Shield and Solace: Part 2

10th of Cylus 719

Yaralon is opening as a moderated area on 1st Feb 2023.
User avatar
Praetorum
Approved Character
Posts: 1425
Joined: Sun Jan 20, 2019 11:08 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: 1000
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Shield and Solace: Part 2





Image

10th of Cylus, Arc 719

As it turned out, Praetorum's earlier assessment that the ship seemed mostly undamaged was not quite correct. What he hadn't been able to see from above was the ragged hole on the side of the ship facing inland, that exposed quite a bit of the lower two decks. Walking Sivan into the hole, he found himself faced with a huddle of children, whispering and staring at him. "Are you here to save us?" One of them asked nervously; he was a strange looking one, almost human but for the small pair of wings on his back. Praetorum glanced at the woman by his side, who'd given her name as Kira. She nodded, so he knelt down until he was closer to the children's eye level.

"What's your name?" He asked, as gently as he could manage.

"'m Derry." The boy mumbled, wings fluttering slightly.

"It's nice to meet you Derry." Praetorum smiled at him. "I'm Praetorum. The one who's going to save you is your friend Lucretia; I'm just here to protect you all until she gets here."

That drew a reaction from most of the children. "Miss Lucy's okay?" A boy asked, eyes wide. Praetorum nodded. "I told you!" He turned to a girl by his side, grabbing onto her arm. There was a strong resemblance between them, he noted. Siblings? "I told you she wouldn't go away forever. She's coming to get us." The girl looked a little skeptical, but said nothing.

"Alright kids, that's enough." A Lotharro limped out from inside the ship, carving knife in hand. "C'mon, it's time to eat." He gave Kira a meaningful look as he ushered the children inside, and nodded at Praetorum.

"Thank you for being so confident with them." Kira told him, leading him to what presumably used to be the hold of the ship. "We're down to six adults taking care of all those children, and I was starting to think we'd never get out of this Mastes blasted place."

"Six?" Praetorum frowned at that, securing Sivan to a post. Lucretia had said there were nine when she'd left them. To lose three Yari in the span of trials...

"Six." She confirmed. "That's why I was so careful when you called out. Something in the swamp used Lucretia's voice to lure our friends out into the open, and then this flock of massive birds swooped out of nowhere and took them, flew up high and—" she made a hand gesture like talons opening. "No one could have survived that fall. We try to stay under the trees or the ship when we can now."

He nodded. Unbuckling the saddle from Sivan, he helped her out of her tack, leaving only the reins to secure her by. "What do you have, and what do you need?" He asked, grabbing the saddlebags.

"What don't we need." She groaned. "Mostly, it's food that's our concern. Even with four of us out hunting, this place is a maze, and every creature here is damned tricky. If you can stay with the children, I can go out and hunt as well, which will help. Rorik's been able to boil off clean water from this mess, thank Karem, so we have enough of that to last us. Aside from that, the local predators seem to have realized we're an easy target. When high tide comes in, they'll come sliding in to try and sneak a bite. We keep the kids on the upper level when that happens, but it's still rough. "

Praetorum nodded, and began to riffle through his things. "I didn't expect to be staying outside the city for more than a few days, so I've only got a days worth of rations for myself and some feed for Sivan, but I did bring my kit with me. I've got fishing line and hooks, a couple of snares, some rope, blankets, flint and steel, the standard issue survival necessities."

"Fishing line. That'll be a life saver; Tess could definitely use that." Kira rubbed her face, an exhausted expression crossing her face. "If you can keep an eye on everyone in here, I'll go hunting." Taking in a deep breath, the Yari looked him up and down. "I'm trusting you to keep them safe." She said warningly, and he tilted his head, acknowledging her concerns. They hadn't known each other for for fifteen bits, but, well. Desperate times, and all that.

He could only hope that he proved deserving of her trust.
Last edited by Praetorum on Wed Feb 13, 2019 11:35 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 786
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
User avatar
Praetorum
Approved Character
Posts: 1425
Joined: Sun Jan 20, 2019 11:08 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: 1000
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Shield and Solace: Part 2





Image

Timestamp

Praetorum was busy smoothing out a chip in Sivan's claw, when she raised her head and hissed. He glanced up as well, seeing nothing amiss. Still, he'd learned by now that Sivan had a much better sense of smell than he did, so he set her foot down, and picked up the crossbow at his side. Spanning and loading it, he stood up, trying to identify just what it was that had spooked her.

"That root just moved." Starting slightly, Praetorum glanced down at the figure who'd snuck up on him. It was one of the children from earlier, the girl whose brother—at least, he was assuming they were siblings—had asked about Lucretia. She pointed out into the swamp at a nearby tree. "One of those."

He squinted at the tree, studying each of its roots in turn. Each of them seemed inanimate to him—but there was one that stuck out just a bit too far, that seemed just a bit too thick at the end. Raising his crossbow, he took aim at the 'root', and pulled the trigger. His aim was off, but that was alright. The 'root' reared back, hissing loudly as the bolt sank into the ground by its head; before Praetorum could load in another bolt, the snake slithered away, disappearing into the shallow water.

"Good eye." Praetorum told the girl, sitting back down. "What's your name?" He asked. She gave him a suspicious look.

"I'm Allie." She told him reluctantly, folding her arms in front of her. "Is Miss Lucy really alright?"

"Of course."

She scowled. "You can tell me the truth. I'm not a crybaby. She's dead, isn't she?"

Praetorum blinked at her, slightly startled. "She hurt her leg pretty badly." He admitted to her. "But she's with my friend now, and he's flying her back to the city."

"And she'll be safe there?" He nodded. "Then why did you come here?" She demanded.

"I'm here to keep you all safe." He told her gently. "Until Miss Lucy comes to rescue you."

"She won't really come back." Allie insisted, her voice starting to waver.

"What makes you say that?"

She gave him the most scathing look he'd ever received from someone under four feet tall. "She's a grown up." She informed him, like that was all he needed to know.

And maybe for her, it was. It was a sobering thought. He didn't think he'd ever met a kid this jaded before, not that he'd had much experience with them in general. He'd heard that Yari took in abandoned and abused children from other cities, but he'd never really thought about how bad a child's life would have to be that following a stranger to an entirely new city seemed like the better alternative.

He turned fully towards her, kneeling down to bring himself even lower, heart twisting when she stepped back in alarm at his movement. "I'm new to Yaralon too, you know." He told her. She looked at him, visibly puzzled. "Don't tell them I said this," he mock whispered, leaning in conspiratorially, "but they're a very weird people. So in love with weapons and fighting, and the way they speak!" He shook his head dramatically. "Carhnt unnerstarnd ah tharng thart thare sarring." His voice dropped lower into a bad parody of the Yari accent, drawing a slight giggle from the girl.

He grinned at her. "They're very strange." His voice softened slightly. "But there are good things about them too. The Yari are a tough people, they're honorable, and they will do anything to protect what matters to them. Their homes, their customs, and their children." He could see an objection in Allie's face, and gently placed his hand on her shoulder. "That includes the children they've adopted, not just the ones born in Yaralon. There's no difference, in their eyes. In this city, a child's life means the most. So Miss Lucy will do anything she can to get you back safely. And even if she can't, even if she gets hurt and dies, my friend will get to the city and tell someone. Someone's gonna come for you and the rest of these kids. And then you'll have a real home, I promise."

Allie still looked a little wary.

"It's alright if you don't believe me right now." He murmured. "In a few trials, you'll be safe in Yaralon. So just be brave for now, alright?"

"Okay."
word count: 778
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
User avatar
Yrmellyn Cole
Posts: 850
Joined: Sat Oct 01, 2016 9:09 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Attuned to the Art
Renown: 106
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 8

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: Shield and Solace: Part 2

Thread Rewards
Image

Praetorum

Overview

As this is one story split up on a series of six shorter treads I also read the first thread in order to get the context. (I will perhaps take over and review that one too, later.) It was a promising beginning and your writing feels inspiring to me. This second thread is a good read too. It builds up the exitement without progressing the plot too fast. The dialogue is super. I'm exited to see how the story will continue in next thread. I'm going to put the renown in in the review of part 6. So , enjoy your rewards !

Points

10

Loot

Wealth

Renown

Injuries

[/tab]

Knowledge

Rhetoric: Projecting confidence
Rhetoric: Comforting children
Rhetoric: Using jokes to put someone at ease
Rhetoric: Making promises to reassure
Field Craft: Necessities in an emergency situation
Mount (Kheledzan): Much better sense of smell than people


Please use the image code below to stamp your request !

Code: Select all

[align=center][img]/gallery/image/15360/medium[/img][/align]
word count: 172
Post Reply Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Eastern: Central: Yaralon”