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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:43 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cobalt Blade
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (Greatsword): Difficult to unsheathe
Blades (Greatsword): The weight can throw your balance off
Blades (Greatsword): Wide, stabilizing stance
Persuasion: Teach me to demonstrate your proficiency
Seduction: Impress me for my favor
Loshova Spring’s Bounty: Areas closer to the Loshova grow fastest. This may make it difficult to hide

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: 0
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 92
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:53 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Test Subjects
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hone: Overloading a rune damages the body
Hone: Overload is expensive
Hone: For self-use, couple overload with a resistance rune
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Vertical Kick
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Back Kick
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Jump Kick

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: requesting some for hone
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 81
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 1:27 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: (The White Forrest) The Returning Day
City/Area: Viden The White Forrest
Notes/Warnings: Hunting, and cleaning animals
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Tracking a squirrel's movements
Hunting: Squirrels leave distinct markings
Hunting: Squirrels make a lot of noise
Field Craft: Using a branch as a shovel
Field Craft: Using a piece of branch as a wedge
Butchery: Cleaning a squirrel
Butchery: skinning a squirrel
Combat Ranged (Longbow): Tracking a fast target
Combat Ranged (Longbow): Ready the bow out of site

Loot:
"Shovel"
Squirrel skin
Rabbit Skin
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: nope
Wealth Points: Eh, I could technically gain a point here.
Collaboration:no
Magic Experience?: no
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 122
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:55 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Connections
City/Area: Yithiral, Ivorian Empire
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:

Knowledges:
Detection: Taking note of a group’s armament
Discipline: Focusing on the task at hand
Etiquette: Introducing yourself to a stranger
Etiquette: It’s polite to rise when greeting one’s host
Socialize: Talking about home
Writing: Making a fair copy from notes

Non-skill knowledge:
Ivorian Empire: In Cyclus 719 ships vanished before the coast
Lyvan Dovaren (Flavor NPC)
Lyvan: Used to be a diplomat in Athart
Lyvan: Is (almost) blind
Lyvan: Has a slave named Gwyth

Loot: Some gossip and potential blackmail material
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: +1 reading to a blind man, plus light work as a scribe (Wealth Thread Cyclus: The Aviary, approved here: link)
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

Reviewed by Strange
word count: 144
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 3:23 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: First Day With a New Friend
City/Area: Viden The White Forrest
Notes/Warnings: Cute wolf and rabbit experiment
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Field Craft: Splitting logs into boards
Field Craft: Testing berries on animals
Field Craft: Videnese Snowheart Berry bush
Hunting: Using Predator Sense
Hunting: Waiting for information about the animal
Trap Making: Using berries as bait

Loot: Nothing that would stay in inventory.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: N/A
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 95
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 4:34 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Embraced by Claws
City/Area: Quacia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Alistair becomes the Lord of a region of the island of Tyros in this thread. The foundation of this whole plot has been approved by Aegis and Tyrant before him, and Aegis has been updated on these events.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Politics: Democracy
Rhetoric: Rhetoric's place within democracy
Storytelling: Sometimes, your own story is told more powerfully by others

Personal: I am a Kókkinos
Tyros: The Miletians accepted me as their Lord

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +15 for becoming the ruler of a somewhat major Helian settlement/region, and for becoming a member of team Kókkinos (famous hippodrome-racing team)
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Nu
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 137
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 8:49 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: (The White Forrest) First Day With a New Friend II
City/Area: Viden The White Forrest
Notes/Warnings: Animal Violence and butchery
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Hunting: Wolves can surprise you
Hunting: Working with a wolf
Hunting: Go for the neck of prey
Butchery: Rendering a wolf
Butchery: Removing a wolf pelt
Combat Ranged (Longbow): Calling away an ally before firing

Loot: Wolf Pelt
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown:NO
Wealth Points:No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 94
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Wed Apr 17, 2019 9:53 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Rune Sale
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Surgery: Slicing through skin to access underlying bone
Surgery: Not much between skin and the shin
Surgery: Picking out crushed pieces of bone
Surgery: The shin is contoured
Persuasion: Let me help you
Persuasion: Show you’re not a threat

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: 5 for taking a side in a duel
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: probably not
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 88
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Slow Day
City/Area: Viden The White Forrest
Notes/Warnings: Boring if you don't like building
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Field Craft: Separate tasks
Field Craft: Take your time when building
Field Craft: How to tell if berries are toxic
Meditation: Visualize your goal
Meditation: Understand your limitations
Meditation: Focus your goal

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 85
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:03 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Where It Begins (Part Three)
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam
Notes/Warnings: n/a

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Writing: Scribe: Not taking a break causes aches in the hands and neck.
Writing: Scribe: too small of handwriting can cause eye strain.
Writing: Scribe: a legible copy of another's notes.
Research: Learning directly from the source (lecture).
Research: Never turn down an offer to borrow a book.
Research: The more access to more books, the better!

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fracture: Pathway between Emea and Idalos
Fracture: Magic works differently in a Fracture.
Wells: crystallized energy: There are many different types.
Ether: dream-like potential of Emea
Lucretia: knows a great deal about magic
Lucretia: Has many mutations.
Lucretia: Expects me to visit again soon.
Lucretia: Will let me borrow books from her collection.

Loot: +1 signed book for Damien
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 for getting a signed book from an author.
Wealth Points: +1 WP? (wealth thread here)

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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