Ozein Branwick

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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

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Ozein Branwick

Ozein Branwick

Before you start!! You might want to read through Idalos History to give you an idea of the world in which your character resides.
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Name: Ozein Branwick

Race: Human

Date of Birth: 30th trial of Ashan, Arc 696

Marks: None

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent =Common. Broken = Rakahi


Appearance

Ozein has a large build, with all the characteristics of a strong warrior. His face has a rugged handsomeness to it, accentuated by his raven black hair.

He has well defined muscles, easily enough to oust an average man in a wrestle, but not quite so strong as to intimidate trained soldiers.
His body is filled with scars of past fights with brawlers in The Pits and hunting trips gone bad.

He usually wears loose clothes over simple light armor. His wrist protected with bracers and his knuckles protected with hand wraps.
His sword, Soulsliver hangs at his waist, highly decorated and well maintained.
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Personality


He is a calm personality. He isn’t exactly the stereotypical jovial Rharnian, but isn’t moody or grumpy either.
He has the passion, or madness, of battle in his eyes.
This passion drives him, and makes him stand out amongst others.
He likes to drink, but mostly avoids it as he has a relatively low tolerance.
He speaks as little as required, but when he does, the he chooses his words carefully to have the most impact on the situation, whethe to inspire friends or intimidate foes.
He has a very strict moral code, one which he enforces on no one, but others may become subject to.
He is obedient to law, but holds his own feelings of morality above anything else.

Things <PC > likes


He loves fighting in all its aspects, but never engages in needless fights.
He holds physical prowess in high regard, as one can be gifted in swordsmanship or politics or anything else, but physical prowess requires the same amount of effort to build and maintain.
Physical strength is the one place where all are equal, and is where his unmatched tenacity can triumph.


Things <PC> dislikes


He hates the idea of depending on anything other than his own strength to survive.
He despises those that live their lives on the backs of others, those people for whom life was handed freely.
And above all else, he absolutely hates those who abuse any form of power.


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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

History


Ozein never knew either of his parents very well. Being born to an unexpected union of Lightning Knight and Thunder Priestess, it came with the territory that they would be in harms way.

All that survived of their place in his life were the stories told by his Uncle Erond. Stories of battle and wits, of lightning and blade clashing against claw, fang, magic and evil. Stories he looked up to, and even wished to be part of.
As a result, Ozein idolized his parents, even though he never knew them.
His Uncle Erond was an Ex-Cavalry Knight. He’d survived countless raids and campaigns, and had plenty stories of his own to share.

When he was just six years old, he asked his Uncle to train him, to teach him to be a warrior so that he could join the Knights someday.
It was a decision that he would have to endure for 3 hellish years.
His Uncle trained his body, pushing his physical power and endurance to its limit.
He trained him in how to survive the wilderness, How to hunt and how to train his physical strength.
Day after day, he was taught to endure gruelling training as his physical toughness and basic techniques for the use of his muscles were beaten into him.
'Breathe as you move! Don't stop breathing. Don't hold your breath' would echo in his mind, even in his sleep.

However, Erond never taught him how to use a sword, as ‘his basics were still weak’. At Ozein’s request, however, Erond taught him how to brawl, in order to defend himself from the odd bully or street mugger.
Most importantly, he taught him the principles of being a true warrior. It, in Erond’s words, ‘Ignited the soul of the warrior he inherited by blood’.

Erond was retired, but still continued to train and fight, brawling at The Pit or participating in the odd tournament at the Lightning dome.
Such a life, fighting in and out of the arena, could not go on for long, and he eventually was killed in a tournament.
Ozein was not sad or angry. He felt a pang of loss, but did not allow it to move him.
Because in his final moments, Erond was more than happy to die. Erond had always expressed his desire to die on the battlefield, not in a bed, gasping for his final breath as old age finally took him.
Erond was a warrior in death as he was in life. This steeled Ozein's resolve.

When Erond's will was announced and his property was divided, Ozein found, among other things, a sword called Soulsliver.
It had been a gift Erond was planning to give, to signify that he was prepared to learn how to fight with a sword.

More than swords though, Ozein continued to brawl. He turned to his fists as a means of life, as his Uncle had done to support the two of them.
It was a testament to the will and courage of the late warrior, one whom he would not easily forget.

Erond Branwick


Memory NPC
Name:Erond Branwick
Race: Human
Date of Birth: 73rd Ashan , Arc of 645
Skills: Teaching:10 Longsword:20, Strength:30, Brawling:20 Hunting:10 Trapping:5 Field Crafting:5
Appearance: Large, With strong muscles and a bald head. Despite his age, he was still looking quite strong. A scar runs across his left eye. His left eye is murky, barely able to see
Personality: Typical Rharne, except somehow even more energetic. Adheres to his own 'Warrior's code'. Follows his own rules before anyone else's.
Relationship to PC: Uncle, Mentor and Guardian to Ozein
Anything: He spent most of his time earning money by fighting in the tournament. He was killed in brawl by accident in one such tournament.
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Skills & Knowledges



Skill Total Points Proficiency
Blades (Longsword) (8/250) Novice
Hunting (10/250) Novice
Strength (FT) (25/100) Novice
Field Crafting (10/250) Novice
Brawling (25/250) Novice
Discipline 3/250 Novice


Knowledges

Stength

  • Strength: Slow breathing during rest.
  • Strength: Conditioning the body.
  • Strength: Putting your strength into a movement
  • Strength: Holding yourself ready for Impact

Brawling

  • Brawling: Dirty fighting is an acceptable strategy
  • Brawling: Anything can be a weapon

Discipline

  • Discipline: Working diligently
  • Discipline: Speak with intention.

Non-Skill

  • Race:Biqaj
  • Race:Human
  • Creation Legends:Human
  • Customs and Traditions:Biqaj
  • History:Rharne
  • Location:Rharne
  • Layout:Rharne
  • Customs & Festivals:Rharne
  • Laws:Rharne
  • Immortal:Ilaren
  • Immortal:Faldrun


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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Skill Point Ledger



Here is where you record all the skill points you receive (Startup XP, CS Approval Rewards and, of course, Thread Reviews!) and all the points you spend on your skills. Again, below is an example which you can edit.

Thread or Skill Name Points Acquired Points Spent Running Total
Unarmed Combat (Brawling) [RB} 25[RB][/td 00
Starting Package 500050
Blades:Longsword ..545
Strength ..25 20
Hunting..1010
Field crafting..10 00
Discipline(Prophet Approval)..3 00
Longsword..3 00
When you want to put another row in there, just pop the following code in after the last /tr] and before the /table]

Code: Select all

[tr]
[td] Link thread or Name of Skill [/td]
   [td]  Point Adjustment[/td]
      [td] New Total[/td]
[/tr]
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Marks



This post will record any mark (Immortal Blessings / Curses) you might accrue as a PC.

A full list of Blessings & Curses can be found here
A Guide to Religion & Marks can be found here

When you are first awarded a mark, the awarding Prophet will give you the code to put in here.
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Possessions



Here you list the possessions from your Starting Package and anything else that you've bought during startup.
You also are allowed 1 x treasured possession. This must be written into your backstory somehow and can be worth no more than 30gn

Useful Links
The Price List here
  • Longsword; Has the name ‘Soulsliver’ engraved on one side of the scabbard and blade, and the words ‘May the blade be as strong as your spirit’ on the opposite side of the scabbard. (Prized Possession)
  • Leather Gauntlets
  • Chainmail
  • Traveller's pack(Contents below)
    • Set of clothing: Brown cloak, cotton shirt, pants, undergarments and a pair of boots.
    • Set of Weather Gear: Thick coat, thick fur pants and a pair of boots.
    • One tent (sized to accommodate two people or one person and their possessions.)
    • One riding horse.
    • One horse-pulled wagon (two feet wide, three feet long, two feet deep)
    • 100 feet of rope
    • One tinderbox.
    • A set of six torches
    • One Lantern
    • One bedroll
    • A compass
    • A fishing net or fishing pole with a set of thirty hooks.
    • A blanket
    • Four rucksacks
    • A knife
    • One waterskin
    • One set of toiletries
    • Two rags.
    • Shortbow
    • 12 Arrows
Housing

Living in the outskirts of Rharne in a tent, preferring to live by his own hands than in the aptly named Dust Quarter.
The tent he lives in is large enough for 2 people and his possessions. The tent is is a faded white, bordering on yellow, supported by sturdy wooden poles several inches thick. He constantly shifts locations, depending on the weather, season or his own personal preference.
Often times he lives right outside the city for security and access to resources, but sometimes he may go deeper into the lands, either for the soltitude of training, or to catch and hunt game.
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Wealth Ledger



Here, you record all your purchases - keeping a track of money going in and out of your character's account.
Item Adjustment Total
Starting Package +25gn 25gn
Leather Gauntlets -5gn 20gn
Chainmail -20gn 0gn
Total Currency: 0 ON, 0 GN, 0 SN, 0 CN
When you need to put another row in there, just put this code in below the last /tr] and before the /table]

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[tr]
[td] Link to thread / Item [/td]
     [td] Adjustment [/td]
          [td] Total  [/td]
[/tr]
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Renown Ledger



The person who approves your CS will award you "Starter Renown".

Useful Information : The Renown System Guide: here
Item/ Thread Renown Total
Starting Renown +10 (determined by approving prophet) ...
When you gain more renown, just add the following to the table above, after the last /tr] and before the /table].

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[tr]
[td]Link to thread where renown is gained [/td]
    [td] Amount Rec'd [/td]
          [td] Total  [/td]
[/tr]
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Ozein Branwick
Approved Character
Posts: 4
Joined: Sun Oct 14, 2018 6:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Threads



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