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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: A Choking Incident
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: This is a study thread that I tried to make more interesting than it would normally be. What Doran did requires a certain amount of strength, and thus the last two knowledges are strength knowledges.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: What to do when someone is choking
Poisons: Fuzz
Poisons: Buzz
Poisons: Stain
Strength: Back blows
Strength: Abdominal thrusts

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. Doran saved a child.
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Has Beans?
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards: N/A
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 32
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: A Quiet Corner
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Study thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Logistics: essential for survival
Logistics: choosing safe supply sources
Logistics: making space for experts to work
Logistics: finding an accessible path
Research: looking for patterns
Mathematics: calculating the duration between dates

Non-skill
History: shaped by the person recording it
History: comes in cycles - growth, damage, rebirth
History: Scalvoris: Darbyton is the oldest settlement
History: Scalvoris: Goes back to Arc 198
History: Scalvoris: A rough and inhospitable place
History: Scalvoris: Born of survivors from shipwrecks
History: Scalvoris: Everything strange begins 1st Vhalar
History: Scalvoris: People have travelled to Immortal's Tongue for Scalvoris entire history
History: Scalvoris: Strange swirling lights surrounded Immortal's Tongue from 260-270
History: Scalvoris: Scalvoris Town founded 352 from survivors of 5 wrecked ships
History: Scalvoris: Gunvorton founded 382
History: Scalvoris: Almund founded 500
History: Scalvoris: Pirate Lords arrive 1st Vhalar 616
History: Scalvoris: Pirates Lords meant isolation and silence
History: Scalvoris: Pirate Lords vanish in strange fog on 1st Vhalar 716


Loot: -70 gn, (brick oven), -1 cn (lemon tea)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: no

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: III. Duel/Dual
City/Area: Outskirts of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence and Language

Right! Let's get some gecko-skin boots... and, and to specify, the sub-breed of Ithecal I'm picturing here is a Paltharnum. Thanks, two or three more parts to come!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Primary Weapon in Dual Wield
Blades (Karambit): Secondary Weapon in Dual Wield
Blades (Karambit - Traitor Claw): Only Works When HELD
Endurance: Resetting a Dislocated Digit
Endurance: Breathing Through (Likely) Cracked Ribs
Poisons: Takes Time for Poisons to Spread Through the Body


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ithecals: Gigantic Lizard People
Ithecals: Faster Than Their Size Suggests


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes, but I'll give a full list in the last story in this series
Renown: Nooooot yet...
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: My Father's Eyes
City/Area: Immortal's Tongue
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat: Ranged: Pistol Crossbow: Know what you're firing at
Combat: Ranged: Pistol Crossbow: Steady nerves, steady aim
Combat: Ranged: Pistol Crossbow: The importance of a light touch
Diplomacy: Best way to address an Immortal
Endurance: Hiking distances over rough terrain
Painting: Portraits in miniature



Loot: Purchases: Dog and Locket - 100 nel
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes please. Visiting a shrine, leaving an offering, giving a gift, taking in a stray
Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Unexpected Tidings
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: This thread covers some of the challenges for the challenge event
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Animal Husbandry; Nightpups: need to bond to and learn to trust their owners
Caregiving: the needs of a child come first
Caregiving: children are quick to pick up on things one might wish they wouldn't notice
Cooking; Recipe: Ginger Tea
Medicine: signs of early pregnancy
Medicine; Herb: uses for ginger

Non Skill Knowledges

Ginger: is a plant with leafy stems and yellowish green flowers

Immortal: Karem
Karem: her domains are The Hunt, Survival, and Wolves
Karem: the mark she gives mortals is called Velduris
Karem: she is known as The Great Wolf, The Huntress, Lady of the Hunt, and Wild Woman
Karem: her enemies are Faldrun, Audrae, Ethelynda, and Valtharn
Karem: her allies are Raskalarn, and Aeva
Karem: she is almost always seen with a pack of wolves
Karem: she is a woman of average height with long brown hair that is worn in a braid, and gray eyes who wears furs made from the animals she has killed, and carries a crossbow

Location: Scalvoris Town
Location: Order of the Adunih
Order of the Adunih: located in Scalvoris Town
Order of the Adunih: run by Galena Valed
Order of the Adunih: an outpost one can go to when sick or injured
Location: Library
Library: located in Scalvoris Town

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: possibly lingering discomfort from the medical exam that lasts a few breaks.
Renown: none
Collaboration: no

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Blood Adrift the Ocean Breeze
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Some violent/crude descriptions.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Asher: My Son
Asher: Born on the 24th of Vhalar, Arc 718
Asher: All I Have Left
Quacia: The Harbor

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Where You've Been
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Suggestive language. Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Eavesdropping
Investigation: Staking Out a Marketplace
Stealth: Following a Target Closely
Stealth: Slipping in a Door Behind a Target
Stealth: Wading Nonchalantly Through a Crowd
Stealth: Killing Quietly

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe
Collaboration: No
word count: 57
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: IV. Bleed It Out
City/Area: Outskirts of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Words and Fouler Deeds

Eh... I felt really out of practice with this. It was meant to be me rising to a new challenge and I feel like I phoned it in. Still, I hope you enjoy it, one part left!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Leaping Over a Low-Swinging Attack
Blades (Karambit): Mangling a Kneecap
Blades (Karambit - Traitor Claw): Nullifies Pain of a Blow Received, Visiting It Back Upon the Enemy
Dual Wield: Gladius x Karambit
Poison (Scarf Rot): Renders Sluggish and Uncoordinated Those It Can't Render Unconscious
Tactics: Wearing Down a Larger Opponent


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ithecals: Clawed Hands are as Effective as Daggers
Ithecals: Unbelievable Pain Threshold


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Oh, I'm making a list - will add it to the Request for the last part!
Renown: Waaaaaaait for it...
Collaboration: Nein!
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Before the Trail Goes Cold
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Sugar-coating a Risky Undertaking
Deception: Manipulating a Child
Intelligence: Recruiting an Informant
Intelligence: Letting an Informant Take the Lead
Intelligence: Canvasing a Location of Interest
Intelligence: Offering Coin for Information

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Slight, maybe. For interaction with Mina/the boy.
Collaboration: No.
word count: 67
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