelligence: No answer is an answer as well
Research: Some libraries are better than others

Non-skill Knowledges:
Dreamwalking: Initiation
Dreamwalking: Lucid dreaming
Dreamwalking: Branding
Dreamwalking: The Veil
Dreamwalking: Doors
Dreamwalking: Entering another’s dreamscape
Dreamwalking: Using magic in Emea is dangerous
Dreamwalking: You can change the way you look in Emea
Dreamwalking: You can change your dreamscape

Llyr Llywelyn: Initiated me into Dreamwalking
Llyr Llywelyn: Etherist
Llyr Llywelyn: Mister Magpie
Llyr
Skill Knowledges:
Intelligence – Contact: Doran Thetys, a doctor and professor in the academy at Viden.
Intelligence: Exchange of information based on location and names.
Intimidation: A poised, unexpected arrival.
Negotiation: Initiation into Dreamwalking for Possible Return of Research and Intelligence.
Politics: How to use information to your advantage.
Politics: Can be used in tandem with Intelligence.
Politics: The Big Picture.
Politics: The importance of contacts.
Research: A professor has more access to libraries than a student.
Seduction: Playing coy.
Stealth: Hiding in another’s dream.
Stealth: Appearing out of seemingly nowhere.
Teaching: Discerning between enthusiasm and impatience.
Teaching: Teach the foundation, first.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Dreamwalking – Brand: Doran Thetys (on lips).
Dreamwalking: You can change the way you look in Emea.

Doran Thetys: A doctor.
Doran Thetys: A professor of alchemy.
Doran Thetys: Hero of Oscillus
Doran Thetys: Sesser (marked by Syroa).
Doran Thetys: Worked with Lord Vuda.
Doran Thetys: Currently resides in Viden.
Doran Thetys: Escorted him to the Veil.
Doran Thetys: My Initiate.

NPC - Lord Vuda: Likely isn’t dead unless a body is found.
NPC - Lord Vuda: Aware of everything that happens in Etzos.

Woe: A Webspinner.
Woe: Lethodra (marked by Sintra).
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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word count: 415
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sat Nov 09, 2019 12:13 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It Can't Be
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Violence and language, per usual for both.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kasoria:
Detection: Recognizing a Place from The Past
Detection: Noticing the Flaw in Another's Recollections
Discipline: Turn and Face The Past
Endurance: Shaking Off a Punch to the Face
Endurance: Tightening Your Muscles to Absorb a Blow
Negotiation: Calling a Truce
Negotiation: Showing Faith By Returning a Weapon
Rhetoric: Answering Accusations
Rhetoric: Matching Vitriol
Rhetoric: Letting Rage Fuel Your Tongue
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Swiftly Shifting Your Guard to Block Multiple Incoming Punches
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq - Combo): Double Kick, Disarm and Counter
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Holding On to an Enemy to Keep Them Close enough for Additional Blows

PC Maxine: Alive After All These Arcs
PC Maxine: Believed Kasoria Betrayed Her Back in Etzos
PC Maxine: Marked by the Immortals
PC Maxine: Far Deadlier Than the Girl Kasoria Remembers
PC Maxine: Marked For Death Should She Ever Return to Etzos
Philosophy: No Compromise With The Hated Immortals
Philosophy: You Do What You Must to Survive (with one exception)

Max:
Blades (Dagger): Plunging Through the Eye
Deception: Using Thrown Muck to Mask Your Attack
Deception: Using Unarmed Attacks to Hide Your Reach for a Blade
Endurance: Fighting Through a Strike to Your Face
Intimidation: Implying You're More of a Challenge Now
Intimidation: Invading Personal Space
Intimidation: Threatening to Attack with Divine Abilities
Intimidation: Threatening to Drown Someone
Intimidation: Threatening to Remove a Mage's Spark
Unarmed Combat: Push-Kick
Unarmed Combat: Keeping Your Pattern Unpredictable
Unarmed Combat: Mixing Feigns into Attack Patterns
Unarmed Combat: Changing "Levels" of Your Strikes


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Nope
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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word count: 298
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Emelia Enners
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sat Nov 09, 2019 2:54 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fire in Your Heart
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Enjoying fires?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Using ashes for eye shadow
Socialization: Using manners when addressing your elders
Rhetoric: Gossiping
Persuasion: Pleading with your parents
Endurance: Withstanding heat from a fire
Endurance: Running all the way home

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: +5 for "helping" with fire relief?
Wealth Points: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Also no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sat Nov 09, 2019 3:48 pm

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Thread Name: The Lute, Part 2
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Carrying a box full of kitchenware
Strength: Pulling something out from under a trash heap
Endurance: Carrying a heavy load over a long distance
Endurance: Being forced to stay in your room
Discipline: Smiling even though you are miserable
Persuasion: Making people pity you might help

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Abra
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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On Ashan 1st, 720, Devin drank Perfection In A Bottle. He has a perfect physical build for the rest of the season.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sat Nov 09, 2019 11:14 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I. Sandman
City/Area: Commercial Circle, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language... less than usual, though

Part One of Three, as Kasoria starts a fresh hunt...

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Navigating by Touch
Intelligence: Knowing Who has Answers, and Thus Whom to Question
Lock Picking: Keeping the Bolt Tight with the Tension Bar
Lock Picking: Setting Each Lever While Keeping the Bolt Tense
Lock Picking: Touch and Sound is More Valuable than Sight
Persuasion: Appearing Non-Threatening (as much as possible)


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: Many Buildings Have Entrances to the Underground
Etzos, Vhalar 719: Whole City Celebrating for Trials After the Sacking of Rhakros
NPC Moira Vorund: Widow to Bangun Vorund
NPC Moira Vorund: Tough and Shrewd
NPC Moira Vorund: Knew Her Husband's World
NPC Moira Vorund: Knew Kasoria, and What He Does
 ! Message from: Abra
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sun Nov 10, 2019 1:17 am

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Thread Name: A Series of Emean Excursions III.
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Getting the legs out of the way when hurdling
Animal Handling: Soothing an animal spooked by blood.
Running: Running a hurdle race
Running: Take deep breaths while running
Strength: Properly picking up a prone body
Strength: It’s difficult to tuck a body under your arm

 ! Message from: Abra
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Egaro
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sun Nov 10, 2019 3:48 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Distant Horror
City/Area: Rharne, The Stormlands, Shores of Lake Lovalus
Notes/Warnings: Hex ghost skill write-up. Memory of the buggy hollow for the hex is a part of F’hank ‘he wolh spirhts
Requested Rewards:
Skill
Hex: Evocation - Focusing on a memory
Hex: Evocation - Carving a rune as an artistic representation of crafting a memory
Hex: Evocation - A long and draining process
Hex: Evocation - Memories used in the creation of a memory are lost
Hex: Evocation - Evocated memories mimic life, and can be addictive
Materialization: Ingress to the beneath is less taxing than egressing

Loot: Npne
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sun Nov 10, 2019 4:37 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: II. From Below
City/Area: Commercial Circle, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Language, the Usual

Part Two of Three, some delightful yet brief violence to spice up the schemin'.

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation - Shackle (Master): Can Launch Iron-Hard Tentacles across the Air at a Target
Abrogation - Shackle (Master): Can Be Conjured Almost Instantly (depending on distance)
Discipline: Holding Back so You Fight to Disable, Not Kill
Negotiation: Knowing When to Just Shut Up
Stealth: Stop, Look, Listen
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq - Combo): Knee Strike to Get Them Down, Head Slam to Finish Them


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Bangun Vorund: Had a Network of Informants Across the City (geographically and socially)
NPC Moira Vorund: Loved Her Husband, Not Matter What He Was
NPC Moira Vorund: Knows about the Pro-Sintra Forces in Etzos
 ! Message from: Abra
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sun Nov 10, 2019 8:38 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Governance
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nu
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Figuring out what feels wrong about a dream
Detection: Checking for ether drain
Investigation: Trying to figure out how far an ability goes
Tactics: Infantry vs Cavalry
Tactics: Hollow Circle formation
Tactics: There’s a time and place for the turtle formation

 ! Message from: Abra
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Sybil Malach
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Sun Nov 10, 2019 11:35 pm

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Thread Name: • Mature • Polymathy
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Reference of crime, intoxication, paranoid analysis of power dynamics, cuddling, Immortals, blood and teeth, references to possession, references of mental illness.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Doran
Deception: Pretending to be empathetic
Deception: Pretending that you didn't notice something
Deception: Omitting certain details
Detection: Noticing that someone looks tired
Detection: Strangely colored "blood"
Detection: The smell of rum
Detection: Noticing that someone makes strange noises in their sleep
Detection: The sound of fighting
Discipline: Resisting the urge to cough
Discipline: Drinking something you don't like
Endurance: Spending an entire evening drinking
Endurance: Holding someone close the entire night
Endurance: Forcing yourself to stay awake
Medicine: How to treat a nosebleed
Medicine: Withholding information can be dangerous
Medicine: Causes of tooth loss
Medicine: How alcohol affects the body
Psychology: Alcohol can make you act out of character
Psychology: How alcohol affects the mind
Psychology: Nobody is truly objective
Strength: Holding someone in place
Strength: Lifting someone up
Strength: Carrying someone in your arms
Sybil
Discipline: Holding off shock about Doran's confession
Discipline: Hiding cumulative stress
Discipline: Resisting the urge to drink with Doran
Discipline: Alcohol can affect one's convictions
Discipline: Resisting some of Doran's interrogation
Discipline: Resisting the urge to just be out with the truth to Doran
Discipline: Withholding shock from the effects of partial-possession
Negotiation: Compromising with information
Negotiation: Getting Doran to surrender some power in a dynamic
Negotiation: Social placement changes the weight of demands
Negotiation: Negotiations can be smoothed over with good drinks
Psychology: Social power can affect one's perceptions
Psychology: Recovery is a process
Psychology: Some mental scars require time to heal
Psychology: Concept: Heroism
Psychology: Concept: Unreliable Narrators
Sociology: Viden values education (Core)
Sociology: Viden values social connections (Core)
Sociology: Viden values wealth (Core)
Socialization: Acquaintance: Doran
Socialization: Having an odd trait or reputation helps start conversations
Socialization: Everyone wants a friend in some capacity
Socialization: Power dynamics can shift a relationship overall
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Up to Reviewer
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

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