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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 13, 2019 11:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Scrubbing for the Soul
City/Area: Scalvoris (Home)
Notes/Warnings: N/A - character exploration, mostly. Got a feeling for Nav's tolerance of negative emotions. I learned she rather throw herself to any activity (especially tidying or training), to avoid being bummed out.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge:
Blades: How to Feint an Attack
Blades: The Techniques of Dagger Fighting
Blades: The Comparison between Daggers and Swords
Unarmed Combat: A Proper Grapple
Acrobatics: Skipping
Endurance: How to Tolerate Icy Conditions
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 2:56 am

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Thread Name: Wings and Things.
City/Area: Rharne.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nir'wei:
Fieldcraft: Using your surroundings to protect your camp from detection by predators.
Fieldcraft: Using overhanging trees to shade your tent in hot conditions.
Fieldcraft: Preparing weapons nearby in case of ambush.
Fieldcraft: Organising your camp into sections to make it easier to navigate.
Fieldcraft: Tapping trees with a spiggot for a close-by fresh water supply.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Performing no-handed dives.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Corkscrewing during a dive for added speed.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Use your whole body when controlling your mount, not just your arms or legs.
Nightshade: Inactive for nearly four months and hasn't made a post since October... I'm guessing she left.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:59 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Whittle Your Worries Away
City/Area: Almund, Scalv
Notes/Warnings: Allusions to miscarriage
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woodworking: How to curve edges
Woodworking: Making circles
Woodworking: Sanding to soften edges
Woodworking: Etching in designs first
Woodworking: Sanding as finishing work
Deception: Lying to yourself about being okay

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Nicks on hands
Renown: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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ન'ઊળઇ૯ ૧એ૪ઇ૮ ઔનઌઈઇ પઇ, પબ ઇબઇ૮ ૯રશ૧ મકઇ ૧એબ. --Korva
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:04 pm

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Thread Name: To Each His Own
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Second part and last part of a grinder, hope you enjoy it anyway! Nothing fancy or frilly, just the Lores and XP.

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Knowledge:
Medicine: Allowing For Rest to Aid in Recuperation
Throwing (Knives): Marking Targets with Peripheral Vision
Throwing (Knives): Lining Up Targets with Shoulder
Throwing (Knives): Sideways Throw
Throwing (Knives): Spinning Double Throw
Throwing (Knives): Two Blades, Two Targets, One Throw
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
NOTE: Kasoria is using the name "Thagoras" while in Eastern Idalos, from Zi'da 717 onwards
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:31 pm

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Thread Name: Map Mysteries
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A two part thread where Nav does some research in preparation of hunting down the Pirate Lords.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge:
Mathematics: How to Use an Abacus
Navigation: Point Your Map North
Navigation: Understanding a Map’s Scale
Navigation: Determine Your Location First
Navigation: How to Read Distance on a Map
Navigation: Uses of Topographical Maps
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Korva
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 7:48 pm

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Thread Name: Those Who Seek
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Bad sailing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Korva
Skill

Seafaring: Using sails to increase speed
Seafaring: Teaching less experienced sailors
Seafaring: Tacking to make a u-turn
Seafaring: Tacking to keep direction
Seafaring: Jibbing throws the boom
Seafaring: Commanding sailors on board
Deception: Lying on the fly
Deception: Lying to authorities
Deception: Changing your story
Deception: Using sympathy to get assistance
Fishing: Using bait to catch more fish
Fishing: Using weight to drop a net farther down
Fishing: Using a boat to drag a net
Fishing: Finding good fishing spots
Fishing: Can be done on land

Non-skill

Kes: Never been on a boat before
Kes: Knows land fishing
Kes: Left his family
Kes: Investigating Pirate Lords

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Skill knowledge:

Fishing: Using a ship allows for catching higher volume of fish
Fishing: Using a ship is a much faster method for fishing
Fishing: Weights on the net allow it to sink deeper
Fishing: Baiting the water when drag fishing is wasteful
Fishing: Not stopping the ship so fish don’t escape the net
Fishing: Using a ship, speed and depth are key
Fishing: When dragging a net, longer length of time equates more fish (usually)
Fishing: Bait floats. Great for pole fishing
Fishing: Large amounts of fish can be heavy
Fishing: Selling fresher makes for better profit
Fishing: Fish can be elusive
Seafaring: Balance is important
Seafaring: Knots are useful for working rigging
Seafaring: Trimming sails to slow speed
Discipline: Watching another to learn techniques


Non-skill Knowledge:
PC Korva: Name is not Not Kali, it is now Captain

Loot: None, except the fish that I'm assuming they sell
Injuries/Overstepping: None!
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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ન'ઊળઇ૯ ૧એ૪ઇ૮ ઔનઌઈઇ પઇ, પબ ઇબઇ૮ ૯રશ૧ મકઇ ૧એબ. --Korva
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 7:54 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Pile of Potasquitos
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Slight gore? Pretty minimal, tbh. Mastemyr works to alleviate some of the city's pest problem and decides to send his application to a few yari with a bit more influence than himself.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge wrote:Hunting: How to Pick Your Target
Hunting: Charge from Tall Grass
Hunting: Listen for Prey Location
Endurance: The Pain of Transformation
Strength: Lifting Your Own Weight
Unarmed Combat: Bite Into Their Skeleton
Loot: 8 dead potasquitos. Possible offer/contract from one of the merchant emperors/empresses.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mastemyr will be sore and unable to transform for the trial.
Renown: 5, for killing a potasquito before it could bite a child.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:59 pm

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Thread Name: Inquisitive Initiates
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Violence, gore, scenes some viewers may find disturbing.
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Knowledge:
Nir'wei:
1. Tactics: You can't individually control every member of a team the way you'd like.
2. Tactics: Maintaining a closed group formation.
3. Animal Training (Wolf): Maintaining a healthy relationship is simpler than once thought.
4. Animal Training (Wolf): Pack mentality isn't about strength or age.
5. Animal Training (Wolf): Training the same command across species is harder than within the same species.
6. Animal Training (Wolf): Give incentive to encourage the behaviour you want them to express.
7. Animal Training (Wolf): Keep them happy and they'll keep you happy.
8. Animal Training (Wolf): Maintaining a solid relationship takes more than just training.
9. Animal Training (Wolf): Any wolf of the pack can challenge authority for leadership.
10. Animal Husbandry (Wolf): Bathing isn't the same as cleaning.
11. Animal Husbandry (Wolf): Caring for their physical health is just as important to their mental health.
12. Animal Husbandry (Wolf): Mites and dust lead to diseases and cuts.
13. Animal Husbandry (Wolf): Good behaviour is important for their health as well as their fighting ability.
Aneka:
1. Leadership: It's not about who's biggest or strongest.
2. Leadership: Treat those around you with respect and you'll get it back.
3. Leadership: Being a good leader isn't about seeking followers, but by leading and letting the followers come.
4. Tactics: Picking your battles.
5. Animal Husbandry: Look for the little details when inspecting.
6. Animal Husbandry: Regular cleaning is important for general health.
7. Animal Training: Using positive reinforcement to encourage good behaviour.
8. Animal Training: Not so different from working with humans.
9. Animal Training: Remember, you're only on top because they want you there.
10. Discipline: Standing up for your friends.
11. Discipline: Disobeying direct orders for what's right.
12. Discipline: Never back down, even when everyone around you tells you otherwise.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nir'wei and all wolves with plenty of bruising. Aneka's got a broken arm.
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Mon Jan 14, 2019 10:23 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Buy a Piece of Mind
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None except its a job thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Negotiation: Starting haggling high to get to a decent price
Persuasion: Children are easy targets
Storytelling: Making up stories for props
Storytelling: Making up stories on the spot

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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ન'ઊળઇ૯ ૧એ૪ઇ૮ ઔનઌઈઇ પઇ, પબ ઇબઇ૮ ૯રશ૧ મકઇ ૧એબ. --Korva
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Tue Jan 15, 2019 12:19 am

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Thread Name: Life begets Illness begets Life
City/Area: Viden Infirmiry
Notes/Warnings: Sickness and reveling in sickness. One creepy fella.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Yithnai: Egg: Torpor grants awareness and near perfect rest.
Yithnai: Carrier: cannot contract diseases from soiled materials, but living tissue.
Stealth: Finding dark spots to hide when there are patrols nearby.
Discipline: Resisting the urge to cough.
Acrobatics: Rolling with the throw to limit impact.
Acting: Feigning fear to elicit pity.

Non-Skill
Location: Viden Infirmiry, a place where the sick are treated.
Immortal: Yvithia, is aware of the thoughts of all in her city's charge.
Location: Viden, a cold sterile city.

Loot: A lovely nose cold
Injuries/Overstepping: A nose cold
Renown: I don't think I would.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No just some blessing stuff.
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