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Alex makes an attempt to find some criminal organizations

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Arc 716, 105th trial of Ashan
Alex woke up, excited. It was her day off, and she had been working nonstop since she had returned from her trip out west. She got up and quickly dressed, her day already planned out. Alex grabbed a small purse, and headed for the door. She locked it behind her and tucked the purse securely beneath her waistband.

The streets were crowded, and she picked her way through the masses confidently. The few weeks she had spent actually living in Etzos had done wonders for her assertiveness when it came to the streets. As she passed through the crowd she felt a hand grope her ass, squeezing hard. Not again. No more She reached out, just barely catching his hand as it retreated, and yanked hard, pulling with all her strength.

This asshole... She had given up counting how often it had happened, but this was the last straw. It was about time that she did something about it. She had made sure she was dressed plainly, and her braided hair was the furthest thing from attention-grabbing. Granted, it nearly reached her legs when unbraided and was slowly becoming redder as she aged, but she still felt herself blush with anger.

The man staggered slightly, and came to a stop. He turned around, disbelief crossing his face. He was a greasy man with thin scraggly black hair that ran over his scalp like string. His face didn't look like it had been washed in at least an arc, and his clothes were more patches than not. He looked like one of those who lived in the tent city surrounding Etzos, those who couldn't even scrape together enough money for a rental house.


Alex's other hand dropped to her waist, as she pulled at him, and unsheathed the Pugio there. She quickly stepped towards him, furtively glancing around before she did so. Can't have any guards seeing this. None were in sight, and she let anger fill her body. She felt herself begin to change, her body aching to explode into Avriel. Her fingers begin to grow longer and sharper, but she forced the change down, moving past her anger.

She stood mere inches from the man now, her dagger held lightly by his stomach. It was hidden from others by her cloak , but she had to reach up on tiptoes to speak in his ear. Hardly fear-inspiring if I totter and fall...

"You ever touch me again, and I'll take your manhood home."

She left no room for misunderstanding, but the man began to laugh, his hands going to her shoulders. Alex couldn't tell if he wanted to grab her or push her away, and she left him no time to do either. She jerked the dagger upwards, trying to cut his waistband. That should be humiliating enough.

She succeeded, but her grip was too firm. The dagger slid easily through the skin, lightly cutting him as it did so. She danced backwards as quickly as she could, nearly stumbling. The dark grey pants fell to the ground, bunching around his ankles. He wore no undergarments, but the smell that arose as they fell nearly made her gag. He looked down in shock, his hands finding the small laceration that was just beginning to well with blood.

"Why you little..." He snarled as the blood dripped downwards. He leapt forward, his hands looking more like claws than Alex's ever had. He had forgotten about his pants, however, and toppled over. He sprawled across the dusty ground and those passing by turned to look at the pair of them. Alex turned tail and ran, dodging through the crowd, knife still clutched in her hand. She didn't want to be noticed at all. Dammit, this was not part of my plan. She soon dodged down a side street.

Shit. What did I do? She had enough sense to tuck the dagger back in its sheath, after finding a grimy puddle in an alley to rinse it off, but the deed was done. She stilled her frantic gasps, focusing on slow and steady breathing. Leaning against the rough wall, she retreated inside of herself, shutting out the noise of those passing by. The cold stone of the wall behind her cooled her off, and soon her heart rate relaxed and she felt herself enter a trance.

She stayed there for a few bits, before she returned to the world, feeling decidedly calmer. She exited the alley and rejoined the crowd, walking quickly away from where she had cut the man. I should really make an effort to wear a hood for the next few trials, just to make sure I'm not recognized.

She doubted anyone would bother trying to find her, but better safe than sorry. She continued around the outside of the city, looking for smaller, dingy hole-in-the-wall type bars. With my skills, I'm not gonna be able to find anyone willing to be straight with me, and I haven't made myself known enough for them to approach me. Waiting around isn't good enough for me. I need to get there faster. I can only learn so much from Mr.Gardener anyway.
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A break later, she came across the perfect place. The light and noise coming from a side alley led her there, and she poked her head around the corner to get an idea of what she was getting herself into. The open doorway had a bit of smoke billowing out, and the murmur of those inside leaked out. If she guessed right, there would be a back room or two for those who were getting high. She had no intention of actually taking drugs, but she needed to find a dealer. There was no sign outside, but a large man leaned against the opposite wall. Tattoos and scars covered his bald head, and when he turned towards her she caught a glimpse of his bright eyes.

She walked confidently towards the doorway, and the man moved to block her way. She stopped and peered up at him. By all the Immortals, he is massive!

"What does a li'le thing like you want in 'ere?" His voice was thick and deep, and he crossed his arms across his chest as he did so.

Alex glanced up at his question. This was the first place she had seen that might have what she was looking for, and his presence here made it all the more likely. I've always enjoyed spinning webs. Been a while since I've been able to with someone new...This should be fun.

"I need...I need something." She decided to keep it vague. She had learned the names of several drugs, if nothing else, but she didn't know the symptoms of withdrawal well enough to copy it, so she restrained herself to scratching her arm restlessly.

"Oh? Well there's none of that 'ere. We're a law abiding abode, so you can take tha' elsewhere." His voice grew hard at her words, and he eyes pierced hers.

She glanced up at him, doing her best to appear slightly shifty. She glanced both ways down the alley before stretching upwards to whisper as close to his ear as she could get. She laid her hand across his chest, trying to appear frail.

"But...but, I was told that what I needed was here. Please, you don't understand. I can't..." She let out a small, choked sob before continuing, folding in on herself. "I lost my baby two weeks ago, and..." She let herself trail off, waiting to see his reaction.

She could tell something she had said had had an effect on him. She thought that he looked at her with a small amount of sympathy, but it was hard to tell in the shadowy alley.

"Where's the father? Tha' should be where ya are."

Alex tried to pull a tear from the corner of her eye, but it wouldn't work. She gave up, and continued with her story, her mind racing as she tried to pull the backstory together.

"The father? The father? Ha. You think he stuck around long enough to even know he's a father?" She allowed herself to grow angry, and a bit of venom entered her voice.

This struck a cord with the man, and he appeared to be debating in his head. Finally he nodded, and stepped slightly aside.
"Go ahead." As Alex went to pass him, he set a massive hand on her shoulder, and continued in a deep voice. "For what it's worth, I'm sorry." She turned slightly towards him, nodded once, then ducked inside the tavern.
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The dark room was hazy. Stained tables and rickety chairs covered the dirty floor, and dark figures sat in clusters clutching cold mugs of ale. No one turned to look as she crept in, and she slunk over to a chair in the corner, content to watch for now. A gaunt woman soon appeared to take her order dressed in a depressingly short skirt. Ugh, Immortals have mercy. I'm sure at one point she was attractive, but now this just seems...desperate. She ordered a cider, and burrowing into her chair further, trying to escape into the shadows. Her eyes played across the crowd, watching, waiting.

Alex soon noticed a pattern. A hooded figure on the other side of the room was sitting with a large pack at his feet. People would sit down opposite him, talk for several minutes, and then stand and head upstairs. She couldn't quite be sure, but she thought she caught the glimpse of nel exchanging hands.

She waited until a woman left the table, and she quickly made her way across the room, sliding into the seat opposite him. He stared at her, unmoving. She noticed a scar across his cheek, pulling one side of his face up into a macabre grimace. His dark eyes bored into her, and the weight of his gaze was tangible. She shifted in her seat, uncomfortable. I'd assume he'd start the conversation... She decided to try the addict line again, and at least verify that he was a dealer.

"Please, I need some scarf. I...I just can't..." She let her voice trail off again, looking down at her hands as she nervously picked at the splintered table.

The man spoke quietly, and she had to strain to hear his voice over the murmur of the bar. "That line may work on others, but I can see through you. Now how about you tell me why you're really here."

Alex relaxed, and straightened. She looked over at him, slightly disappointed. I guess I am a bit out of practice, but still! He saw through that way too fast for my liking. She leaned closer, and dropped a hand to her belt, pulling out a single gold nel. She rolled it between her fingers, making it dance and leap from one hand to the other.

"I'm new to the area, but from what I've seen the army is fairly strict when it comes to dealing in certain... frowned upon substances." The mans face tightened at her words, and his hand twitched. She heard chairs scraping behind her, and two shadows fell over the table.

"Now, now, that's not what I meant." She let an easygoing smile cross her face, and the coin continued its journey across her hands. "I simply meant that it can't be easy for someone to smuggle these kind of things in. If, however, they were to be made in the city, smuggling in the ingredients is far easier..." She let the sentence trail off, looking suggestively at the hooded figure.

He stared back at her, and she was still unable to read him. Without a discernible signal, the presences behind her simultaneously returned to their seats, and the man leaned forward. "I'm listening..."

Alex smiled disarmingly at him, doing her best to remove his suspicion. "Well, here's my plan. I'm not sure where you're getting your drugs, and I don't particularly want to know. All I know is that I can make better ones." She knew that confidence was key. Despite not knowing exactly how good they were, she was fairly confident that those who made them likely didn't have her experience in medicine.

"So what's going to happen is I'm going to do a trial run for you. I'll go and prepare a dozen doses of a drug, maybe Zip Stick? Then I'll return here in two weeks with it. You'll take them, see for yourself that they're good quality, and I'll sell them cheaper than what you're currently paying for them. Any problems with that?" She would be surprised if he had any issues with this arrangement. She had spent the walk here thinking about how she would phrase it, and was relatively happy with how it had turned out. It involved next to no risk for him, and he stood to make quite a bit of money if she was as good as she claimed.

He mulled it over, obviously not rushing into a decision. Alex smiled inside as he thought, the cold metal of the nel dancing across her fingers. This is a good sign. I can't have myself going into business with some macho idiot. This one seems...Cunning? Cold? No, those aren't right...Calculating. That's it. He weighs his options, and makes rational decisions.

Finally, the man inclined his head slightly, and Alex took that as approval. She tucked the coin back in her waist pouch, and rose. "I look forward to working with you." She ignored her half mug of cider, which tasted like piss, and left, a scraggly man jumping eagerly into her seat the moment she stood.
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