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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 12:44 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Pyke] Ring Around the Rosie.
City / Area: Pyke (the city of Pyke), Eastern Settlement, Rynmere.
Notes / Warnings: Nothing much. Hart takes Tristan Venora's identity in Rynmere again. He needs a medical exam because of the plague.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (6 skill knowledge because it's a solo)--
Navigation: The layout of the city of Pyke
Politics (Eastern Settlement): The Oakleigh Thorns are the medical authority in the Eastern Settlement
Politics: The use of check points during a state of emergency
Deception: Pretending to be someone you're not
Deception: Using a false name
Deception: Looking the part lends credence to the lie

OTHER KNOWELDGE--
Rynmere: The Rynmere Plague
The Rynmere Plague: Symptoms of the plague

Loot: "Proof of Wellness" papers stamped in Pyke.
Injuries / Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic Experience?: Nope.

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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 11:26 am

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Thread Name: Red Riding Hood
City/Area: Myrkvior forest
Notes/Warnings: violence and wounding
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Acrobatic: Sliding off the back of a horse.
Bludgeon Combat (Torch): Using the cage of the torch to trap someone's hand.
Defiance: Elemental Manipulation (Fire I): Consuming an entire man's body in arcane and divine flame, until he burns to ash.
Defiance: Lobbing a fireball up to the canopy to catch fire.
Defiance: Commanding the flame to douse itself, to create smoke.
Mount (Equine): Riding side-saddle.

Loot: Victory
Injuries/Overstepping: Cauterized quarrel wound in her thigh.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (no
Magic Experience?: Yes Defiance.
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 6:56 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 3. Make My Branches Strong
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Ari'sora
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 9:46 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Rebuilding Hope
City/Area: Ari'sora's personal dreamscape/Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Caregiving: even animals need someone to take care of them
Caregiving: animals need to be comforted just as much as people do sometimes
Caregiving: a hug can go a long way when offering comfort to someone in need of it
Detection: pay attention to the small details when searching for someone
Investigation: following a trail
Hunting; Tracking; house cat prints

Loot: I don't know if it needs to be requested specifically, but as a dream thread, this would count as 2 exp in dreamwalking as well as the normal 10 skill points for a solo thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Maybe slight (5) It is a dream thread, so it might not apply. But she is one of the people helping to rebuild Emea by fixing their personal dreamscapes - is this something that the general public would be aware of? I really don't know.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no


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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 10:57 pm

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Thread Name: This is why you Pay Up
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: wealth thread for saun 719
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Mathematics: Ratios
Mathematics: To estimate ten percent, simply put a decimal after the rightmost number
Business Management: Calculating a break even point
Business Management: Figuring out a profit margin
Empathy: Stronger emotions are more difficult to deal with
Empathy: A stronger bond makes empathy more effective

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: He collected debt so the word would get out that he isn't to be messed with
Wealth Points:
Collaboration:
Magic Experience?: empathy level up
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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 11:04 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bright Silks, Gray Linens
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Rorom is retiring and he is gifting Abra 10wp in this thread.
Requested Rewards:

Abra

Skill Knowledge:
Mathematics: Counting individual units
Physics: Projectiles will fall after being thrown
Discipline: it's hard to resist imposing your will on others
Discipline: Being neutral is harder than it seems
Meditation: it's hard to concentrate with distractions around you

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Abra got involved in a fight
Wealth Points: +10 gift
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Rorom

Skill Knowledge:
none requested

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: maybe for falling down
Renown: maybe for getting into a fight
Wealth Points: -10 WP
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?:
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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Aug 13, 2019 11:07 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: a trip to the forge
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Abra

Skill Knowledge:
Thrown Daggers: Throwing daggers don’t have hilts
Etiquette: Being too casual in a military environment is bad
Business Management: Being specific with what I want
Throwing (Dagger): The more uniform the daggers are, the easier they should be to throw
Smithing: Steel holds an edge better than cobalt or iron
Smithing: cobalt doesn’t corrode like iron or steel

Nonskill:

Alora: Is missing an arm

Loot: 20 throwing daggers for joining the melrath military
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?:

Alora

Skill Knowledge:
Smithing: Steel holds an edge better than cobalt or iron
Smithing: cobalt doesn’t corrode like iron or steel
Smithing: It's not easy smithing with one hand.
Smithing: The forge is hot.
Smithing: Strike the iron while it's hot.
Meditation: Keeping calm while answering questions.
Strength: Learning to use one hand to do heavy tasks.
Discipline: Resisting the urge to anger.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?:
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Thu Aug 15, 2019 10:55 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What do you Dream About?
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Rakvald
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Fri Aug 16, 2019 7:45 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Good News LiBEARian
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dreamscape meddling
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Graft: Leech: Transfer the capability of flesh from one piece to another.
Graft: Leech: Moving the enervation of the absorbed property of flesh to where you will it to go.
Graft: Brain matter cannot be affected by any but the most evolved of Grafter.
Graft: Inorganic matter cannot be incorporated until you've reached the pinnacle of evolution.
Strength: Using your hand strength to squeeze tightly.
Unarmed Combat (Wrestling): Stranglehold

Loot: Dreamscape revival. can speak normally in dreams now.
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping Corruption: Talky Hand Puppets: A small mouth grows on the back of Rakvald's thumb, which sometimes mutters his surface thoughts for him. With discipline, he can suppress its chatter.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes Level-up Expert with graft, if he gets enough points.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Fri Aug 16, 2019 11:27 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Clutter of Three
City/Area: Westguard Etzos
Notes/Warnings: meh
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Caretaking: You're adopted!
Caretaking: Taking a child under your wing.
Detection: Noticing a missing coin purse.
Detection: Webspinning: Using Lethroda to track a runner.
Persuasion: Let a child know why they ought to trust you.
Whip (Sjambok): Whipping a nel out of someone's hand to demonstrate accuracy.

Loot/Losses: +1 adopted daughter.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Wolstan Rand (Ne'Haer)

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A cruciform sword brand on his upper right cheek.
Witchmark: Dark circles under his eyes. On close inspection, one can see multi-hued strands underlying the skin.

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Clothing usually, sometimes high quality padded armor, kettle helmet, and wide brimmed hat.
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