The Review
Auya
Overview
Your writing is just exquisite. Auya's nightmare made me cry - it was so well done. Fantastic writing, I hope you enjoyed this - it was the beginning of an amazing journey for Auya, and one with some very unexpected twists - and well-deserved rewards. Your writing of Auya is intense, emotional and so immersive. Auya's first steps on the Boulevard of Broken Dreams.
Points
XP: 15 (not for magic)
Renown: 5
Renown: 5
Loot
None
Knowledge
None.
Hart
Overview
If we had a group called "The Guilt-Ridden", Hart would have been in it! I love how angst-ridden he is, it's really interesting to see. Totally doing his best, totally out of his depth and yet, he keeps on. Great pc! I'd like to invite you to write up Pala as an Emeyan, and have her become a dream companion of Hart's. Your portrayal of Hart is, frankly, heart-warming and I'm so pleased to have written this with you.
Points
XP: 15 (not for magic)
Renown: 5
Renown: 5
Loot
None
Knowledge
None.
Eliza
Overview
Eliza - so much intensity in that pc! She's great fun and I really enjoy how you portray her as seeing things through an artist's eyes. You do that in very subtle ways, which show in your writing. Great fun, and so much emotion - really, it's been a fantastic pleasure writing this thread with you all.
Points
XP: 15 (not for magic)
Renown: 5
Renown: 5
Loot
None
Knowledge
None.
