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26th of Vhalar 718

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26th Trial, Vhalar, 718a
Bolstrum
11th Bell

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"Mister Francis? Mister Francis, can you hear me?"

It was a few moments before he realized he was being spoken to. It wasn't a physical frailty, more a mental one. He couldn't stop staring at... that spot. That place. The chair was gone, probably burned. The desk had been scrubbed, the floor even more so. He was certain the ladies had been so diligent that at least three or four layers of wood had been stripped out completely by their brushes. Everything that stank or hinted at death had been removed. It was just an empty office. The green leather couch, the drinks trolley, the polished oak furnishings, they were all the same. Beyond the glass, the warehouse was already running at full tilt, as if a recent pair of murders had not happened.

Everything was as it was. As it had to be. Yet every time Francis closed his eyes, he could... he could see him.

That morning. The red and the white. Of blood and bleached skin. Then they'd found Pelham and-

"Sir?!"

"What? Hmm? Oh, oh, sorry, Miss Kronti," he rubbed his forehead and realized he'd been standing next to the chair for quite longer than was normal. "I was... I was miles away. In my head, I mean."

The woman smiled sympathetically. Poor man wasn't quite ready for this. Him and Mister Yancy had been quite close, as far as she could tell. Always beavering away together, totting up numbers and doing business and such. He'd often wondered if there was more to it than just business, but it wasn't her place to say, oh no. She was an honest woman and gossip like that was beneath her.

Wouldn't surprise me, though.

"Mister Francis," she said gently, moving a little closer and patting him on the back. "It's just a chair. Yer gonna have t'sit in it some day."

"I know, it's just..." His mouth moved and the words didn't come. Another sympathetic smile and curl of the lips. Finally Francis just shook his head. "Give me a moment, please?"

"Of course, sir."

She was out the office and behind a closed door before Francis felt safe enough to let out a whooshing breath of relief. It wasn't the murder. It wasn't even the body, the sight of it, of them, when they'd found Pelham and what was left of his skull. It was the fact - not the suspicion, or the musing, the fact - that Francis knew he'd been behind this.

And Mary. Don't forget her.

He didn't. He couldn't The thought was enough for him to cast off his superstition and slump into the chair. The poor girl. Her only crime was to be attached in some way to that thieving... man (cursing did not come easily to Francis, even confined to his thoughts), and she'd died for it. Another suicide, apparently. That made two in the space of as many days, and one of them committing murder beforehand. Francis was no underworld operator, but even he smelled something distinctly fishy.

Which he preferred not to think about, because he had a pretty good idea who'd been behind it.

The little man hadn't been seen again. Kasoria, was his name. The one that had chatted so briefly and bluntly with him. He hadn't seen him after that, and he knew the last caravan to Etzos had a quiet, polite traveler among the passenger list. Not named Kasoria, though. But Francis guessed the man wouldn't travel under his own name. Nor highlight his business with brazen murder.

But a suicide, though...

"Fates help me."

He clasped his head in his hands and muttered the words to the dead wood of the desk, elbows braced on it. He hadn't killed Mary, or Pelham, or Mister Yancy. But he'd brought Kasoria to Bolstrum, through his letter to Mister Vorund. He'd made the argument, iron-clad and definite, and... and what had he expected to happen? The question made his head come up from its depressed slump. Yes. What had he expected? Was he a fool? No. Not stupid or naive, either. He did not lie to himself, nor shy away from his failings.

"You knew this would happen," he whispered, and noticed this was, in fact, quite a comfy chair. "They were thieves. Thieves die. And Mary..."

That one stumped him again, but not for as long. An assault unprepared for would knock a man on his arse, but after that first time he grew wiser. He knew the pain and the shape of it, before it sprung against him. So that guilt did not cut as deep, and he simply shook his head, without an answer and strangely without regret.

"He knew who he was stealing from... and you knew who you were working for."

Whispers vengeful and mocking buzzed around his mind at the words, but he batted them away with a suppressed snarl. This was the past. He would not be ruled by the mistakes of his master, transgressions that had got more than just him killed. Mary would be alive if not for him, and so would Pelham. All this blood and sadness and horror, it was down to Mister Yancy, and that man was gone, dead, deceased-

Replaced.

"Miss Kronti?"

The older woman smiled brightly when she came back in and saw Mister Francis behind his desk, and beginning to fill it with paperwork.

"Yes, sir?"

"Bills of travel for the midday expedition arriving today, please. Time to get back to work."

"Right y'are, sir!"

She bustled off and Francis managed his first smile of the day. He reclined back in his chair, that seemed to massage his thin shoulders as they touched them. Looked out the window and the double doors and the wagon-packed road beyond. Somewhere, far down that road, was a man with blood on his hands. That worked his evil will, and would get away with it.

But that wasn't Francis' problem. The running of a business was.

May you never damn return, Kasoria.
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About a trial's wagon ride north, men coarser and less restrained were passing the time the only way one could on a caravan. Namely, jawing away like seagulls over a dead whale.

"Fuckin' tragic, s'what it was."

"Wot, that lawyer? Seemed like a wanker, when I met 'im."

"Naw, that crumpet, y'knob! The girl!"

"Wot girl?"

The reader further down the covered wagon turned another page. A soft, gentle sound. A crisp rustle. A flat sigh as it settled again. Then he went back to scanning the pages... and listening. He heard the driver groan and launch into as lurid a recounting of what the cleaning lady he knew had told him: that her daughter had gone around to Mary's and screamed her fucking mouth coarse after finding her in the tub. Stiff and lifeless and drained. Razor in the tub with her, slices up her arms.

"Poor fuckin' girl," the guard with the crossbow propped up on his knee said. "I saw 'er once a' twice. Lovely-lookin' girl. Fuck would she wanna do that t'herself fer?"

"Woman, mate. Fucked if I know what goes through their 'eads."

Then the conversation turned back to the Main Event from a couple of rials ago, and the little man with the book listened even more carefully. No-one paid him much mind. This modestly-dressed fellow with a full beard and a full head of hair, tied into a straight, simple ponytail behind him. He'd been reading for a while and disturbed nobody. His voice had been clipped and somewhat cultured, like an accountant, almost. Maybe that explained all the reading.

"Can't imagine Old Man Vorund'll be happy when he hears about it."

Mister Vorund, you cretin.

"Aye, well," there was the unmistakable sound of tobacco juice being launched into the air. "Not much he coulda' done, was there? Some cunt workin' for you turns out to be a thievin' cunt, an' all, well... saved 'im the trouble, I suppose."

"An' 'ee topped that bloke workin' for 'im, too!" The Guard snorted and scanned the horizon once more. Which wasn't that far away, what with the woods they were passing through and all. "Murderer an' a thief, not t'mention thievin' from Bangun Bloody Vorund. No wonder 'e scratched 'imself."

There was a short, nasty chuckle that drew Kasoria's attention for a moment. It spoke to him of more than just idle musings, but experience.

"Aye, well... like I said. Saved 'im the job."

The Guard didn't answer right away. Kasoria could have smiled at that. Vorund didn't hire morons for guards in any of his businesses. It would be veterans or nothing, whether it be fields of battle or gutters of squalor. Either way, they'd proven themselves, and those sorts of men learned to listen and learned the players, not just how to swing a sword.

The Guard looked quickly over at The Driver, and chose not to commit too much.

"Can't be blamin' him fer those ones, anyway."

Kasoria frowned. Those ones. The emphasis alone was almost an accusation. He'd have to make a note of that man, listen for a name... but maybe not. Men jawed on the road. They said stupid things. Nothing worth passing on, until it was. And he had little else to but listen, and wait, and read. He turned a page of his book and started a new chapter. Seventeen trials, give or take. Plenty of time to devour this one.

"Good book?"

Oh, for fuck's sake...

"Excuse me?"

The lady opposite him was keen, that was for sure. He was tempted to switch back to his harsh, grating Oh'Pee accent, but... damn, he was committed now. She nodded to the thing in his hands. "Good reading?"

"Oh. Yes. I haven't read it before, but it's good, so far."

"What's it about?"

How about you let me keep reading and fucking find out?

Kasoria swallowed his tongue and kept the polite smile on his face... and closed his book with a tiny internal sigh of sorrow. Some fucking people. But he had to humor her. Couldn't snarl and snap, that would look out of place, and he was naught but a mild-mannered clerk, heading back to The Big Rock. She looked at him with those same blue eyes that the girl had, days before. The comparison struck him like a fist, just for a moment, and he had to swallow quickly before he continued.

"Well, it's quite a fetching read..."

He talked. He explained. He carried on and like most things, once that first jolt of commencement was out the way, it came easier. Those eyes did not return to him, nor the gushing look that begged him to help her. She was dead and buried by now, found by a shrieking maid and taken for... what he could only think of as "disposal". She was dead, after all. Just a body. Just a thing empty of life.

Her troubles were over, and she'd not bother him from the other side of the Crossing. Kasoria would honor what he'd taken from her, and not pester a soul that couldn't hear him.
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The Mild-mannered Gentleman with the book

Points awarded: 10

Knowledge:

Acting: Adopting a "Middle-Class" Accent
Deception: Traveling Under a False Name
Disguise: Playing the Quiet Bookworm
Intelligence: Just Shut Up and LISTEN
Philosophy: The Dead Don't Hear Us
Politics: Resolving a "Problem" Without Causing a Scandal

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Not Suspected for the Deaths of Yancy, Pelham, and Mary
NPC Vorund: Doesn't Hire Amateurs As Security for His Businesses

Magic: No magic exp

Other: N/A

Notes:
Quite fitting for an epilogue, I must say. I particularly enjoyed the Francis part, as I do love me some symmetry. End like you started: with the instigator. Personally, I kind of feel the Kasoria post afterwards breaks that, but it's equally well written, so I don't mind, and putting it before Francis' part wouldn't work that well, I think. Still, I do feel like "May you never damn return, Kasoria" is a real strong ending line, much more so than Kas' thoughts on the dead.

In the end, it's just preference, I suppose.

Nevertheless! Great work, as expected!

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