Shield and Solace: Part 6

14th of Cylus 719

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Shield and Solace: Part 6





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Tess woke him up as the tides began to ebb out, what would have been the crack of dawn had the sun been visible. "Good luck." Was all she said, and he nodded to her as he saddled up, bringing nothing but his scythe to reduce weight. Sivan was grumpy, both from being woken up early and from the stress of the previous day, but she let him on without much complaint, and took off at his command.

As the kheledzan flew out along the coast, Praetorum couldn't help but look back at the ship growing smaller and smaller behind him. For better or for worse, when he returned here tonight, it would be for the last time.

Shaking his head, he looked away, turning instead to scan the sea. Normally, he'd be able to see a fair distance away from the skies, possibly even enough to spot a ship sailing out from Yaralon. But this was the season of Cylus, and in the dim, permanent nighttime, it was difficult to make out anything from too high up. So, worried he would miss something in the darkness he urged Sivan lower, until they were flying only a few dozen meters above the water.

When he shifted his weight forwards, though, to try and get her to go faster, she tried to rise higher, and complained when he tugged her back down. Frowning, Praetorum noted that they seemed to be going slower than normal. Did the difference in height really affect the wind that much?

Reluctantly, he let Sivan rise a little higher, though not so high that the surface of the sea became indistinct. It was difficult to tell if he was actually going faster; up in the air, he was so far from anything even vaguely resembling a reference point that it was impossible to gauge distance and speed properly. So he maintained that height, keeping the coastline just barely in sight on his right in the hopes of covering as much ground as he could.

He flew for breaks, anxiety rising as the tide ebbed lower and lower, and still no ship appeared within his sight. Maybe he'd misjudged, maybe he should double back to make sure, maybe he should give up this entire endeavor and just head back, admit that he couldn't save everyone. Maybe, maybe...

He shook his head firmly. He needed to stay focused. There was still time before he had to return, and he wasn't about to give up halfway out of fear. People were relying on him.

Last edited by Praetorum on Sat Feb 16, 2019 12:40 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 434
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

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  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Around the fourth trial, just as the tide was reaching its lowest point, Praetorum spotted something strange in the water. Flying lower, Praetorum leaned over the side of his mount, eyes narrowing as he studied the waves. There were the normal waves sweeping towards the coast, but there was another set too, set at a slight angle.

Like something had passed through, disturbing the water.

Suddenly reinvigorated, Praetorum wheeled Sivan around, and directed her further out to sea, following the sweep of these second set of waves. Leaning forwards, he strained his eyes, searching, searching for any glimpse—

There.

A ship, a longship to be precise, with its single sail half unfurled. Heart leaping into his throat, Praetorum directed Sivan downwards into a shallow dive. Once he was close enough, he drew in a deep breath, and whistled as loudly as he could, trying to draw their attention. A figure on deck pointed, and then everyone on the ship that he could see were in motion. Scrambling for cover, scrambling for weapons, it seemed. He shifted directions slightly so they could see him more clearly, and waved, trying to indicate that he was peaceful.

He couldn't see if they understood the motion, but no one shot at him, which was a good sign. There was an indistinct shout, and the figures on deck all moved to the sides of the boat, clearing out the center of the deck.

Praetorum landed there, Sivan nearly tripping over herself at the strangeness of landing on a moving surface. As soon as she came to a stop, a familiar figure half ran, half limped up to him. "Are they alright?" Lucretia, the Paltharnum who he'd met at the beginning of this journey asked anxiously. Her leg was bandaged up, but she was still clearly keeping her weight off it. His own leg injury twinged. He could sympathize.

"Only four grown Yari left, aside from me. But we haven't lost any of the children since I arrived."There was a chorus of relieved sighs, from Lucretia and the crew clustering around them.

"We've been having difficulty figuring out where the ship is, because of the low tide, so we aren't going as fast as we can." Lucretia told him. "Do you think you can lead us to them?"

Praetorum nodded. "It took me a few breaks to fly here, so it's still some distance away."

"You heard the man!" Lucretia raised her voice, and the crew jumped to attention. "Lower the sail, and be ready to row on my command. Sail like children's lives depend on it." 
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Praetorum landed on the deck of the wreck, and dismounted. "Have no fear!" He called out, seeing no movement from the now open hatch. "The cavalry's here!" A head popped up, aiming a crossbow at his face.

"You're back early." Kira said, lowering her weapon. Her eyes slid over his shoulder, and she gasped, scrambling up the stairs and running to the railing. Praetorum grinned, putting a hand on her shoulder, watching with her as a small fleet of longboats came rowing towards them. And standing at the head of the closest boat—


"Lucretia!" Kira shouted, leaning over the railing with a laugh. "Took you bloody long enough." Lucretia blew her a kiss, and raised up a grappling hook. Shaking his head, Praetorum motioned for Sivan to stay, and descended into the ship. He was surrounded instantly by a small horde of children, all asking too many questions for him to hear any of them. Instead, he gestured up at the hatch. 


"Grab everything you want to take with you." He said, grinning. "We're going over the railing." The hole below wasn't entirely inaccessible, but with the tide this high, it would be much easier to just lower everyone down with rope. As the others rushed past him up to the deck, Praetorum went below to retrieve his armor, shield and gear. He paused, spotting something on the shelves that hadn't been there earlier. There were a handful of bones on the shelves, and two skulls. He hesitated, then reached out to touch them. "They're safe." He told them softly. "Thanks to you."


When he emerged onto the deck, he found himself in the middle of several very happy reunions and introductions. Tess, with Derry on her shoulders, was embracing another Biqaj around her age; Lucretia had found herself tackled to the deck by a number of very excited children while Kira watched on. 


Allie hung back, looking overwhelmed, and Praetorum knelt by her side. "She came back for you." He said, giving her a gentle nudge forwards. "Go on. It's time to go home."

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Nearly a dozen trials later, he found a package left at his doorstep. When he opened it, he found an Ithecal sized hunting knife, with a gleaming white handle, and a note. It read:

"Praetorum,

It was damn difficult to find a bone on Rorik large enough for the handle, but we managed. I'm sure you'll make good use of it. Hope your injuries are healing well, and that you'll come visit us sometimes. Just ask around the Hammer Burho, we're a hard family to miss. 


Stay safe, 

Lucretia, Kira, Allie and Tony."
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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It's still exiting even when Praetorium spots the ships coming to rescue, because for a moment they seem ready to shoo Prae down. But (phew) they don't and so the shipwrecked are finally rescued. A really good end with the gift they sent him afterwards. I'm really happy that I picked this series for review. Top story and top writing. I feel that Praetorium is well worth 20 renown for his role in the rescue along the threads. Thanks Praetorum and ... enjoy your rewards ;)

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Loot: A bone handled hunting knife

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Renown: 20 for helping to save a literal boatload of children, really major good deed.

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Knowledge

Mount (Kheledzan): Reducing weight to increase speed
Mount (Kheledzan): Flying is slower too low to the ground
Mount (Kheledzan): Landing on a moving surface
Field Craft: Using the coast as a reference point
Field Craft: Oddly angled waves can be evidence of a ship’s recent passing
Discipline: Staying resolute in the face of uncertainty


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