Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Two steps forward, no steps back
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Non-skill:
Rharne: Dust Quarter
Dust Quarter: Sickness of the poor

Skill:
Detection: Hear the poor behind you
Discipline: Follow the right path
Discipline: Maintain personal standards
Medicine: Thin body sign of hunger
Discipline: Speak the truth

Loot: Document of Declaration
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Giving to the poor?
Collaboration: No
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

~ Ymiden
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: WHo Haunts Who?
City/Area: Emea, dream thread
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, I know its not 1500, just lookin to close it out
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Trees above and sea below
City/Area: Emea, dream thread
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, I know its not 1500, just lookin to close it out
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
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word count: 45
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Of Clay and Bricks
City/Area: Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and some (Comparatively) Mild Violence

Flashback thread, with Kasoria making the supremely odd decision to take on a student. No Loot, no Renown, just Lores and XP, please and thankies. Next part coming up after!

Requested Rewards:

Kasoria

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Pivoting and Twisting Away from a Thrust Blade
Detection: Knowing the Sound of a Person Moving Carefully in the Shadows
Disguise: Actually Begging Completes the Facade of Dressing Like One
Philosophy: Killing Is Too Easy
Psychology: Orphans are Prickly about Their Parents
Tactics: Avoid Predictability in Combat
Tactics: Attack With the Light Behind You To Blind Your Opponents
Teaching: Testing How Much a Student REALLY Wants to Learn
Teaching: Don't Rely on Your Teacher; Find Out For Yourself
Teaching: Accepting Your Responsibilities as a Mentor
Teaching: Testing Observation and Memory
Teaching: Strength is Nothing Without Brains
Teaching: Show, Don't (just) Tell
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Spinning Double Kick
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Block a Blade Swing with a Kick to the Inside of the Arm


Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC Maxine: Smarter Than She Looks, Not As Tough As She Acts
PC Maxine: Little Girl Who Wants to be a Big-League Killer
PC Maxine: Improving with a Dagger
PC Maxine: Needs to Controler Herself in Combat


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Knowledge:
Investigation: Asking Around About a Bar
Stealth: Waiting Out of Public View
Tactics: Pausing to Observe the Inside of a Strange Place
Blades (Dagger): Attacking From the Hip
Blades (Dagger): Keep The Dagger in Tight
Blades (Dagger): Keep a Bend in the Arm
Blades (Dagger): Driving into the Belly
Tactics: Aim to Attack the Soft Body Parts
Blades (Dagger): Twist to Enlarge a Wound
Blades (Dagger): Attack the Throat, Kidneys, Liver, Face, Heart, Lungs and Face
Blades (Dagger): Keep the Blade Flat to Go Between Ribs
Medicine: Location of Human Organs
Blades (Dagger): Stringing Attack Combinations Together
Blades (Dagger): Keep a Hold That's Not Too Loose or Tight


Collaboration: Yes
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Random Number Generation
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none requested

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: yes
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Zarzhi
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Silence
City/Area: Maiden's Grief to Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Mentions of blood.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
  • Endurance: Psychological Torture
  • Discipline: Not Caving to Temptation
  • Falconry: Trust between Bird and Master
Loot: None

Injuries/Overstepping: Scrapes, bruises, aches and pains consistent with age. (Mental Trauma?)

Renown: Up to the reviewer! She's just another person whose managed to make the run, though from what I understand, Maiden's Grief is a considerably longer trek.

Collaboration: Nope!
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shouldering the Consequences
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope. It's an old, abandoned thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Forgot what thread was about so no need for knowledges unless the reviewer decides to award some.
Loot: Don't think so.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Probably none
Collaboration: Yes
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Last edited by Finn on Sun Dec 09, 2018 9:01 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 53
Favourite quote:
They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

~ Ymiden
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pants on Fire!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just talking.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Lying about your name
Deception: Lying about your profession
Deception: Lying about your flag
Deception: Lying about your parents tragic deaths
Deception: Lying about types of fish
Persuasion: How to convince the gullible


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Sat Dec 15, 2018 3:48 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 60
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Double Haul
City/Area:
Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned Dual job thread.
Requested Rewards: 15 Skill points
Knowledge:
Loot: Wages
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes



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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Last Changling
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

endurance -
taking a break

intelligence-
gather assets under the guise of being an asset

stealth-
quiet is an acceptable substitute for silent

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: no

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