Thelma and Louise (Maxine)

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Qit'ria followed behind Mack, keeping an ever watchful eye and ear out. As they moved through the sewers, Qit couldn't figure out why such a place would even be built. Why would you want tunnels full of shit, piss, and a sprinkling of water? It seemed silly to her. Cities were the worst things. Shit in the woods, let the plants have it, use it. And it never smells so foul in the forest. She hated this city and everything it stood for, and she hoped it would one day fall, returning back to nature.

With a loud clatter, Qit and Mack were out of the sewers. She followed the woman through the streets, stopping at the door that Mack was now opening. She saw Mack stripping of the stench covered clothes. Qit wasn't about to get rid of her totems and clothes. She had a better idea. She once more began the shifting, this time into the house cat. As she went, she assimilated all of her totems and clothes inward, feeling the feces and muck fall off them as they disappeared into the cat. She replaced her cat hair with the fur of the bumblebear.

The fur of the bumblebear holds no scent. With a quick shake, the muck flew from the fur, and Qit-Cat was perfectly clean. And so, she changed back, naked as a jaybird, stepping through Mack's door, crinkling her nose, "You stink."

At Mack's other words, Qit shook her head, "No see. Too much fight."

Qit echoed her bear sense of smell, and began searching Mack's place for food. She found a wheel of cheese and a bottle of something dark, and carried them both over to the table. She sat down, slouching, elbows on the table, "Mantis take father." She ripped off a chunk of cheese and bit into it, and pulled the cork out of the bottle, nose crinkling at the smell of the rotgut. "He dead now."

She looked up at Mack now, straight in the eyes, "They die now."

Meanwhile, another person, carrying a particular stone was walking through the very same sewers. He walked cautiously and with trained eyes searching everything. When he stepped out, it wasn't too hard to follow the stench trail to the same building Qit and Maxine were in. He smiled. He'd come back at nightfall, with help.

Qit took a swig of the strong, rough alcohol, "Why you here Mack? Why you fight Mantis?"


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Max closed her eyes the trill she watched the muck fly from house cat to the surrounding room. If she wasn't concerned with what might've been on her hands, she would've pinched the bridge of her nose. The savage woman had grown perhaps slightly less socially repugnant since the last time they met...or so she'd thought before Qit'ria flung literal shit about the safe house. The Special Assistant would kill her. That is, if she and Rey'na had escaped the encounter with the Mantis alive. She shook the thought from her head and eyed the Becomer with an incredulous expression.

"Yeah, no kidding," she fired back with a frown. "Not all over us have magic tricks." Her gaze followed the woman as she meandered toward the pantry like a wild animal sniffing out a meal. It didn't take her long to find a worthy treasure either. Maxine smirked. A wheel of cheese was the last thing she was craving after the shit storm they'd just passed through. Food was food though, and her exhausted body was starving. Besides, after seasons spent in Slags Deep, any offered meal that wasn't rats, snakes, or fellow inmates was practically still gourmet. While Qit'ria hunted down a bottle Max cleaned herself up the best she could. Then she joined her friend at the table with a thoughtful expression.

Maybe those fucks were worth the trouble.

"Sorry," Max offered as she ripped a piece of cheese off the wheel. "Y'know. For your loss and all." She leaned back in her chair and tasted the meager meal. Her expression hardened as she focused on Qit'ria. Max knew the look in those eyes too well. All the pain, all the anger warped and trapped in the mind until there was no answer more obvious than sweet, sweet revenge. "I'd say those dicks deserved the spears. I think you've got their attention now, too." Given the fierce resistance they'd fronted in retaliation, the Mantis appeared to be anything but an easy adversary. Qit'ria was playing One Woman Army. Hopefully the role would bring her a more satisfying end with more luck than it ever had Maxine.

After the Becomer had her swig, the ex-convict reached forward the take the bottle. She rolled her eyes. Suddenly, it was as though her expression had grown far more bitter than the cheap booze they drank together. She took a long, hard drink of rum before she provided an answer to Qit'ria's prying.

"Wasn't by fuckin' choice," Max growled, passing the bottle back toward Qit'ria and crossing her arms. "I hitched a ride here feeding someone some bullshit lie about agreeing to help. Like you, I'm here to hunt my own prey. That fuckery back there? That was a stupid ally almost getting me and another with us killed. Wait until I get my hands on her. She'll be wishing the damned Mantis caught her first, I'll promise you that." Thinking about it boiled her blood all over again. Not even the Special Assistant would be able to buffer this wrath.

"You're playing a dangerous game, Qit," she remarked with a solemn raise of her brow. She regarded the woman with something of both respect and concern. "This is just the start now. They'll be hunting you. Well, all of us now. Fuck." This was not the plan. She was here to kill Francis Higglebottom and make her escape. Whatever happened to Scalvoris and its agents was none of her concern. In and out. How was she supposed to discreetly hunt this asshole with ashcloaks stalking the streets for her? "You got a plan? Or are you just killing until they stop you?"


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Qit listened as Mack spoke, as this was the most words she'd ever spoken to her. Their friendship, as such, was not exactly based on strong communication. Qit was never one for words, but Mack had already proven to her that she didn't need to speak. Qit already trusted the woman, having seen more than enough to make such a decision. Mack was hunting her own quarry, and had made the mistake of letting a fool get in the way.

Qit knew that well.

At the comment of the Mantis hunting her, she smiled. "That my plan. They come to me. They leave their safe, they in open. Easy target." As for specifics, no, Qit had no such plan. She shrugged, "Keep hunting til no left hunt." As for Mack's own quarry, Qit had simply one statement. "Make him remember you."

And so, the conversation began to lull off. Evening began to fall, and Qit had put a sizable dent in the bottle, as well as the food stores. She rested, leaning in the chair, pulling javelins from her magic bag, checking them, sharpening where needed, tossing away busted shafts. She watched Mack from time to time, seeing that the woman looked quite... different from her memory. Her eyes were colder, yet more savage and wild. If Qit ever bothered to look at her own reflection, she'd see similar there.

Qit came to terms with one fact in their relationship. She owed Mack a mild debt. Qit had rained hell down upon Mack's own hunt. She would not wish for anyone else to do the same to her. Qit's mind worked. She'd have to bait the Mantis again, and lure them far away. Kill most of them, but leave enough alive to spread the word. To take the heat off Mack. Easy enough, she assumed.

Crash.

Qit's eyes snapped forward as the flaming arrow smashed through the window, embedding in the floor boards, splattering the oil from the rag across the floor. Qit tumbled backward in her chair, rolling backwards over her shoulders, landing in a low crouch against the back wall. Another arrow crashed through the window just over Qit's head, oil splattering against her shins. She hissed in pain as tamped out the flames. More and more arrows of flame rained through the windows, and she heard more thudding against the roof and walls.

They'd been found.

Qit's mind didn't think, simply reacted. She saw the fireplace in the far corner of the room, with a fire still lit in it. She ran in a low crouch toward it, drawing a spear. She quickly used it to kick out the largest of the logs there. She then stepped deep into the burning ash, feeling it ignite her foot. She kept her other free, and leapt upward into the chimney. She kicked out the leg, pressing against one side, her back against the other. She snarled through the pain as began to climb the chimney, holding her breath all the while.

She reached the top, but held her position just below the lip. She peeked up just a bit, using the side of her head and one eye, to minimize her visibility. There were no people on the roof, just flaming arrows ignite the thatchwork. But every roof around them was occupied by at least two soldiers with bows. They were all watching, waiting. Qit saw that the bows were not drawn, rather held slack.

They'd assumed their plan had already worked.

Qit gave a hard push off with both feet, gritting through the pain of the burnt one. She was already running as she landed upon the roof. She sprinted for the roof's edge, as she watched the two men begin raising their bows. She leapt as they started to knock their arrows. While she was in the air, sailing toward them, the arrows were drawn. She Unleashed into her Gasping Skitterer form just as the first arrow was loosed, sailing through the space beneath her, what would've been a heart shot. Another arrow glanced off of one of her spikes, as she tucked her limbs and head into her shell.

The spiked shell collided into the face of one of the soldiers, embedding deep, killing him instantly. As he was falling down, Qit was unleashing again, back into her self form. Reaching into her bag, she grabbed a javelin, and loosed it into the other man before he could fire another arrow. One roof was cleared.

Twang. Twang.

One of the arrows, from a nearby roof, smashed into Qit's calf, the other missing. She scowled, snarling loud, before reaching down, snapping the arrow in half and pulling it out. More arrows were being fired, but Qit was already moving, albeit slowly. She ran off the far end of the roof, and jumped. She sailed down into alley below, crashing through a window, landing in an office of some sorts. It was after hours, so it was dark and empty. She saw a window opposite her in this room, and ran toward it. She grabbed a chair as she went, smashing it against the window, shattering it, sending the glass into the street below.

She summoned forth the leafy vines from her wrist, and they worked down toward her leg, temporarily staunching the bleeding. But it was a mild stop gap. Qit back tracked across the room, and walked softly, carefully for the extreme far end of the office, hearing the door downstairs open up. Boots were coming. She gently slid open one of the windows, and climbed out. She propped herself above it, hidden in the tarp that hung over it, and gently shut the window once more. She peered inside, watching, waiting, unsure of what had happened to Mack. A couple of soldiers ran by beneath her in the street, but never even looked up.

She had to think.

They were being tracked. They'd been tracked the entire time. Mack was in the house when it was attacked, so clearly she wasn't a traitor. But something had given them away. They'd been tracked through those sewers. That wouldn't have been easy for the most experienced of hunters. Something would've had to leave a different sort of trail.

Her magic.

That had to be it. If the Mantis were mage killers, perhaps they had means of tracking them too. If she was being tracked, she could use that to her advantage. She adapted her body, turning her skin into the thick hide of the Ithecal, putting spiked shells over her head and knees and knuckles. She felt the extreme drain on her ether. She'd pushed herself really hard this day. But as the transformation took hold, she heard it. A light chiming in the darkness of the office she'd just left. An unnatural sound. And she heard it coming closer, before the chiming stopped, just when her transformation finished.

It could only detect her active use of magic.

That would be an important tool to have. And she'd only heard one chiming. She waited, peering in through the corner, covered by the darkness of the world, seeing a few men inside, searching. One of them had it. She would wait to strike, and take it.



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Max smirked, laughing quietly into her drink as she raised it to her lips. The two women were so different. They came from what felt like totally different worlds. Still, in violence, there was so much common ground constantly discovered. Qit'ria had been wronged by The Mantis. Wrongly deeply. Now she was here to make them pay, just as Maxine was here to make Francis pay. Neither were going to stop until they were satisfied, if such an outcome was even possible. Qit'ria had come to bring a full, lasting reign of terror upon her enemies. If only all the cultists had fled to Rynmere to wear their colors in plain sight like the Becomer's had. All the chaos she could've brought with no personal repercussions to plague her...it was any vengeful woman's fantasy.

"Oh, I'm planning on it," Max remarked darkly to her friend's sentiment. She would be memorable. In his dying moments, she'd make Francis wish he'd never wheeled her out of the crowd. "Make your hunts worthy of their history books." More drink and less talk persisted after that. The pair returned to their old ways, bonding in the silence of each other's company. While Qit'ria went to checking weapons, Max went to cleaning herself up. She returned, cursing quietly and rifling through cabinets with an empty bottle in hand. There had still been no sign of Rey'na or Blackwood anywhere. The waiting game was becoming more agonizing by the bit.

Where are they?

Glass shattered just as Max found that prized bottle hidden away behind one of the cabinet doors. She flinched, reeling back a trill later to spy the smashed window and the flaming arrow stuck in the floor. Oil spilled and fire grew with it. Another arrow soared in and Max darted to take a position opposite Qit behind a wall. Her brow furrowed, gaze snapping to her companion as she watched her hiss and stamp flames from her shins. More arrows and oil deposits began raining down upon them.

"How did they find us?!" she growled, poking her head out only to duck back behind cover as another arrow whizzed by. It didn't matter really how they'd been rediscovered. The reality was that the house was literally being brought down around them, set to flame. She watched Qit dart toward the fireplace and disappear with a spear in hand. Fire crackled and spread, the smoke becoming choking by the bit. They were completely surrounded. She swiveled her head about, squinting through the polluted air for an exit not immediately discernible. "Fuck!"

While Qit was running the roof, the marked woman flung herself desperately out a window. Her shoulder crashed against the ground upon a bed of broken glass. She winced, coughing and cursing the deja vu of a burning house. Max roused herself to her hands and knees just as an arrow struck the ground beneath her chest. She stumbled to her feet, racing toward the direction the projectile had come rather than away. Left, right, she zig-zagged along the cobbles toward the building the closest pair of archers stood upon. Their arrows continued to loose but her unpredictable movements made her a hard target.

When she was under their gaze they noted the sound of another window smashing. The archers looked at each other, grumbling as it became apparent their quarry had taken refuge in the shelter beneath their feet. One moved toward the ledge, cupping his hands around his mouth as he prepared to shout to his comrades to adjust to the change. That's when Maxine had completed her climb up their ladder. A dagger flung into the back of his neck, protruding through his Adam's apple as his shout turned into a weak gurgle. The second archer gasped and turned. The arrow on his bowstring shook as he raised the bow to fire. The marked woman was quicker, planting a boot to his chest. He launched off the roof, slamming brutally on his back on the ground below.

By then the other archers had caught on. Shouts of alarm raised, and confusion arose as soldiers struggled to determine which woman they should engage first. More arrows raised to rest on taught strings. Max smirked, and a vicious gale wind rose that sent their shots wildly off course. The roof top archers paled. In a single will they had been rendered practically useless, their strategy disintegrating to valueless in an instant. That wasn't all. With the roar of wild wind, the house they'd riddled with flames became a new hazard. Like wildfire in a forest, the wind swept the inferno from home-to-home and building-to-building. Structure after structure caught, sending mass panic and alarm as villagers fled their shelters and crowded the streets. Some of the archers were forced to leave their perches of advantage. More confusion. More chaos. Maxine reveled in it.

The marked woman descended from the home and took to the streets. She passed through the gawking bystanders whimpering about possessions lost and memories forsaken by misfortune. Once in a while a clever soldier engaged, and she blessed them with the kiss of death from her gladius. Ahead she heard someone call about a mage. Max's expression darkened and she made her way in that direction. Soldiers began to pile into one of the buildings, some straightening up with shame as they approached others inside. Likely some sort of superiors.

Good.

She darted into an alleyway out of sight, peering just around the corner to watch the exchange. The area was still thick with Mantis and Qit'ria was no where to be found. The only explanation Maxine could gather was that the woman might've been pinned down, or worse, injured somewhere. Just as the Becomer had taken the heat off her by escaping and exposing herself on the roof, she too would create a window of opportunity for her friend's benefit. She looked from one of the burning buildings across the street to the office where the odd chiming was coming from. A mischievous gleam came to her eyes. She knew just what she'd do.

A man-sized tornado ripped down from the burning thatched roof, thundered across the street, and plowed into the side of the office building. Flames ripped along the flank of the structure as the tornado dissipated. Mantis inside began to shout, instinctively turning toward the opened door to escape. The first to cross the threshold into the alley found a dagger thrown into his face. He dropped silently while those behind him shrieked their surprise. The second managed to safely shove his way out, but the third ate an airborne dagger that caught him in the chest.

"There was a good bottle of rum left in that house," Max growled as she exited the shadows to stand in the path of the escaping group. Her gladius was held tight in her hand at her side. "Nothing pisses me off more than wasted rum."

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As Maxine's tornado ripped through the streets, it shook the building Qit was clinging to, and nearly shook the woman loose. Qit tightened her grip, riding it out, not realizing it was Maxine's doing. It was a welcome distraction, and wasn't magic, for it did not set off the chime. But the men within began moving back toward the stairs. Qit slowly inched up the window once more, stepping lightly in as they were distracted. She heard them thunking down the stairs in quick time.

Qit'ria slowly shifted her finger into a claw, and back. The chime rang out from the stairs. One set of boots stopped but the rest kept going. Qit ducked into hiding behind a crate, dropping her breathing and focusing on relaxing her heart to slow its beating. The boots returned, suspiciously. She didn't dare look and give away her position, but her ears were locked in on every movement the man made.

She heard the swish of his trousers, where his thighs met. She heard the boards creak under his weight despite his attempts at being quieter. She heard the bare whisper of his breath. And she heard the slow squeal of metal on leather as a blade was drawn from a sheath. The sound was short, so she assumed to be a knife of sorts. She could feel his presence now, standing on the opposite side of the crate she was hiding behind.

He stepped past the crate, his body language showing his bloodhound like demeanor, his need to determine where that magic was coming from. Qit heard the door slam downstairs as the soldiers spilled out into the street, chasing after what had caused that disturbance. The man continued forward, heading toward the window she'd crawled out, and back in through. Qit slowly rose to a crouch. She didn't bother drawing a weapon, she knew she didn't need one nor did she wish to give away her position just yet.

Much like a cat, she walked softly behind him, rolling heel to toe to maintain her silent steps. She kept close, holding her breath as she managed to get within a foot of him. She was watching the veins in the left side of his neck and his ear on the same side closely. She saw the ear twitch as he stepped closer to the window. She instantly side stepped to the right as he looked over his left shoulder. Clearly he'd heard something. But now he saw nothing.

As he turned back to the window, Qit's fist punched a spike through his neck. His eyes turned toward her as she held him there upright, blood starting to gurgle from his mouth. There was nothing but pure hatred in those eyes. She slid the spike out of his neck, and he fell to the floor, bleeding out almost instantly. She kicked his body over, seeing a necklace with a slightly glowing stone. She yanked it off, tossing it on the floor. She slammed her heel down on the fragment and it shattered to dust.

She sauntered over to the side of the building where the disturbance had come from, seeing Mack and a hefty amount of soldiers. Seemed her friend could use some help. Qit was always happy to provide. She ran to the previous window, sliding it open, and began the climb upward to the roof. It was arduous because of her injuries, but she flopped over the roof's edge, alone up there. She walked to the edge as she drew several spears, leaning them against the edge. Several in a row.

She returned to the beginning and hopped upon the edge, balancing precariously. It was necessary to get a good eyeline on the targets chasing after Mack. And so, Qit ran, ignoring the burns in her feet as best she could. The spear in hand was thrown at a man on the ground. As soon as it left her hand, she was grabbing one of those she'd setup. It too was thrown down at another, just as the first one struck him in the back of the shoulder. She continued sprinting along, throwing spear after spear, hitting several targets, and missing a few others. But most importantly, she created confusion in the ranks, and split their attention, as many turned back to see why their companions were falling. Thinning the herd for Mack. The final spear was thrown at Mack herself, embedding in the road ahead of her.

It was a subtle message, perhaps too subtle. Qit was leaving and was telling Mack to do the same, and wishing her the best. Splitting up was safer for them both. So the direction Mack went, Qit fled the opposite, across the rooftops. She knew Mack would be fine. She didn't put her trust in those who were so weak as to die this easy. This whole section of city was in chaos, and that suited Qit just fine. For there are few that are more annoying to track and chase than a pissed off Becomer.



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"Defiance won't save you, mage bitch," one of the ashcloaks bellowed with his shield presented before him. He walked out of the house with two men at his heels using him for cover. Pretty soon a small assembly had come to his side, the burning office emptying as the flames took hold. Each looked hungry for blood.
"Mage?" Max repeated with disgust. "I'm not a mage, you thick twat." Confusion surged through the small crowd. The Mantis members looked to one another with drawn brows.
"Nice try, liar," the shield-bearer barked. His men seemed to refocus at the depth of his tone. "You're dead either way."
"Maybe," Max conceded with a shrug. She pointed her gladius briefly toward his chest. "But you first."

The shield-bearer shouted his battlecry and spurred his men to charge with him, slipping an axe into his hand as he advanced. Max fell into a defensive stance and rushed to meet them. The first man planted his feet, presented his defense, and swung his axe for her head. Max beat it sidelong and sent her foot into the shield. He stumbled back into one of his men behind him, and the ex-convict busied herself dealing with his more balanced brethren.

Her gladius punched through the throat of the second to reach her. Her left hand shot out to grab the dying man by the armor, spinning him, and throwing him into the soldier making for her flank. The enemy's spear plunged through his friend, giving him pause long enough for Max to attack from behind her organic barrier. Her sword plunged through the spearman's clavicle. As he fell, the shieldbearer found his bearings in time to watch two of his men die. He gave a shout and swung wildly, forcing Max's attention.

She gritted her teeth and parried his swipe. He rewarded her with a shield slam that nearly knocked her off her feet. She didn't have the time to stand and fight this idiot. The Mantis were beginning to swarm, their numbers organizing rather than falling into disarray. The veil of a panicked crowd was slipping away as time ticked by. Opportunity to escape was closing. She turned and slammed her fist into a soldier who tried to catch her flank. He fell upon the ground as the shieldbearer lunged forward. Max slipped off center and swung her sword against the side of the shield. His arm swung wide with the force, and her gladius slipped into his exposed side. The man coming to aid him was downed by a javelin a trill later.

Surprised, Max turned to find Qit'ria on the roof with a collection of weapons at her disposal. The ex-convict smiled up at her, watching the simple beauty of another javelin careening into another enemy on the ground. She continued on, swinging and cutting through those that came to challenge her. One man at a time, she'd fight her way to freedom. Soon her escape turned to a jog. Her gladius buried itself in another Mantis member. Then a javelin slammed straight into the ground before her.

Maxine's stumbled back, brow furrowed. She looked from the weapon thrown at her to the roof. She found the Becomer looking back at her, and that's when she knew. She'd seen Qit'ria throw enough javelins. If she'd been aiming for her, she would've been dead right now. This was a parting gesture. Max nodded and kicked her pace up to a sprint through the streets. One thing was for sure, she was going to get as far from this place as she could as quickly as possible. She would see Qit'ria again. That much she was certain. After all, she owed the Becomer for this trial. Her help was something never to be forgotten.

"Happy hunting, friend," she murmured as she disappeared down a slew of alleyways and out of sight.


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Skill Points: +15 (can be used for Becoming)
Magic XP: Yes (Becoming)

Renown: +10 for causing a scene.

Injuries/Overstepping: Yes - fixed with becoming ability Chrysalis later
Wealth Points: None
Loot: +1 Becoming Totem: Thiussum Ithecal

Skill Knowledge:
  • Acrobatics: Running and leaping up a stack of crates
  • Acrobatics: Backhand spring off of a person
  • Becoming - Unleash: Unleashing into bear form midstride in order to tackle
  • Becoming Form: Thiussum Ithecal
  • Becoming Ability: Devour
  • Detection: Watching the muscles of the arms telegraph an attack
  • Detection: Maxine's scent
  • Strength: Breaking down a door
  • Tactics: Make false trails obvious
  • Thrown (Javelin): Spinning into a straight line throw
  • Thrown (Javelin): Spinning helps to increase velocity of throw
  • Thrown (Javelin): First throw is distraction, second is for real
  • Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Kicking an Ithecal in the face
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  • none requested.
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Skill Knowledge:
  • Acting: Faking a Last Stand
  • Leadership: Giving an Ally Battle Plans
  • Resistance: Fighting Through Lightheadedness
  • Resistance: Wading Through Sewage
  • Stealth: Hiding Behind a Door
  • Stealth: Killing Quietly
  • Tactics: Attack When They’re Distracted
  • Tactics: Providing Distraction
  • Chrien Ability - Twister: Spreading Fire
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Wouldn't want to get on the bad side of either Max or Qit.... or the shock-and-awe Ithecal Yari band, so it was a fair match-up that could have gone very poorly if Max and Qit hadn't teamed up together. And they got found so quickly too! This seems like the great start to a wonderful friendship, even. Hopefully they run across each other again as time goes on.

Max is impressive at trash talking and even more impressive at running, chopping fingers off... and also killing. I enjoyed the descriptions of Becoming from both sides of the narrative, as well. Qit is highly skilled in combining tactics and abilities available to the domain, so it was fun to read the creativity there, but at the same time, she is still apt with javelins so it makes for a nice blend.

You both traded the scene off to one another in a way that flowed naturally and kept things moving forward. There were some great lines such as: "Captain, why are you naked?" and "Nothing pisses me off more than wasted rum."

Excellent job the both of you and enjoy your rewards!

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