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17th of Cylus 719

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17th of Cylus, Arc 719

Praetorum and Sivan flew silently over the grasslands, the light of the moons above casting fractured shadows below them. Ahead of them, a small herd of goats grazed peacefully near a stream, white faces and tails near silver in the moonslight. Holding his crossbow at his side, Praetorum urged Sivan lower, wanting to get as close as he could to the creatures before he tried to shoot. As they did though, one of the goats raised its head, sniffing the air. Too late, he realized the wind was blowing eastwards, leaving him upwind of the herd. He prayed to Karem that he was high enough that they couldn't smell him.

Unfortunately, it seemed the Great Wolf was busy elsewhere this trial. The goat let out an alarmed noise, and Praetorum cursed. As the herd scattered, he shifted his grip on the reins, and pulled Sivan into a shallow descent, directing her towards one of the closest goats. Releasing the reins, Praetorum raised his crossbow, leaning forwards to aim over Sivan's shoulder as she flew towards her prey, claws outstretched. 


Praetorum squeezed the trigger, aiming for the goat's head, but the bolt dipped to the side, startling it into veering off course. Sivan, with a rider on her back, couldn't quite make that turn, and by the time she'd set herself in the right direction, her prey was long gone. 


Praetorum groaned, slumping forwards in his saddle. 
His shoulder throbbed in pain, and he winced, bringing his other arm up to gently massage his recovering shoulder.

"You weren't joking about being bad with a crossbow."

The ground besides Sivan bulged upwards, then began to crumble away, revealing the shape of a woman sprouting from the ground. As he watched, stunned, much of the dirt seemed almost to melt, then slough off the figure within, until a shorter human woman stood by his side, hands on her hips. Praetorum blinked in surprise. 


"Edyn?" He stared at his captain, baffled by her presence. "I wasn't.... expecting to see you here." He looked down at the ground, now flat and smooth like she hadn't just emerged from underground. "I also didn't realize you could do that."


"There's a lot of things you don't know about defiance, I expect." She laughed. "What brings you out hunting, and with an injured arm at that? I could have sworn Selyin told you to get some rest before you came back to work."


Praetorum flushed, dismounting from Sivan. He had been told that, but—"Just wanted to be out and about." He lied. "Not really the sort to do nothing for trials on end." Edyn gave him a flat, unconvinced look, and he sighed, caving. "You heard about what happened?" He asked, referring to his sojourn into Maiden's Refuge. When she nodded, he continued. "I went to do what I can to help, and I did. But not enough. What they needed was food, not protection. In the Legion, we had supply trains, dedicated hunters; we never needed to fend for ourselves. But on the wreck, they had four Yari hunting for twenty. More, once Sivan and I were added into the mix. I wasn't pulling my weight until the attack. I just..."

Praetorum trailed off, and Edyn nodded in understanding. "I'd offer to teach you, but I was never much of a crossbow woman myself. Although...." She gestured at the river, a broad sweep of the arm which swept the water into a curling wave that hung in the air, suspending fish and debris within. Then she let much of it fall, leaving only a row of fish wriggling, confused, atop pillars of water, each around Praetorum's height. "I suppose I can provide target practice." 


His lips twisted into a wry smile, and he shook his head, cocking and loading his crossbow. "I can't imagine you'd have much need to hunt normally with magic like that." Praetorum looked over her, eyes lingering on the runes that glowed over her forehead and around her throat, before dropping down to the vortex of dust that danced constantly around her feet. Raising his crossbow, he took in a deep breath, aiming at the nearest fish. He winced as he did so, his left arm twinging slightly. The weakness of that arm threw his aim off, and his bolt pierced through the pillar of water just below the increasingly distressed fish.

"You'd be surprised." Edyn told him, sitting down by Sivan's side as she watched him. "At least the normal way, the worst that happens when you overextend yourself is you end up sore for a few days, pull a muscle or something." She rolled up her sleeves, revealing strange, smooth lumps under the skin of her forearms. "I once had to swim through the earth for breaks to escape from a sticky situation; when I came back up, I found there were gems and pebbles underneath my skin. I tried to cut them out, but they seem to grow back." Praetorum shuddered at the thought as he reloaded. She smiled. "I got off lucky. I've seen friends end up with much worse; you're right to be wary of magic. It's a harsh mistress, to be certain."


"Then why go down this path?" He couldn't help but ask. "I don't mean to be rude, but I can't imagine ever choosing this willingly. " He raised the crossbow again, then frowned. Casting his mind back to memories of watching other people shooting crossbows, Praetorum lowered it, and went down on one knee to try again. That was much better; by propping his arm up on his knee, he could compensate for the weakness in his arm, steadying his aim. This time, when he pulled the trigger, the bolt flew true, piercing through the center of the fish and shooting it out of the water to fall, flopping on the other side of the stream.


"Why? Because it's dangerous?" She scoffed. "Nothing worth having is every easy, or safe, especially not in Yaralon."
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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He took aim again. "Doesn't it change you?" There was a twang, and a second fish flopped onto the grass, impaled by a bolt. "I don't think I like the idea of becoming something other than I am."

To her credit, Edyn seemed to take his worry seriously. "It does change you." She admitted as he reloaded. "A spark of magic latches on to your soul, and your body and mind are never the same afterwards. But... that's life, isn't it? Everything you learn and experience changes you. Even that mark on your hand. Magic is just a little more dramatic than most. A little more dangerous. I found it a small price to pay for what I gained in return."


Praetorum raised his crossbow a third time, frowning. "And what was that?"


"The power to protect the people I care about." 


The bolt sank into the dirt on the other side of the river; the fish flipped anxiously where it was imprisoned. "Are you trying to convince me of something?" Praetorum asked suspiciously. 


Edyn laughed. "What makes you think that?"


That was a yes then. Praetorum was well aware of how predictable he was. Since Ri's death, he'd thrown himself fully into the role of Shieldbearer. It didn't take a master manipulator to see that protecting people was something of a fixation of his; not much of a leap to think that someone trying to persuade him would go down that avenue. 


Persuade him of what, that was the question. It seemed like she wanted him to understand why she had taken up magic, but he couldn't see why it would matter to her. He wasn't particularly comfortable with magic, to be sure, but he'd seen her save the Hand's collective asses enough times to appreciate what she did. And he hadn't made any sort of fuss even before then, had he? He gave her a questioning look, which she returned with a shrug. 


"If you want to tell me something, I'd prefer you told me outright." He told her firmly. "I don't like intrigue or doubletalk."


Edyn met his eyes, nodding seriously. "I'm just testing the waters right now." She admitted to him. "If I decide I want to persuade you, I'll be forthright about it."

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Nice training thread, good to see a disciplined PC who still struggles. Well done.

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Praetorum
  • Skill Points - 10
  • Renown - 5
  • Skill Knowledges
    1. Hunting: Flying low to get a better angle to shoot
    2. Hunting: The importance of staying downwind of prey
    3. Hunting: Chasing prey on the back of a mount
    4. Ranged (Crossbow): Taking a knee to steady your aim
    5. Ranged (Crossbow): Compensating for an arm injury in aiming
    6. Rhetoric: Use blunt honesty to demand the same
  • Non-Skill Knowledges
    1. Magic: Dangerous to the user when overused
    2. Edyn: Uses Defiance
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