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蛇 Vhalar 23rd, 718 蛇
蛇 Mood: Delighted, Thrilled
蛇 Current Thought: This is gonna be good
蛇 Current Theme: Tsukimi


蛇 The look on the young viper's face was anything short of the sheer delight, looking at all the little lambs who came to slaughter. Grin wide and eyes smiling maliciously, Dosan bounced around his lord, a childlike glee in his attitude.
"I don't have much time, I need to prepare."
he spoke, eager to get suited up and prepared.

Approaching the arena in the garden, he found the place where his weapons where being held. He was stripped down to a pair of leather trunks and was given a leather chest piece which covered the upper half of his abdomen. Looking over the well-crafted steel, he slipped the foot grieves on, making sure the cords and straps were tautly secured and wouldn't come undone from the fight to come. Then came the claws, a servant helping secure them on his hands as well.

Armed with his weapons, Dosan looked around, sizing up his competition. Among the group he was fighting in, there were four of them, three men and one woman, and she looked to be the fiercest on them all. The others were, however, a little harder to read.

The first male, a redhead, was shaking, so bad in fact it looked as if he was having a seizure. He was indeed nervous, the shifting of the man's eyes, how he jumped when someone moved or looked his way. He would be an easy fight, but boring as well.

Then there was a big brute of a man, calluses on his hands and feet, which Dosan could only guess that he was a hard worker, and quite the laborer. The other male was the hardest to read, his facial features calm and collected, but he kept gazing out at the archway. If Dosan knew any better, he would almost assume the man was looking for someone.

Turning his head, he looked, and who was coming from the dance hall, none other than that noble lady, and her escort. Dosan looked back at the man, then began searching for where his master had gone, finally finding him, propped up on one of the pillars. He assumed his lord noticed as well, but brushed what he saw off, his excitement running rampant as the true fun was about to begin. 蛇

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nce again, the clear chime of stricken glass resounded through the cool stone of the crimson-lit garden. The excited murmuring of those gathered quickly died down into soft, rustling silence, as a man stepped forward from the mass of bodies. He was tall, elegant, and bore a striking resemblance to the Duke Morose – a son or brother, surely. His eyes scanned the crowd, lips turned in a knowing smile. With a nod, he drew breath and his audience held theirs. “Shall we play a game?”

Collectively, they – those that spoke Vahanic – replied with an amused, “And what game shall we play?”

With a gasp of mock shock, the man shook his head, hands upon his hips and expression now a wide grin. “Why, a sport of sorts!”

“And what sorts have you in mind?”

“Blood and battery, of course!” Here, the audience broke into laughter and applause, murmurs here and there mingled together in general noise that slowly died down as the man raised a hand to still them. “Tonight, blessed by the crimson lights of the Wounded God’s gifts to us, I offer up to you all an exhibition of entertainment.” Polite applause. “Now as with all good things, they come with time.” There was a general nod throughout the crowd that, yes indeed, they agreed with such a statement. “So, as an appetizer might tempt the palate, so too will this bout whet your appetite for what is to come!”

With a grand wave of his arm, seven torches were lit at once by seven servants, filling the courtyard with light and electing a gasp of pleasant surprise from the onlookers. About ten wide strides across, the circular arena was twenty shallow steps down below the natural surface of the earth. There was room enough to manoeuvre, but the space was limited in design to force those who stepped into the ring towards aggressive rather than defensive tactics. Each of the seven gathered combatants stood by their own corresponding torch, but it was where their similarities ended.

The speaker stood at the northernmost end of the arena at the top of the descending steps. Directly in front of him stood a demure, dark, crop-haired woman in dark leathers. She held her curved sword comfortably, easily, and her steady, dark gaze suggested it wasn’t the first time she’d faced others in such a fashion. She was the shortest of the competitors, standing no taller than five feet, but that didn’t seem to trouble her.

To her right quaked a young, scrawny man with bright red hair that rivalled his torch’s flame. He was dressed simply – cheaply – in ill-fitting leathers. In his hands, he gripped his shoddy metal spear so tightly his knuckles trembled white. His pale grey eyes darted about in his sunken sockets, panic and anxiety sloughing off of him in such quantities one could almost smell his fear.

To his right, large enough to obscure his torch’s light completely for those observers positioned opposite him, an impressively built mountain of a man stood hairy, muscled, and fanged. His wrists were bound with heavy looking iron shackles, though they weren’t attached to anything at the moment, and his clawed hands flexed and relaxed in time to his breathing. He wore only a pair of tight-fitting leather trousers and wielded no weapon. Standing at what was, at least, seven feet tall, by far the most physically intimidating of the newer arrivals, his lack of weaponry somehow made him seem all the more dangerous rather than what one might expect of someone unarmed. His eyes, almost black, were fixed upon the woman, who, in turn, stared right back, unintimidated in the least.

Next was another, taller woman who was a sizeable six feet tall. Her entire head was shaved, leaving nothing but skin that had been inked with a snaking, crawling pattern that was not dissimilar to the creep itself. She was clothed in thick, crimson robes, though from the bulk of them, it was suggested there was an armour underneath – most likely metal. She held an iron, spiked mace in one hand and a sturdy shield of the same in her other. Though she too seemed experienced enough, she eyed the nervous man with a very distant echo of her uncertainty – and she seemed to make it a point not to even chance a glance at the towering Lotharro at all.

Directly below where Mathias and Liliana stood, he couldn’t make out the details of the man’s face; his hair, however, was of a chestnut brown, cut long, and tied up near the back of his head to stream down in a waterfall of curls. He was armoured in leathers as well, and he held a dagger in each hand. He stood somewhere between the nervous man and the woman with the shaved head in height, but no one seemed to be paying him much attention at all.

At the next torch, a twitching, grinning man stood at the ready, two slender axes in hand and wearing little more than the cloth rags one might find on any Heap on the streets – only, his clothes were clean and just vaguely reminiscent of the stench of poverty that most associated with such garb. He was slightly balding – from mange, it seemed – and his dark, mousy hair was left in patches about his scabbed skull. In spite of his state of dishevelment, there was something in his pale green – almost yellow – eyes that was decidedly disturbing – and dangerous.

Finally, as Liliana had predicted, the Duke’s man stood by his own torch, leathers and greaves and an odd, impractical looking pair of clawed weapons covering his hands. Dosan’s excitement was clear – and Mathias had no doubt the man was Quacian born and bred. Though Liliana didn’t say anything, her own dark eyes were fixed on Dosan, lips turned in a slight curve of amusement as her gaze took time to flick towards the Lotharro and back.

“Seven,” the speaker began, holding up a hand to quiet the chattering speculation of the audience, “Will dance for you all tonight. If one remains? That lucky winner shall progress to this evening’s main event, which, I assure you, will be absolutely delicious.” Again, there was a brief rise of voice all various levels of excitement, but they quickly died down as the man waited for silence before continuing. “Now, I am certain you are all quite bored of a simple, bloody death match of skill and luck and chance, no?” He grinned wide at the mixed replies. “A game is hardly a game without rules, though, can we not agree?” The general acceptance of his statement presented itself in a wave of nods and shrugs.

The servants who had lit the lights now pulled wide leather straps from around their arms, holding them high enough that most could easily see them.

“Our first rule for this evening is each combatant must wear a blindfold!”

The was a general sense of excitement coupled with laughter at that.

“Our second rule,” he raised another finger, and the servants, who had just finished tying the blindfolds about their respective combatants – save the young woman who had been paired with the Lotharro who still struggled to communicate to the large man what was happening – produced small glass vials filled with a clear liquid. “Is that each of the seven will be completely numb to pain.”

This elicited a far more surprised round of whispers among the party goers.

“And finally,” the man folded his hands behind his back, smile wide and eyes glittering. “A select few of you were given yellow ribbons upon your arrival at this party. When you cast the ribbon into the ring, the combatants will stop their fighting and you may request a single of the seven to be repositioned as you like.”

Amusement swelled, and, rather than whispers, loud hearty questions were asked of neighbours, everyone eager to know who might hold so much sway over the exhibition.

All combatants drank from their vials as they were handed to them – the Lotharro was given a mug of it after several more servants had worked together to wrap several blindfolds around his head – and each took their ready stances as the servants hurried out of the arena. Though there were still those chattering away, most of the audience had quieted enough that the man seemed content.

“Now then,” his voice grew loud and booming. “For the Wounded God!”

All gathered, Mathias and Liliana included, roared back, “For the Wounded God!”
OOC Note: For this fight, please keep Dosan's actions limited to a single action and reaction without definite outcomes, as Mathias will be interferring in the fight.
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蛇 Vhalar 23rd, 718 蛇
蛇 Mood: Delighted, Thrilled
蛇 Current Thought: This is gonna be good
蛇 Current Theme: Tsukimi


蛇 And so with the clinking of glass, the real fun would begin. The announcer was just as grandiose as those in attendance, and upon looking at the party goers, Dosan's face turned sour. Such vile beings making others jest for their own amusement.

He couldn't fault them however, he was just as bad if not worse, as he was a fledgling monster, in search of bloodshed and carnage. This game would give him the thrill he would be looking for, and he wasn't going to squander it. If it meant being on display for filthy pigs and their friends, then so be it.

Dosan spaced out during most of the man's dribble, his attention focused more so on his lord, and see if he was watching. If there was any noble he wanted to see him, it was Lord Detlev and the sheer excitement of knowing he was watching gave Dosan the best confidence boost ever. His attention was brought back into focus when he heard the word rules.

Blindfolds, numbing juice, and crowd involvement? oh, this was turning into quite the game, and it made the smirk on Dosan's face expand. The viper giggled as his blindfold was put on, and upon drinking the juice from the vial, he could feel the tingling sensation throughout his body. The young viper could only laugh as his nerves were shut down for such a grand event.

"For the Wounded God"
he whispered, trying to remember who and where the other seven were. With the blindfold on, he had no choice but to close his eyes, calming his breath, and opening his ears. "Who will strike first?" he thought, trying to pinpoint locations of the other combatants. It didn't help that most of the noise was coming from the idle chatter in the crowd, but he'd push through it.

As far as he knew it, no one was moving, but his ears upon straining to cut out the words of those watching, subtle winds blowing about, and the flicker of the flaming torches. Sifting through the noise he thought he could hear it. The shuffling of feet on top of the stone of the arena, then the shriek of a warcry of a man with nothing to lose, as the shuffling turned into a run. You couldn't mistake that sound for anything less than a charge.

Running his claws across each other got ready, realizing that the man in front of him was the one moving, using the attacker's own noise to indicate when he was close, and when the moment came he'd slash across was he hoped to be the man's chest. His smirk never left, and he licked his lips in anticipation of drawing first blood. 蛇

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hough he had been the most nervous of all, the red-haired man was the first to charge forward, spear lowered awkwardly as he stumbled over the ground. Both women remained where they were, as well as the chestnut-haired man and the twitching man. The moment the redhead let out his astonishingly loud and throaty roar, however, the Lotharro sprang into action, dashing across the stone and covering the entire length of the arena in a couple of incredibly long, hulking steps. As the spear thrust forward towards Dosan's general area - blinded as he was, the redheaded man's accuracy left much to be desired -, it seemed Detlev's pet was ready, bladed claws sliding over one another in a screech of metal.

As Dosan moved forward, however, the scrawny, spear-wielding twig of a man let out a terrified squeak as the thick, warm hands of the Lotharro close around his arms a trill before he was ripped up off of his feet and into the air. Dosan struck nothing but the empty space in front of him while the Lotharro slammed the redheaded man into the ground with force enough that the those nearest the uppermost steps felt the reverberation of the stone while the rest heard the sickening crunch of bone followed shortly by the panicking screams of the young man. Both women remained where they were; the woman with the shaved head frowned while the dark-haired swordswoman seemed keen on the sounds of tearing flesh that started up in the centre of the stone ring as the Lotharro became to cleave out large swaths of flesh from his squirming, expiring plaything.

The audience erupted with roars of delight at the astounding brutality. Liliana raised a brow, lips curved in an expression of pleasure, but she did little more than clap politely. "That one," she nudged Mathias with her elbow. "Make certain he knocks the grin off of Detlev's little jester."

Mathias nodded his understanding but made no promises. Though his ether burned cold against the underside of his fingertips, there was only so much he could do to direct the flow of combat without blatantly interfering. While the two woman and chestnut-haired young man stayed in place - much to the growing annoyance of the spectators-, the twitchy man had started forward, steps deliberate and carefully placed, axes held at the ready, as he crept along the edge of the area towards Dosan, using his foot to feel were the steps began and his memory to gauge where it was he needed to go to get to where he wanted.

As the Lotharro let out a bestial roar - which was echoed by many a laughing man in the crowd -, the twitching man darted forward, axes swinging through the empty air, on target to collide with Dosan more with his body than the blades themselves. Mathias was careful to watch the pair, ether ready to interfere should a well-placed shield be enough to confuse the dark haired man and create an opening for his aggressor.
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蛇 Vhalar 23rd, 718 蛇
蛇 Mood: Fearful, Uncertain
蛇 Current Thought: What is happening?!
蛇 Current Theme: Tsukimi


蛇 It seemed the fates didn't like Dosan all too much, as his first strike was taken from him as the warcry was shattered by the sound of the smashing of flesh and bone. Blood splashed on his face from the impact, and the sound of beastial grunting and the roaring delight of the crowd meant someone else made the first kill. Dosan backed himself against the wall edge of the arena, claws crossed in front of him.

He needed to remain in control of his wits, but he panicked, knowing full well that Lotharro would be an issue. If he wasn't dealt with he would surely die in this arena and that scared the viper. He needed to keep his distance from him and use his size against to his advantage.

As he inched his way further from the beast of a man and his unfortunate victim, he contemplated his next move. As his mind raced he felt his arm lower, as if something was on it, pushing it down. It was a subtle blunt feeling, but it happened again, from his right side.

He didnt know if it was a spectator interfering with one of those ribbons, or a combatant, and not know was dredging up the already building fear in the snake. He wanted to get as far away from whoever it was and fast, and would bring his left claw over the right, in hopes to slash at whoever was there. In a game like this, there were no chances taken. 蛇

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athias found he didn't need to do much of anything at all. The twitching man, after bouncing off of Dosan's right, corrected himself and instead swung down with force a second time. It didn't connect completely, but a sizable gash was left behind, dripping wet and red. The crowd cheered again, and the Lotharro roared triumphantly in return. Mathias noticed the twitch of muscles long before the action itself was taken, and, in the short time it took for Dosan's claw to swipe blindly at the twitching man who as readying a second strike, Mathias' ether slipped through the air, an invisible torrent of minuscule spheres that solidified in a small shield about the size of his own hand directly in front of the sharp metal claws of Dosan's chosen weapon.

They collided with the air, providing as much give as might a suit of iron, while the twitching man's axe continued its descent, a second in his other hand close behind.

The dark-haired woman finally chose to make her move, darting forward towards the Lotharro's booming voice, lips twisted into a hungry, excited grin. Her sword pierced forward in a thrust, and while Mathias had no doubt she had been aiming for the beast of a man's chest, she still managed to sink the blade deep into his thigh. After a trill, she pulled away, hastily shuffling backward while she let the tip of her sword scrape against the stone.

The chestnut-haired man remain where he was while the bald woman had begun to circle around the arena, shield raised and mace ready, but clearly lacking the intent to join into the fray.

No longer moving, little more than a torn and leaking sack of skin and flesh, the red-headed - or, now more accurately, red-bodied - man lay still where he'd been slammed onto the ground. Legs twisted into an unnatural position and mouth gaped but soundless.

With another roar, the Lotharro swung a massive, burly arm at the dark-haired woman, but blind as he was, he missed entirely as she retreated. Distracted from his pummeling, the mountainous creature charged after the woman, focus pointed not on the woman herself, but the scraping sound of the metal upon stone.

"What a fool," Liliana muttered as she shook her head in annoyance. "I have yet to find one of those disgusting beastmen to possess even a modicum of common sense. Really," she continued, rolling her eyes. "It is so obviously a bait."

Whatever the woman had planned, it was interrupted by a sudden, ecstatic scream from within the crowd, rising up over the general chatter in a shrill, rapturous note that lasted several trills - long enough for a young woman to cast herself down the steps, tripping and tumbling, to land with a solid thud upon the cool, smooth stone. Before anyone else could react, there was the sound of heavy fists twisting weak flesh, followed by an alarmingly loud crack as the Lotharro snapped the woman's neck. For a moment, there was utter, confused silence, but the Morose family was just fast enough to swiftly nip whatever panic might have been in the bud.

"Suprise!" The same young man spoke out once more, arms spread wide and expression entirely void of any uncertainty. "In a twist of chance, Ulthar the Lotharro will be progressing to the main event for catching our little dove!"

Liliana raised a brow, as did many others, but after a trill or two, applause slowly started to eek its way out of the hands of those who much preferred the idea of everything being choreographed rather than what was, potentially, a murder. Within the next handful of beats, the arena was filled once more with cheers and shouts, some choosing to chant the grinning, bleeding Lotharro's name while others already had begun to guess at how long he might last among the truly trained.

Mathias, however, had shifted his focus from Dosan's pet to the crowd at large, gaze sharp and searching, as his ether disappeared from the arena and, instead, began to swirl around himself and his charge. The air was thick with the electric scent of ether, and he had no doubt the woman had thrown herself to her death upon the whim of some mage. The reasons were unimportant, and though he doubted Liliana was in any real danger now that the combatants had had their blindfolds removed and wounds starting to be tended to, he leaned closer to her and whispered, "Perhaps it is time we depart, my lady."

"Magic?" she hissed back, her own eyes narrowing with suspicion at those around her as bodies began to shift and voices rise in conversation.

"Undoubtedly."

Dark grey eyes stared steady for a trill or two at the people around them before she nodded, slowly. "I expected tampering, silly pranks." She waved a hand dismissively at no one in particular. "If this is the game they would like to play, I shall recuse myself from the field."

"Leaving as well, Lily?" Gabe, smile more a thin mask over worry than the bright, glaring confidence of before, seemed to materlize out of the shifting walls of fabric and flesh, voice low and soft. "You would not mind a third, I hope?"

"Absolutely not. You are more than welcome to accompany us." Her lips turned in a playful smile, though it only managed to just brush against her eyes. "In fact, I insist."

"Well," some of the light returned to Gabriel's expression. "If the lady insists..."

Mathias nodded at the pair of them. Both Gabriel and Liliana walked ahead, hand in hand, while he followed behind, nose to the air and eyes sweeping the faces they passed. He was not the only one; the Avriel, the white-haired woman, the lanky and the handsome man, as well as the red-haired woman all seemed to be on alert in their various ways as he picked them out of the crowd. Some of them noticed, others did not, but he and the two nobles were not the only ones to make a casual, laughing retreat from the garden. Most claimed they were feeling peckish, wishing to pick at the food inside. Others commented on how very late it was getting and how they should be heading home. Fewer, brasher individuals simply declared they were bored and upset with the manner in which the contestant was chosen and wished not to linger any longer.

Whatever their reasons, a sizeable portion of the guests, Mathias and Liliana and Gabriel included, took their leave of the manor.
OOC: Okay! Feel free to finish up whatever you like or continue on for however long! When you're ready to submit it let me know and I'll send in my knowledge!
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蛇 Vhalar 23rd, 718 蛇
蛇 Mood: Upset, Confused
蛇 Current Thought: Well that was a bust
蛇 Current Theme: Tsukimi


蛇 When he struck all felt was a hard impact, which was odd as he could have sworn something had hit his arm. What was even odder was that he could feel the cold sensation, as if something wet was on his skin. Jumping back against the stone wall he brought his arm to his mouth and gave it a lick.

It was blood, the wet feeling he was feeling was blood, and he was assured that someone attacked him. "Fuck", he muttered to himself as he was trying to keep the distance from whoever it was who attacked him. If he was struck from the right, then why didnt his attack work. What the hell was going on?

Things weren't really looking up for Dosan at all, and with the cheer of the crowd, he knew that another would be dying soon. There was no time to overreact, and because he was certain someone attacked from the right, he lunged forward again, sending his clawed left hand into something. Whatever he hit was solid, but not like before, maybe he hit someone, he hoped he did.

Straining his ears, he listened for the sound one would make if they had been attacked. No scream, no shrill, but a gurgling & muffled sound. Wherever he hit it must have been a vital spot. Call it lucky, but it was definitely a kill, the wet spray of blood splashing on his face.

Licking his lips he took in the taste, the metallic flavor of the crimson liquid, and smiled. It was his first kill in a very long time, and he was delighted, ecstatic even. But sadly he couldn't enjoy this moment, as a shrill came from the stands.

It caught the attention of everyone present, and the sound of a body hitting the stone arena could be heard and felt in that silence. Coupled with the ripping and shredding sound of flesh and then the snap of bone, Dosan could guess that brute got a hold of whoever fell into the arena. And then just as fast the lotharro broke the woman's neck, the game was over.

Wrangled by attendants, those that still lived were treated, blindfolds coming off. It was rather disappointing for the games to have ended as they did, but it couldn't be helped. The antidote administered, Dosan could begin to feel the pain of the blow he had suffered, he could see it now, the gash on his arm.

He smiled at it, seeing it as a badge of honor, and looking to the stands, he scanned them to see if his lord remained. Sadly it would seem he may have left, or went back to the bar. In any case, Dosan was happy with the way things ended. Once patched up, he found his way back to the party.

He was in no shape to do much more and decided that watching the machinations of those who remained. 蛇

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Exotics{Claw Grieves}: Are good for close quarter combat
Acrobatics: Balancing on balcony ledges
Acrobatics: Stretching before combat helps keep ya loose
Acrobatics{Spins & Twists}: Dancing with spins and twirls
Endurance: Dancing take a lot out of you
Resistance: Holding your liquor
Stealth: Melding in with those on the dance floor
Stealth: Using high places to avoid being seen
Stealth: Listening for Reactions to One's Own Noises
Stealth: Tracking Important People
Detection: Picking out a warcy over an arena of cheers
Detection: Feeling pressure on your body when numb
Detection: Picking a specific face out room of people

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Mads

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XP: 15 (not for magic)

Renown: 10

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Knowledge

acrobatics -
following the movement of someone one is in physical contact with
timing one’s movements to a beat
catching food mid-fall

discipline -
needing orders only once
allowing oneself to defer to someone else in power
the appraising gazes of nobility
not letting one’s personal ideologies get in the way of professionalism

endurance -
following the orders of unbearable superiors
dancing
bumping into another dancer
eating rich food

stealth -
using magic to subtly interfere in a fight
blending into a crowd by chatting and making small-talk
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Ok wow this was a long thread! There was a very real discrepancy in the number of words between the two of you. Mads had a lot of NPCs to deal with, and it was very well written on both your parts. Dosen seems to be quite the emotional one, and I have to commend you both on staying true to your pcs. Mads, I haven't given you any magic XP because I simply wasn't aware of anything you've done here which stretches your character in any way. Namely, I'm not sure that he learned anything about magic from this thread. Please do drop me a PM and explain what I'm missing if I am, but the lack of requested knowledge is a very big clue. Also, Endurance is a physical skill and so I've moved one of your knowledges to Discipline, as it wasn't appropriate in the Endurance skill.
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